Fandom Forums - View Single Post - Naruto_605
Thread: Naruto_605
View Single Post
Old 10-10-2012, 03:56 AM   #54
Dagoro
The surgeon of death
 
Dagoro's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Braving the New World.
Posts: 8,831
Thanks: 76
Thanked 7,274 Times in 2,924 Posts
Dagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to allDagoro is a name known to all
Re: Naruto_605

I'm not impressed.

The action gets overridden by the fact that this kid is going bananas over this girl who didn't even know he liked her, and they were fucking 12 or some shit. This is why a lack of build up is fatal, it really robs these situations of the emotional charge they could have had.
Dagoro is offline   Reply With Quote