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Old 08-29-2012, 10:49 AM   #6
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Re: One Piece 679

Needs more Chopper.

This chapter really felt like one of those bad action movies where the hero is running for a closing door and they show him running and the show the door slowly closing then show him running then door closing then running the door then run then door and it basically takes five minutes for what should happen in 30 seconds. Totally could have pulled that a bit tighter together.

Brooke's panic running always makes me laugh though.
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