Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
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Naruto: The past emerges.
The scene shows Michael and Quintrix walking around an endless garden.
Michael: You did well Quintrix.*
Quintrix: Well, Michael...i had to obey your orders afterall.
Michael: Actually you took a long shot here. The Creator was oblivious to my little plan.
Quintrix: To think that you planed all of these...you exploited Lucifer and Vishnu's weak points...
Michael: Actually i never thought that it would work so fine. Lucifer was blinded by his lust for power...but Vishnu...dammit...he was something else. I' amazed that we managed to trick him.*
Quintrix: Yeah...anyway...what's the plan with Naruto?
Michael: Well...he has to kill Sasuke. So, we will torture him until he breaks. We will take away from him everything that he loves and cares for.*
Quintrix: And how do you plan to do it?
Michael: I already dispatched a troop of angels towards Konoha. They should reach it in a couple of hours. Their orders are clear: kill everyone there, except Hinata Hyuuga.
Quintrix: Isn't that a little too rash?
Michael: Rash? We are at war, Quintrix. We cannot afford any mistakes. We have one chance to strike.
Quintrix: And Sasuke? Where is he?
Michael: He should be in Konoha right now...
The scene it's switched. It shows Konoha. A giant crowd is sitting at the cemetery where countless Uchihas and Hyuugas were burried. It's raining.
Itachi is shown sitting in the rain and looking at his father's grave. Shisui lands behind him.
Shisui: Still no news from Sasuke or Naruto?
Itachi: No. Naruto was chasing after Quintrix when he was last seen. And Sasuke simply vanished after he defeated Neji. Nobody knows what happend to them.
Shisui: We must find them, Itachi...how are Hinata and Sakura doing?
Itachi: Both determined to find them. I don't know Shisui...i don't knoe where to even start looking for them...Minato sent notes to the other Kages. Nobody saw them.*
Shisui: And you...how are you doing?
Shisui: You're not fine, Itachi. Fugaku just died dammit!
Itachi: He died like a true shinobi. I'm sad, but i'm also proud of him. He died protecting Konoha.
Shisui: And now...you're the leader of the Uchiha clan.
Itachi: Yeah...and Hinata of the Hyuugas. He can have peace with her. She is a friend for us. But my main concern is that something strange it's going on. Both Naruto and Sasuke vanished...and it feels like something it's coming after us. I don't know what's going on, but i have a feeling...a fear deep inside me...that we won't be able to fight whatever will come after us. That's how i feel Shisui...i'm scared knowing that we lost the two people who could hold out everything. That we lost our protection, our power...our friends...
Unknown voice: Then, why don't we end your misery?
Itachi instantly turns around enveloped in his Susano'o only to get throwed away several meters. Shisui adopts a battle stance and face two people. The first one is tall, blonde, with long hair and hazel eyes. He wears a blue garb with a tree design on it. The second one is shorther, with red eyes, purple hair and the same outift.
Shisui: Who are you?!?
Blonde tall guy: My name is Nathaniel.*
Purple hair guy: And I am Ramiel.
Shisui: And what are you? Gods? Raiden's servants?!?
Nathaniel: Raiden's? No, Shisui. We do not serve Lucifer.
Shisui puzzled: Lucifer?!?
Ramiel: You didn't knew? Raiden is Lucifer. That's his true name. Lucifer Morningstar.
Shisui: Then who do you serve?
Ramiel: We serve Michael.*
Itachi's voice is heard.
Itachi: Get down Shisui!!!
Shisui throws himself on the ground just a moment before a giant wave of black flames hits the duo.*
Itachi lands near Shisui and helps him get up.
Shisui: Itachi?!? What are they?
Itachi: I don't know...
Suddenly several shinobis lands near them. The panel shows Jiraya in Sage Mode, The Third with Enma summoned, Minato with his kunais in the hands, Tsunade with her forehead seal gone, Kakashi with his Sharingan revealed and Udon with his Sharingan.
Itachi: Theres no need. They died.
Nathaniel's voice: I wouldn't be so sure, Itachi.*
The duo comes out of the flames unharmed.
Itachi shocked: Nobody walked out of my Amaterasu unharmed before! What are you?!?
Ramiel: We are angels. We were sent here by the archangel Michael.*
Udon: Angels? And do you expect us to belive that?
Ramiel: Belive what you want. The truth it's one. You cannot harm us.*
Kakashi: Only if Naruto or Sasuke were here...
Nathaniel: Naruto? He didn't stand a chance against Michael.
Minato shocked: What do you mean?
Nathaniel: I mean that he is currently our prisoner. Now, tell me...before i will wipe Konoha out...where is Uchiha Sasuke?
Itachi: I wish we knew...
Nathaniel: They are telling the truth. They don't know where he is.
Ramiel: So he is not here. Well then...we will keep searching for him. But before that, we have clear orders to kill everyone here. So...should we start?
Itachi: If you think that it will be that easy...
Ramiel raises his hand.
Ramiel: Actually i think so.*
A powerful white beam emerges from his hand towards the group.
Minato shocked thinking: That's Light release!
The panel shows the beam closing in to the group. Suddenly a man lands in front of the beam and simply absorbs it with his bare hand.
Nathaniel: Who are you?
The panel shows Zero covered in a white light, standing before the Angels.
Zero: It seems that Michael thinks that he can do whatever he wants.
Nathaniel makes a step forward, towards Zero.
Nathaniel: I asked: who are you?
Zero looks at his with piercing eyes.
Zero: You don't recongnize me, child? It seems that you lost your faith in me.
Nathaniel and Ramiel instantky falls down to their knees, bowing before Zero.
Nathaniel: The Creator!!!
Zero: Exactly. Now tell me...why did Michael sent you? To kill these people? Well i won't allow it.
Ramiel: I'm sorry Father...but Michael will...
Zero looks at Ramiel and the Angel bursts in flames, being instantly turned into ash.
Nathaniel: We are sorry! We are truly sorry!
Zero: Why should you be sorry for? You just followed your orders. Ramiel instead tried to stand up here. He got punished. Go back to Heaven and warn Michael that i'm coming home soon and i am dissappointed with him.
Nathaniel: Aye Father!
He instantly vanishes in a burst of white light.
Zero turns around and looks at the stunned group. He waves his hand and all of them falls to the ground uncouncious.
Zero: Hmpf...they won't remember anything.
The panel it's switched. It shows Sasuke held by chains. His members are each held by a chain. He is suspended in the air, surrounded by fire and screaming decomposing bodies.
Suddenly a gorgeous woman appears next to him. She is brunette, tall and has deep black eyes.
Sasuke: You're here to torture me?
Woman: Indeed. Raiden sent me here.*
Sasuke:And what's his gain if he tortures me?Obviously you cannot kill me. Otherwise Raiden would be exposed to attacks. As long as i live he lives.
Woman: That's correct. But your understanding of being alive it's different than Raiden's.
You can be alive, but having your mind and soul destroyed. Prepare yourself Sasuke. This will hurt. A lot.
Sasuke smiles: Go for it. I'm used to pain.
Woman: Not this kind of pain. I can torture you in every way that i want. Because here, in Hell, you cannot die.
Sasuke keeps smiling: Trust me...whatever you will do to me it will be futile. Oh...and before we start...could you tell me your name?*
Woman: It's Mefisto. But why do you need to know my name?
Sasuke smiles menacing: Because when i will break this chains, i want to know the name of the person who i am going to kill in the most brutal and agonizing way possible!
Mefisto looks at him puzzled. Instantly a knife appears in her hand.
Mefisto: Well...for that...how about starting with your lungs?
The last panel shows Mefisto ripping Sasuke's chest as he shouts in pain, and Sasuke's right hand that slowly manifests a spark of lightning at his fingers.
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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