Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The panel shows the Archangel's council room. Vishnu is with Brahma.
Vishnu: They have entered the Heavens. Probably our brothers are fighting them right now.
Brahma: The question is if our brothers can handle them.
Vishnu: That should not be a proble...
Vishnu stops talking because at the same moment Gabriel enters through the wall. His clothes are torn apart, and he has a huge burn in the middle of the chest.
Vishnu rushes at him.
Vishnu: Gabriel! What happend?!?
Gabriel: Vishnu...run...they...are too powerful...everyone...everyone...was defeated...we couldn't stop them...they played with us...run!!!
With those said, Gabriel passes out.
Brahma: We have a situation here, Vishnu.*
Vishnu looks at Brahma shocked.
Brahma: And only one solution. I will confront Kubera. I hope to defeat him and maybe his allied with cease with their attack.
Vishnu: But Gabriel told us to get away!
Brahma: That's what you are going to do? Run?*
Vishnu confused makes a couple of steps behind: I don't know...i don't know...
Brahma: We didn't make you an Archangel to be a coward!
Vishnu scared: I'm sorry Brahma...i...i...am afraid of fighting...that's why...i was hiding my powers back then...because i knew that if i reveal what i can do i will have to fight! And i don't want to fight! I am afraid! I am afraid of not being wounded! I am afraid of not dying!!!
Suddenly Brahma grabs Vishnu by his collar and slams him into the floor. He looks at his with disgust and spits him.
Brahma: So that's your true face...a coward!!!*
Vishnu tries to stand up, but he ends up falling on his knees.
Suddenly a voice is heard.
Livontes: I always knew that he was a coward. And yet, he was the one made Archangel. Is it fair, Brahma?
Livontes: The Heavens have fallen...Brahma. Kubera is waiting for you at the gates. *I suggest that you should go. I will deal with Vishnu.
Brahma: At least i will die honorably. Not like this coward here.
Brahma dashes away, leaving Vishnu alone with Livontes.
Livontes is smiling.
Livontes: How is it, Vishnu? How is it? How do you feel right now? Tell me please. You had everything. Power...respect...the rank of Archangel...that whore of yours, Aphrodite...everything!!! And despite all of these...you are a coward. I had nothing! I was always cast away! Even by our former master Lucifer! You were the one that he trained the most! Not me! It was never me! It was always about you! About what you want!*
Vishnu is almost crying: I'm sorry...i'm sorry...
Livontes: You are crying? You are sorry? Heh...
Livontes makes a spin and kicks Vishnu right in the chest throwing him on the ground.
Livontes shouts: FUCK YOU BASTARD! Don't come at me with such excuses! *HOW DARE YOU TO TELL ME THAT YOU ARE FUCKING SORRY?!?
Livontes kicks Vishnu in the chest again, and again and again. Until he leaves him surrounded by blood.
Livontes gets on his four and whispers in Vishnu's ear.
Livontes: You are not even worthy of killing, you know that? You are not even worthy of dying. No...you will live...with the shame. While i will kill everyone you ever cared about. Starting with that whore of yours, Aphrodite. Then, i will go to Earth. And i will shape it as I wish. You are a loser, Vishnu. A pathetic loser. You are not even worthy of being called angel. So...farewell...coward. Farewell.
Livontes gets up and leave. Vishnu is left crying and surrounded by his own blood. A shadowed silhouette is shown standing on the roof of the Archangel council room. He watched everything. The Uchiha crest is seen on his back.
Sasuke thinking: Hmpf...so this was pre-war Vishnu. He really was a pathetic loser. Well...it's about time for the old man to give him a hand...
The scene shows Vishnu. He is crying, but suddenly *a warm feeling envelops him.
Vishnu: What is happening?!?
The Creator's voice: Why are you crying my son?
The Creator: Tell me Vishnu...why are you crying?
Vishnu: You saw father...what he did to me..to Heaven...
The Creator: Tell me, Vishnu...why do you have all the power that i gave you?
Vishnu: I don't know Father.
The Creator: So you can accomplish your destiny. So you can became everything that you are meant to be.*
Vishnu: Father...i understand that...but i cannot overcome my fear of fighting.
The Creator: Then...let me help you with this...by telling you what will happen if you don't overcome this fear. The Heavens will be burned down. The world will collapse. The human race will be devoured. The Earth will be lifeless. Everything will die. There will be pain and misery. Death, will linger around every corner. If you don't overcome your fear right now...my creation will be forever lost. You must became the man that you have to be my son!!! You have to do it my son!!!
Vishnu: But i don't think that i have the power to defeat Livontes...Father...
The Creator: The power is inside you, Vishnu. You just need to find out how to awaken it!
The scene shows Brahma. He appears exact in front of Kubera. Behind Kubera are Quintrix, Nirriti and Narasimha. Near them lies Yama on the ground. He was beaten by the traitors.
Kubera: Hello, Brahma. As you can see, the Heaven doesn't have the power to stop me.
Brahma: What do you hope to achieve with this, Kubera? Our Father won't allow you to rule the Heavens.
Kubera: Well i don't see him stoping me. I think that he agrees with my plan.
Brahma: You are insane.*
Suddenly a man lands near them. The panel shows Livontes.*
Livontes: Vishnu is done. He is a coward. I didn't even killed him. He is not worth the effort.
Brahma thinking: So the kid it's a failure afterall...
Kubera looks at Livontes angered: I told you to kill him!!! Why did you not do it?!?
Livontes: He started crying! He will not be a problem!!!
Kubera: Fool! He can became a problem! He has the potential to became a problem! Obviously you are not able to take him out. Nirriti! Narasimha! Go deal with him. Kill him and bring me his head!
Nirriti: Aye, Kubera. Let's go Narasimha!
The two leave the scene.
Kubera turns his head and he looks at Brahma.
Kubera: Now, Brahma...farewell...
Before the Archangel coud even react a blade reaches his stomach and impales him. Brahm falls on his knees, coughing blood.
Kubera: Great. Now, Livontes, Quintrix, as soon as Nirriti and Narasimha are back, we are going to work on a plan.
Quintrix: What plan?
Kubera: We have to kill Sasuke too. He could also became a problem!
When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!
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