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Old 11-26-2012, 01:16 AM   #1327
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Vishnu, amazing story as usual.
Some critics from my side, if it helps:
You must have kept the battle between Robert & Claude bit longer. Or at-least some emotional dialogues The situation was so emotional and would've been really great if it longed for a while. Nevertheless, it was awesome anyway!

In the "Balance of Truth", it was confirmed that Vishnu had an important reason to behave so. And Robert is usually quick in grasping the situations. So, he must at least have got some doubt after confirming that Vishnu has an important reason. He was too quick to try killing Claude after the "Balance of Truth" without any talk-no-jutsu
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