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Originally Posted by ACt
Needs more Chopper.
This chapter really felt like one of those bad action movies where the hero is running for a closing door and they show him running and the show the door slowly closing then show him running then door closing then running the door then run then door and it basically takes five minutes for what should happen in 30 seconds. Totally could have pulled that a bit tighter together.
Brooke's panic running always makes me laugh though.
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I would agree Brooke, Chopper and Zoro usually deliver! Luffy is just Luffy so I expect solid humor from him...yeah this chapter felt rushed, it didn't have a flow what so ever..I wanted Chopper to have a few more panels but hey you get what you get.