Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Vish, it's not a problem. I appreciate a good character read and yours easily has had the most depth consistently. I feel that if I ask the right questions or give observant critical assessments that its a bigger help to you that way because you get more focused and get ideas. I've said since I came to this forum that my talent is more ideas since my writing is t even worth a footnote. You really develop characters extremely well and I even the hell out of it. So since I like reading it so much my part in this is to help you put out your best concepts.
As for what we have in store for the action, at any point you get off track on the action just lean on your previous fanfic stuff, which is still the damn standard in my mind. But I'm liking coming from a new fresh story concept with tidbits of other manga stories.
Two fingas like a playa!!