Originally Posted by Numinous
I know I posted too little to give a real impression of the plot, but I was asking about the writing style and characterization, to see if you guys grasped what I wanted to convey or if you were confused by something.
I like the writing style. I mean for most of us, since we write in the graphic novel/play style, this style definitely makes it easier to read, especially for the transitions between scenes and the dialect and conversations amongst multiple people.
As far as characterization, like I stated, I'm intrigued by Jacob. As for the others, I feel like I can't come to a decent conclusion as far as the characterization, because I don't fully know what you intend for each character. I mean the flashback is what has me intrigued right now, but your intention may be to move the story's present day characters, which really weren't provided with much depth and content.
But based on your past writings, I believe you will write a good, if not great story, with minimal plot-holes (if any at all).