Originally Posted by KiddJutsu
Ok here we go sir. First off, this sh*t continues to be a new fanfic must read. I appreciate how detailed you were with the fighting. Since I'm used to Vishnu, J_H, & Jericho in the forum its a must that you bring it which you did thoroughly. I like the control Sasuke has with his Blaze element. You expanded on it and it looks like somebody besides Naruto will get a vicious ass whooping from that. And you have Naruto seriously acting smooth as silk. He's not flustered, he's dictating the fight on his terms, and most likely hasn't even brought out the big combinations either.
A few areas I'd recommend from my opinion unless you have another direction in mind:
-Since Hinata is there with the rest of the Uzumaki, Keepers of History, maybe she can get some crucial knowledge and we can see the Byakugan as something more than some super powered binoculars.
-Introduce a special Uzumaki fighting style now that Naruto has his family inserted into the storyline. Kinda like Frog-fu for Sage taijutsu.
-The Sage toads could have a killer combo move with Naruto like Ma & Pa frogs with J-man.
I'm very excited to see your direction. Its 100% different than anybody elses that's been posted and its wide open to so many things.
So when is the next installment sir? I'm psyched for it.
KiddJutsu thanks again for your comments and suggestions….
• When you said that Naruto, “hasn't even brought out the big combinations either.” You have know Idea what is too come…. I have TWO MAJOR battles that I have planned, but im not sure when the story will get to them exactly…
• & the Uzumaki’s will play a role in the upcoming chapter
• I do like your suggestion to have an Uzumaki fighting style and I have thought about doing that myself….However at this time period in the story it will not happen.
• & your idea for “The Sage toads could have a killer combo move with Naruto like Ma & Pa frogs with J-man.” I like it a lot! I have not thought about it, since all of Naruto’s battles so far have not been a huge challenge that Naruto would even need help…. However if you have any ideas on the move you can send me a private message
and I might consider using it….
• & as for my next installment, I will have to take a little break…. But hopefully sometime next week I will have one up….
Thank you again for your comments and suggestions, it is a big help