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ACt · 08-29-2012, 10:49 AM

Needs more Chopper.

This chapter really felt like one of those bad action movies where the hero is running for a closing door and they show him running and the show the door slowly closing then show him running then door closing then running the door then run then door and it basically takes five minutes for what should happen in 30 seconds. Totally could have pulled that a bit tighter together.

Brooke's panic running always makes me laugh though.

08-29-2012, 10:49 AM	#6
ACt Heart Wizard Join Date: May 2009 Location: The Halls of Irreverence Posts: 3,286 Thanks: 5,339 Thanked 18,822 Times in 4,891 Posts	Re: One Piece 679 Needs more Chopper. This chapter really felt like one of those bad action movies where the hero is running for a closing door and they show him running and the show the door slowly closing then show him running then door closing then running the door then run then door and it basically takes five minutes for what should happen in 30 seconds. Totally could have pulled that a bit tighter together. Brooke's panic running always makes me laugh though. __________________ It's amazing to me that, unlike in the real world, people on the internet will wear "everyone thinks I'm a moron" as a badge of honour.