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Old 09-09-2012, 10:45 AM   #1167
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

End of flashback.

Vishnu raises his right hand. White energies are spinning around it.
Vishnu: Yama...you...will not...became...an Archangel...not...with me...around...
Suddenly the wind starts blowing harder. It's like a tornado landed in the middle of the arena. Lightnings are seen and thunders heard. The ground is shaked.
The panel shows Aphrodite smiling.
Aphrodite thinking: So this is his real power...finally...
Vishnu points at the sky with his hand as his entire body gets enveloped by the white light.
Yama shaked: What the hell!?!
Suddenly the whole apocalyptic scene stops. Even the wind ceases to blow. The entire stadium is silenced. Only Vishnu's whisper is heard.
Vishnu: Raigan...
And almost instantly the apocalypse starts again. The wind blows powerful than ever, giant lightnings are striking near the arena and inside the arena, and ground gets violently shaked. And just like it started everything stoped. The scene it's focused on Vishnu now. His entire atitude and posture has changed. He is now taking an arrogant and superior pose. He is fully relaxed and confident in his power. Yama looks in his eyes, and shocked he makes a couple of steps back.
Vishnu: Yeah...that's right...
The panel shows Vishnu's eyes. The Raigan manifested inside them for the first time! The lightning pattern is glowing in a gold color.
Vishnu: Light release...blade of void...
In his right hand a light blade appears. But it's different than any light blade ever seen. It's hilt has a hawk head and the guard looks like some wings.
Yama smiles.
Yama: I see...so you have the powers of an Archangel. If i'm not mistaken, you are almost as powerful as Kubera is. Amazing...you managed to hide this all this time. But you see, Vishnu...you have chosen the worst opponent for those powers of yours.
Vishnu: And why is that?
Yama with a menacing voice: Because i can "kill" them!!!
Yama starts emmiting red energy from his body. In dense waves.
Yama thinking: I have to kill his energy. Otherwise, he will defeat me!
Yama shouts: Death release!!! Red eye power!!!
The red glow in his eyes gets more intense as Vishnu slowly starts sweating.
Vishnu: What the hell!?!
Yama: I am killing your powers...that's what is happening!
Vishnu tries to attack Yama, but instead he falls on one knee. He can barely breathe.
Vishnu thinking: Crap! Why i am so tired? Why so sudden?!?
Yama thinking: Those eyes took quite a tool on him. Even though, if i had let him attack me, i wouldn't be standing here right now. I've made the right call...
Vishnu's blade vanishes and so does the Raigan. He falled to his knees. He is sweating heavily. Yama managed to kill his energy.
The angel approaches Vishnu wielding his red energy blade.
Yama: You...have lost Vishnu. You are powerful...indeed. But you falled for my trap. I am the winner. I will became an Archangel. And...i will kill you...
Yama swings his blade towards Vishnu's neck. Aphrodite is heard screaming. But from the arena only one sound is heard. How the blade hit something.

The panel shows Kazer. He landed exactly in front of Vishnu and blocked Yama's attack.

Yama: What the..!?!*
Kazer: Hi Yama. I'm afraid that you're not going to kill him today. Not on my watch.
Yama screams: Who do you think you are?!?
Kazer smiles: It doesn't matter. You will not be allowed to kill Vishnu.
Yama makes a couple of steps back and launches a powerful red beam at Kazer. As soon as the beam approaches the man, slowly, *it vanishes.
Yama thinking: What the...!?! It's just like my Death Eye!
Kazer: Yeah...you see...i'm just like you.*
Suddenly Kazer is surrounded by all the Archangels . Michael, Kubera, Gabriel, Raphael, Brahma and Shiva are looking at him.
Kubera: I'm sorry, but you will not leave this place alive...if you don't tell me who you really are.
Kazer smiles menacing and looks at everyone.
Kazer: Fine. I will tell you. I guess that it's time.
Kazer: My name is Uchiha Sasuke. I'm the current God of Death, wielder if the Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. I am a man that exists outside God's plan and rules for the world. I am the one who will reap your Father's soul at the end of time. That's who i am!
Kubera looks at him and grins.
Kubera: You heard him Archangels. He is a sworn enemy to our Father. We must take him down immediatly.
Sasuke makes a couple of steps back and smiles. Slowly Michael and the others are moving towards him.
Sasuke: I should warn you...Kubera...no angel has defeated me in battle yet. Not now, and not in the future. I am known in my own timeline as the God Slayer. You should be careful where you send your men.
Kubera: I don't plan to kill you. It would be foolish.
Sasuke thinking: Crap. He is not stupid at all. He got it.
Kubera: It would be foolish, because i want actually to know informations about the future. And what other way than capturing you?
Sasuke laughs: Capture me? You think that you can do it? Then give it a try...Kubera. Send your Archangels to beat me.*
Kubera: Everyone...aim for the kill. We must use lethal force. He won't die, but maybe we can put him down.
Every Archangel: Aye, Head Archangel!
Sasuke smiles as he starts taking out his sword.
The first one to attack is Michael. Sasuke dodges the assault, places his right hand on Michael's shoulder and forces him to kneel, because of the power applied. A crack it's heard. And the next moment, Sasuke simply kicks Michael away. At the same time Brahma releases some fire at him, and Shiva a chaos beam. Sasuke dodges the fire, and deflects the chaos beam. He jumps and lands exactlly between the two Archangels.
Sasuke: Chidori Nagashi!!
He releases from his body countless streams of electricity that throws the Archangels on the ground. Raphael places himself in front f Kubera, protecting him and Gabriel rushes towards the other fallen Archangels.
Sasuke: Head Archangel...Kubera...as i told you...i am not here to fight. I just gave Vishnu a little push so he can unlock his potential. But i must warn you...if you dare to touch him...i will kill every one of you. I will burn down the Heavens.
Kubera simply looks at Sasuke.
Sasuke: Now...if you'll excuse me...i have other places to be.*
Sasuke makes a handsign and he vanishes in a burst of black flames.

The panel it's switched. It shows Vishnu in a large council room. In a circle, surrouding him, are all the Archangels.

Kubera: Vishnu. Even though you have lost the match against Yama Dharma we have summoned you here today to promote you to the Archangel rank. You proved yourself to be a valuable member.*
Michael: But, under the condition that you will hunt down the man called Uchiha Sasuke.
Brahma: And you will bring him to justice.
Vishnu looks at every one of them and bows.
Vishnu: I accept the promotion and...the condition.

The scene it's switched. Several years have passed since Vishnu was promoted to the Archangel rank. The whole Heaven is in turmoil. They are all watching the Earth. In a couple of days a huge event will happen. One that will have a great impact on the world. Eve is pregnant. And she will give birth in a couple of hours.

The panel shows Vishnu standing next to Gabriel and Shiva. They are watching from Heavens, on a screen-like device the turnout of the events. Kubera sent two female angels to help Eve. In a couple of hours Eve delivers the first boy. She looks at him and smiles.
Female angel: What shall he be named?
Eve: ...Cain...
A few minutes later she delivers the second boy too.
Female angel: And he?
Eve: ...Abel...
The scene shows the two newborn brothers as they look at eachother and smile. Then the panel shows Sasuke who is hidden in the darkness. He is also watching the birth.
Sasuke to himself: Hmpf...if one doesn't know he could be tricked by this image...Cain and Abel...Faust and Dante...the world will now you both for eternity...

The end.
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