Re: One Piece 679
Needs more Chopper.
This chapter really felt like one of those bad action movies where the hero is running for a closing door and they show him running and the show the door slowly closing then show him running then door closing then running the door then run then door and it basically takes five minutes for what should happen in 30 seconds. Totally could have pulled that a bit tighter together.
Brooke's panic running always makes me laugh though.
A simple souvenir of someone's kill
And like the sea
I'm constantly changing from calm to ill
Madness fills my heart and soul as if the great divide could swallow me whole
oh, how I'm breaking down