Originally Posted by luffyus
@Vishnu the thing that bothers me is the fact that u continue to call it fanfiction, it is not anymore a fanfiction : CHECK this http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fan_fiction
and you'll see that i'm right and if u and the other guy who like to add his false critics to every prediction/fanfiction still gonna say that i'm wrong then you are hopeless.
Anyway , u should check before insulting a person. you're good at writing but if you would make use of the technical elements of this genre you would get your writings epic.
You sound like that Aman Shahur guy, only you can spell (which is a plus by the way).