Originally Posted by nickers
Vishnu, that was outstanding. I'm only sad we won't get pictures of this hehe
Looking forward for next chapters.
Few things on my mind tought, you said it is not Naruto related, but erm.. Celest City? Will be hard no to relate that to your previous fanfic, another one.. Don't know if you will make this fic long or not, but on mangas at least im used to read, the character is not really proficient on anything at all, he builds it, and Claude as you've presented seems like an already well built one.
I'm only thinking that he is not the main one as it'll be Max and the girl. Claude will be those other 2 sensei and they could somewhere on a farway timeline surpass their own teacher since Claude tells the Asclose guy is there to kill the both i just mentioned to make sure his master has no threat on being back
Anyway, looking forward for the next ones, AND for the fics that haven't been finished up by other peeps x.x
Well, i know it's hard to not relate it to my previous fanfics, but it's an enitrely new setup. This is the story that i had in mind before i started the Naruto fanfics. In those i just took elements from this story and adapted it to fit with my previous fanfics. Also, about Claude...my writing style is different than the one used in a manga. Also there isn't a main character. The story will be fragmented between Claude, Arinasa and Max. Each one of them is the main character. Also, here, the plot is much, much more complexe with many twists. Anyway, thank you for the observations, and i'm glad that you enjoyed it.
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