Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
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Naruto: The Dark General.
The scene shows Naruto and Sasuke facing Vishnu.
Vishnu: Welcome Naruto, Sasuke...long time no see, huh?
Naruto shocked asks: Vishnu?!?...you...you're alive?!?
Sasuke remains silent and surprised.
Vishnu: It seems so. I thought that i was done. But somehow, not too long ago i woked up here. Soon i started watching everything. I saw that you were prisoner in Hell, Sasuke. I had Faust there to get you out of there.And you Naruto, trapped in Heavens. That was a lot harder. I couldn't approach that place to save you. But i managed to talk with Gabriel. I sent him to release you. Then, knowing that the Archangels with notice, i prepared a diversion. I sent the whole army there to clear a path for you. And it seems that it was a succes.
Naruto: But how did you find out where we were?
Vishnu: Since my return...well...let's say that i'm not the same Vishnu that you knew.
Naruto: What do you mean?*
Vishnu: My personality remains the same...but my powers...
Naruto: What about your powers?
Vishnu with a grave mine: I could easily destroy the Heavens and take on the three Archangels all by myself. Livontes represents an ant for me now. I'm above an archangels's power, or any other god.
Naruto: But how were Krishna and the army able to find us?
Vishnu: I told them.*
Naruto: I know that...i mean how they were able to open such a portal?
Vishnu: It's simple...i used the Celest City's power. When i died, i gave my powers to you, Naruto. I knew that one day, the Archangels will hunt you down. Naruto, i thought that you will know until that moment came, how to harness my powers. But they are early...way to early. It seems that Michael resumed his plan.
Naruto: And what's his plaN.
Vishnu : I don't know...
An awkard silence appears.
Suddenly Sasuke breaks the silence, while he makes steps towards Vishnu. His face it's a mixture between sadness, anger, happiness and joy.
Sasuke: You don't know? Are you telling me, that you returned from the death, and the only answer that you have it's that you don't know?
Vishnu with a sad voice: I'm sorry Sasuke...
Sasuke stops exactly in front of Vishnu. He turns his body to the right a little, spins and punches Vishnu right in the jaw throwing him several meters away. Naruto remains silent as he watches Sasuke.
Sasuke shouts: Fuck you Vishnu! We thought that you died!*
Vishnu: Well obviously i didn't die. I'm here to help you.
Sasuke yells: But why now?!? How comes that you're not dead?
Vishnu: I don't have that answer Sasuke.
Sasuke: But what answer do you have?*
Vishnu: All that i know it's that i was sent back. Why, i don't know.*
Sasuke: Hmpf...it's not enough for me Vishnu.
Vishnu: Sasuke...why are you so mad at me? I don't understand...
Sasuke turns around and walks away. Just when he is about to leave he turns around and looks with contempt at Vishnu.
Sasuke: You screwed up. That's why i'm so mad. You kept secrets from us. You dragged us into a war that you knew that we don't stand a chance to win. I was seeing you as a brother ...and you let us down. You sent me against a force that i know nothing about, that would destroy everything that we fought to build. Just because you kept a tiny secret from us, Vishnu...something that you didn't shared with us.
Vishnu: And what's that, Sasuke?
Sasuke turns around and leaves but not before answering Vishnu's question.
Sasuke: That you are an archangel!
The scene shows Michael and Quintrix in a room
Michael: Prepare yourself Quintrix. You're leaving tomorrow with the main army of angels.
Quintrix: Where to?
Michael: Celest City. You will siege that fortress until you find Naruto and Sasuke. You will kill anyone that stands in your path. You will bring them here, and i will Naruto kill Sasuke. It doesn't matter what it will cost the Heavens, you must do it! Oh, and serve me please Krishna's head on a plate!
Quintrix: Fine Michael. You will have your war. I will leave tomorrow morning.
Quintrix leaves the room leaving Michael alone with his thoughts, but Raphael enters holding Gabriel in chains.
Michael: Ah, Raphael. I see that you brought the traitor.
Raphael: Indeed, brother.
Michael looks at Gabriel with contempt.
Michael: Why did you betray us, Gabriel?
Gabriel looks at him and smiles.
Gabriel: Tell me, brother...which one it's the most powerful Archangel?
Michael: Me obviously.
Gabriel: Not alive. From all the Archangels that existed, which is the most powerful?
Michael: Well...i would have to say that it was Vishnu, followed by me, Lucifer and then Livontes.
Gabriel: So, Vishnu is the most powerful.
Gabriel smiles menacing: Is, brother. He is.
The scene it's switched. It shows Vishnu talking with Naruto.
Vishnu: We need the three treasures.
Naruto: What for?
Vishnu: Leverage. With them we can hold on a siege.*
Naruto: What siege?
Vishnu: Obviously Michael won't let the things unsettled. In a matter of hours they will semt an entire company of angels to attack us.
Naruto: How come that you never mentioned about the angels?
Vishnu: I didn't thought that it was relevant.*
Naruto: And look what happend. Sasuke is pissed. He might not help us.
Vishnu: Sasuke is pissed, but not stupid. He will help. I'm sure of it. In the meantime...you and me need to have a conversation.
Naruto: What kind of conversation?
Vishnu smiles: When i sacrificed myself i gave all my powers to you. But after my sudden resurrection, it seems that i have all of my original powers. So...i must teach you how to master the ones that are latent inside you!
The panel shows Sasuke walking on the streets of the Celest City.*
He soon reaches the main gates and spots Krishna standing on. Sasuke jumps several meters and reaches the top of the walls.
Sasuke: How are you doing, Krishna?
Krishna: Waiting for a sign.*
Sasuke: A sign of war, huh?
Krishna: Exactly. The angels won't let us escape this so easliy.
Sasuke: How are they? Besides Vishnu. I never saw one before.
Krishna: Well, you're talking with one right now.
Sasuke makes a few steps back confused.
Krishna: Relax. I'm on your side.*
Sasuke: I don't understand. Why hiding your true nature?
Krishna: We didn't knew before Vishnu returned and revealed it to us. I'm as shocked as you are. But it seems that we are all angels. Sent here by the Creator to protect the timeline of the Earth. He wiped our memories, so we won't mourn after our home. So we would consider this place home.
Sasuke: That's a cruel decision.
Krishna: It's a rational one.*
Suddenly Sasuke looks at the horziont where a thin light is seen. He quickly activates his Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan.
Krishna: What happend?!?
Sasuke turns around and looks at him very seriously.
Sasuke: Prepare the army. They will reach the gates in a couple of hours. The battle will begin soon!
The scene shows Sasuke bursting in Vishnu's chamber.
Vishnu: Sasuke...we need to...
Sasuke stops him.
Sasuke: Another time. Right now we have much more important matters.
Vishnu: What's going on?
Sasuke: The angels. Your old buddies. Are coming after us. They will reach the gates of the Celest City in a couple of hours.*
Vishnu: That's sooner than i expected...
Sasuke looks around the room and spots Naruto lying down on the ground.
Sasuke lashes at Vishnu: What have you done with him?!?
Vishnu: Nothing actually. I started to train him. The powers that are stored inside him are great. He is resting as we speak.
Sasuke: Well then, wake him up! We need him in the war!
Vishnu: I'm afraid that it's not an option. He will be out for the next couple of days.
Sasuke: Are you kidding me?
Vishnu: I'm sorry, but i am not.
Sasuke: Then what are we supposed to do? Can the Celest City stop the army of angels?
Vishnu: Even with all my power, we can hold them out for a while.*
Sasuke: I thought that you were virtually the most powerful creature in existence.
Vishnu: Exactly. It's dangerous to release all my energies.*
Sasuke: Awesome. So...what do we do?
Vishnu: There is another choice? We fight them.
Sasuke: Good, that's what i wanted to hear. How do you kill an angel?
Vishnu: Well...the regular angels can take the same amount of damage as a human being could. The Archangels are the ones that you should be afraid for.*
Sasuke: Good. Then we can kill them. But what happens if they have an Archangel with them?
Vishnu: I step in.
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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