Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The scene it's switched. It shows all the angels lined up in Heavens. The Father's voice is heard.
The Creator: My angels! It's time! The Creation will rise! And i shall name it: Human! Grow and Live!
They all watch, how from bacterias, a human being evolves. A single man appears in front of them. Tall, with black hair and brown eyes.
The man looks confused at the scene. The angels are even more confused. The human being looks just like them.
The Creator: You shall be named Adam!
Suddenly near Adam another human being appears. This time, a woman. With blonde hair and blue eyes.
The Creator: And you shall be named Eve!*
The panel it's switched. It shows Adam and Eve. They are residing in Heaven's garden. Suddenly Lucifer appears next to them.
Lucifer: Hello Adam, Eve...
Adam: Archangel Lucifer!*
Lucifer: I'm here to tell you something...
Eve: What happend?
Lucifer with determined eyes: Why don't you taste the forbidden fruit?
The scene shows a gathering of angels. In the centre are Adam and Eve.
God's voice is heard.
The Creator: You have disappointed me! You should not have tasted the apple!*
Adam: Eve made me do it!
Eve: It was that snake! It was L...
The Creator: Silence! It's your fault! You will be both banished from Heaven! You will go on Earth! And you will work the earth in order to survive! This is my punishment!
The panel it's switched. It shows the Heavens. Several angels are talking.
Angel 1 : The rumors are that Lucifer corrupted Adam and Eve!
Angel 2 : I don't think so. He is an Archangel afterall!
Vishnu heard the conversation. He is shows standing hidden. His face is sad.
The scene shows Livontes, Quintrix and Vishnu.
Quintrix: What do you think brothers? We should go and take the Earth for ourselves!
Livontes: Sounds tempting...but i don't think that Father will agree with our plan.
Quintrix: He has to agree!*
Vishnu: I don't support this idea of yours Quintrix. I'm sorry.
Suddenly Michael lands near them.
Michael: Quintrix, Livontes, get lost! I want to have a chat with Vishnu!
Livontes: I'm his friend. I will not go anywhere.
Quintrix: Me neither.
Michael sis: Fine then. You will both witness this afterall.
Instantly Michael hits Vishnu in the chest and throws him several meters away.
Livontes shouts: What are you doing?!?
Michael: What i have to do.
Quintrix remains silent.
Vishnu gets up and looks at Michael.
Vishnu: I don't understand. What it's happening?
Michael remains silent and he only points his hand at Vishnu. Immediatly four pillars of light impales the boy in the extremities, capturing him. As Michael starts walking towards Vishnu, Livontes lands in front of him, protecting his friend.
Livontes: I don't give a shit if you're an Archangel! Nobody starts a fight with my friend without a good reason!
Livontes makes a complicated handsign and releases from his palm a dark, dense beam. Michael simply deflects it with his bare hand.
Michael: I have a reason. Stand aside or i will make you suffer, Livontes.
Livontes: I don't think so!*
He charges at Michael, but the Archangel simply delivers a powerful punch, throwing Livontes several meters away. The boy tries to get up, but Quintrix appears and stops him.
Quintrix: Wait. Michael has a reason for this!
Livontes: Reason? What reason?!?
Quintrix: A meeting will be called shortly. You will learn there why he is doing this.
Livontes shocked: You...you know about this?!?
Quintrix: Yes. I do.*
Vishnu: What have i done, brother?
Michael lands in front of Vishnu and slaps him.
Michael: Don't you dare to call me brother ever again. Got it?
In the next instant he punches Vishnu so hard that he renders him uncouncious.
The scene shows Vishnu. He is in a cage made of light, floating above the Heaven. Under him, all the angels are gathered. Michael comes in the middle. Behind him are Gabriel, Raphael and Lucifer.
Michael: The Archangels have searched the truth about what happend with Adam and Eve. Who corrupted them.*
Gabriel: After questioning several angels...
Raphael: And analyzing the facts...
Lucifer looks directly at Vishnu. His expression is sad.
Lucifer: We have reached the conclusion that Vishnu has corrupted the human pair to eat the forbidden fruit. His actions determined the fall of the men from the Heavens. He is responsible for this crime of treason! As his former teacher i will execute him myself in three days from now!
Livontes: Treason!?! But...how?!? Why?!?
Quintrix: The ones that represent a menace will fall first. He hated the human race probably. I think that he felt, that our Father will neglect us, now that he has a new toy. And he decided to take the matter into his own hands.*
Livontes angry: I don't buy this! I will stop the execution!*
The scene shows Vishnu in a dark room. He is still held in his cage. Suddenly Lucifer appears next to him.
Vishnu: Master! It wasn't me! I would never do such a thing!
Lucifer: I know. I know that you aren't responsible.
Vishnu: Then why did you convicted me? Why did you not stand for me?
Lucifer: I was the one that accused you in the first place. I even fabricated evidence that are traced back to you.
Vishnu confused: I don't understand...
Lucifer: You're so naive...i was the one that corrupted the humans! I did it! With my own hands! But someone had to take the fall for it. And surely it wasn't me! I hate Father's new creation! I will wipe them out!
Vishnu shouts: I will not let you!
Lucifer: My dear boy...in three days i will eliminate you.*
Vishnu: And i thought that you were so kind! That you were a true friend!
Lucifer turns around and leaves.
The panel shows Lucifer's face as tears are rolling down from his eyes.
Lucifer to himself: I will always be your friend fool!
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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