Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
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Naruto: Earth's army.
The scene shows Vishnu, Faust, Sasuke and Naruto in Vishnu's office.
Vishnu: I have something to tell you.
Sasuke: What happend?
Vishnu: I have to leave for a while. Probably i will be gone for two days.
Naruto: And you're saying this to us, because...?
Faust: Idiots. He is telling you this in e eventuallity that he doesn't return.
Vishnu: Exactly. My mission it's extremly dangerous, but has a purpose. If i don't return in two days, it means that i'm most likely dead. *
Sasuke: Who are you going to confront?
Vishnu: It doesn't matter. You will find out after i'm leaving. Faust will tell both of you.
Naruto: You're not telling this to us, because probably you think that we will follow you.
Naruto: It means that you're going after Raiden.*
Vishnu: Indeed. But not after his life. He has something that i really want.
Sasuke: So you don't want us to come with you?
Vishnu: No. I want you Naruto to resume your training alone. You have to "tune " your Sage Mode and Kurama with my powers. If you manage to do it, you will be one step closer to sync your own energy with mine. Sasuke and Faust...prepare the Celest City. You must make this place a fortress. I'm leaving the army's command to you, Sasuke.
Sasuke: But if let's say that you're still alive, but you are unable to return in two days, how should we know that?
Faust: It's easy. Vishnu is using his power to keep me here prisoner. That allowed me to escape the Hell, and actually freed me. If he dies, i will return to Hell immediatly. I will be dragged back.
Vishnu: Faust...take care of them.*
Faust: Aye Vishnu.
Vishnu: Now guys...see you in two days!
The panel shows Raiden appearing before his Master that it's still hidden by the shadows,with Aphrodite on his shoulder. He puts her down as the shadowed figure looks at them.
Master: Great. You brought her.
Master: Rise Aphrodite. And look at me. You're so beautiful.
The godess looks at the man and horror strucks her face.*
Master: Indeed. Me.
Aphrodite: So you're the one who is behind all of these?!?
Master: Exactly. I'm the one.
Aphrodite: No wonder that your pet boy here managed to wreck so much havoc. With you behind the scenes it's obviously what you want.
Master: Oh, you know about the ritual?
Aphrodite: You want to kill the Creator. You need an pure being. Someone who wasn't corrupted. Oh, i know about the ritual. It's a bold plan. I bet that you're not alone in this. No...probably the Heavens are backing you up. Let me guess...your daddy went missing, and your big brother allied himself with you. Michael gets the Heaven, or at least he thinks so, after you both kill daddy. After that,you use the Earth's power, regain your own power, overthrow Michael and place yourself at the top of the world.
Master: Not only beautiful, also smart. Rare combination.
Aphrodite: It's a longshot, don't you think? Even with the Heaven's support...i don't think that Raiden here can fight against your enemies.
Master: Raiden can fight anyone.
Aphrodite: No he cannot. He is not you.
Master: The people knows him as me.
Aphrodite: No Lucifer. He is not you. He is a trick. A gamble. He only pretends to be you. I sensed his smell from more then a 100 miles. That would never happen with you, Lucifer.*
Lucifer: So...she figured it out. Quite a feat. Indeed...i used Raiden as a decoy. I had him pose as me. And he did a great job. Our enemies thinks that he is me. And while he keeps them away, i work on my plan undetected.
Aphrodite: I've heard of your enemies, Lucifer. Uzumaki Naruto, the Kyuubi vessel, a Sage, owner of the Rinnegan and wielder of the Light Release, the Archangel's power. He is something.*
Lucifer: The boy it's a mere bug.
Aphrodite: Hmpf. You are also against the one that the people call " The God Slayer" . Uchiha Sasuke. I've heard that he has quite the connection with Raiden. And the rumor is that he is quite a threat. Even the gods in Olympus talked about the eventuality in which they should interfere and eliminate him. We observed everything. Sasuke's power is growing as we speak. Not to talk about Naruto. They are both at monster levels.
Lucifer: At the right moment, i will crush them both.
Aphrodite: You could do it...if it wasn't for your brother. Vishnu.
Lucifer remains silent.
Aphrodite: I heard that he is back in town. And powerful like hell. He is an one man army.
Lucifer: He will fall. Again.
Aphrodite: Maybe, maybe not. The odds are against you, Lucifer.
Lucifer: I don't think so. Once i do the ritual, I will have more power.
Aphrodite: The ritual requires that you sacrifice a pure being in order to regain half of your former powers. That's why you need me.
Aphrodite smiles: But who says that i'm still pure? You made a mistake Lucifer boy.You assumed right from the start that i was still pure. Uncorrupted.*
Lucifer: What do you mean?
Aphrodite: I mean that you cannot accomplish your plan. Your opet boy, Raiden here...hasn"t found an uncorrupted being. I'm Venus! The Godess of Beaauty and love! I was corrupted and i corrupted many more times then you can think! So your plan failed right before it start, Lucifer!
Lucifer thinking: The woman it's not lying. She lies about the amount instead.I can see in her mind that she was with a single man,her whole life, but i cannot see his identity.It seems that this door it's closed for me. She is indeed corrupted. She is no longer pure.
Lucifer: Then it means that i have no use for you.
Aphrodite suddenly makes a smile in the corner of her lips, but novody notices it.
Aphrodite: You should kill me then, Lucifer.*
Lucifer: Oh...you're so confident. Tell me Aphrodite...who was the man that you were together with?
Aphrodite: So you know. Well...he was my lover for a long time. But his duty called him.*
Lucifer: So he is dead.
Aphrodite: Some say that he is, some say that he has returned.
Lucifer suddenly makes big eyes: Who are you talking about woman?
Aphrodite: I don't feel like telling you, Lucifer.
Lucifer shouts: Raiden!!! Make her talk!
Instantly Raiden tries to grab Aphrodite by her hair, but instead his right hand gets grabbed by an unknown man who just appeared. Raiden looks at the man and the shock instals in his eyes. Aphrodite looks at the tall, black eyed young man and she smiles with joy.
Raiden shocked: Impossible...!!! I killed you!!?
Vishnu: Hello Raiden. A greeting would be polite. Also what kind of man are you that tries to hit a woman?*
Lucifer suprised by Vishnu's sudden appearence maintains his cool.
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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