Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Vishnu, excellent writing as always. It was a great read but for whatever reason I was anticipating for fighting. But what this was though was a great look at the proceeding events. I'll restrain myself from questions on the assassination by Sasuke only so you can reveal it within the next chap or two. Your action sequences are so worthy of a read that it's kinda like for me coming Dark Knight 1 & 2. I'm so enamored with the first I compare it to the second which isn't fair because it's great in its own right, just like this.
And this is what always gets me with prequels, except the unbridled action. Action doesn't matter when it comes as long as its epic. I'll also comment that your are making The Maker much more talkative and scheming in this go-round. When do we get more Vishnu/Arch Angel/Death God action sir?
But again, still crazy good bro....
Two fingas like a playa!!