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Old 08-30-2012, 03:23 AM   #15196
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Re: The Longest Thread Ever v28

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And that's cute Vanity, but you added an extra space. let me fix that for you.
1] Let me*. You forgot to capitalize.

2] You could have even used a semi-colon there, as well. The sentence break would feel less awkward and would read better.

3] Conjunctions like "and" are rarely permitted in formal writing, by the way. I've gotten away with maybe three or four, but I've also written a lot of really fucking amazing papers and have earned it.



4] Also, you used "best" in an objective manner when humor is subjective.
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