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613 - Grand Master Plan Misscalculation
Naruto is shown with all shinobi standing behind him in front of Jyuubi with Madara and Obito standing on it head.
Darui, Kitsuchi, Mifune, Kakashi,Shizune, Shikamaru are slowly approaching Naruto, then stop at Naruto position. Dauri, Kitsuchi and Shikamaru are standing on Naruto left side while Kakashi, Shizune and Mifune are standing on Naruto right side.
Darui(serious look): I am sorry for being late, Naruto-sama
Naruto(suprised): Naruto - sama?!
Darui(smiles): you deserve this title even if you are not Hokage.
Naruto(smiles back): Thank you very much
Kitsuchi: Look like you went through tough battle.
Naruto: Indeed, I am happy you are here.
Kitsuchi: No, I am happy to finally meet our saviour...
Naruto: But I didn't stop Edo Tensei...
Kitsuchi: Yeah, but without you, Itachi could be still under Kabuto control.
Shikamaru: Long time no see Naruto, It looks like you are more intelligent know, hehe
Naruto: Nice to se you Shikamaru too.
Mifune: so you are this destined child, nine tails jinchurki.
Naruto: you can say that, but please call me Naruto.
Mifune: as you want.
Shizune: I missed you,Do you feel good Naruto ?
Naruto: I missed you too, yeah quite good.
Shizune(smiles): Medical team is ready.
Kakashi: now when support is there I wish I have some time to read my book, hehe
Naruto: oh Kakashi, you certainly will have time but now we will take care of jyuubi.
Kakashi: I will follow you ,Naruto
Naruto: It is sad that gokage are not around as of now, but as I said I have plan, so come closer and hear carefully.
Naruto is shown telling his plan to all captains, while All shinobi behind them is wondering what Naruto plan could be. In front of Shinobi Army Madara and Obito are standing on Jyuubi head.
Madara: Hmm..., so ninetails jinchurkii has plan after all
Obito: I wonder, what his plan could be. Should we attack them now ?
Madara: no, let's wait for their attack then we will attack them.
Obito: but we ?!
Madara: Patience, Obito Let's play more before we go to serious bussiness.
Obito: Tsk.., ok.
Naruto finish telling his plan to all captains, so they come back to their battalions of shinobi, then stop. Each captain is calling all his shinobi in each battalion to create ranks of them, then captains turns around, looking forward an Naruto back.
Darui: impressive strategy...
Shi: he has good mind...
Kitsuchi: Hmm..., I am impressed
Shizune: That Naruto *reminding Naruto as child* creates so complex strategy, woow
Mifune: Amazing strategy, he is good strategist.
Shikaramu: I can't believe, Naruto is quite impressive strategist. Looks like this war changed him a lot, he grown up.
Shi: I want to support you Naruto
Naruto: hehe, thank a lot.
Kakashi: I am proud of you Naruto(smiles)
Naruto turns around to every captain, then look forward at Madara and Obito, them smirks.
Naruto: Ok, captains please confirm you and your battalion readiness now
Darui: First battalion is ready!
Kitsuchi: Second battalion is ready too!
Kakashi: Third battalion is ready!
Shikamaru: Fourth battalion is ready!
Mifune: Fifth battalion is ready
Shizune: Medical team ready!
Shi: Sensing squad ready!
Naruto: Ok, let's begin then!
All captains: Shinobi of mist village use Kirigakuri no jutsu !
Mist Shinobis: right!, Kirigakuri no jutsu.
Mist appear from nowhere in front of Alliance Shinobi, covering them slowly. Madara and Obito notices mist appearing from nowhere.
Madara: Mist, so Shinobi of Mist village are using Kirigakure no jutsu, eh
Obito: exactly, they try to limit our visibility and attack as in moment of suprise.
Madara: Interesting, but Jyuubi will clear up this mist.
All aliance shinobi army is show protected by thick mist, which makes eyesight completly useless. Captains continue with plan, following next steps.
Captains: Ok, now Sai creates as many birds as you can, then take as many shinobi as you can create birds, take them with you, a attack Jyuubi from air, so it takes attention to air, so we can procced with next step, understood ?!
Sai: I will do it rightaway! , Ninpou: Chouji Giga!
Sai draw very fast many birds using ink on his special scrolls, while loosing his chakra. After he finishes and is unable to draw anymore. Sai focus his chakra, form tiger seal then birds come to live by begin to come out from all scrolls.After All birds came to live, Sai take some shinobis with himself, so everyone can have one bird for yourself. then they prepare to fly.
Sai: I have done it, we are waiting for signal.
Captains: great, everyone take one sensing shinobi with yourself
Sai and rest shinobi on ink birds: right!
Captains: now go!
All shinobi sitting on Sai ink birds take off and fly high in sky in Jyuubi direction, while Shinobi Alliance procced with great Naruto Master plan, Madara has bored look on his face, Obito is concerned and feel uneasy about this thick mist.
Madara: eh..., I am bored, give litte more time.
Obito: *Something is not right*, Madara, I have bad feeling about it...
Madara: stop complaining..., give them little more time. If they still don't attack then We will begin our assault then.
Shinobi of Amry is shown with zoom on captains and Naruto standing before captains. Everyone turns his sight to Sensing team which has task to inform when Jyuubi will notice Sai and shinobi and begin to attack them, so Jyuubi will turn away his attention from us and focus on flying support team. Meanwhile Naruto sit down on ground in meditation state, Naruto begin to gather nature chakra and recovering.
Back to Madara and Obito standing on Jyuubi covered by thick mist, which limit their visibility.
Madara(unfold his arms): Enough, they don't attack, then we begin our assault
Madara, Obito: ?!
Madara and Obito notice birds flying in sky as rain of shuriken and kunai with explosive notes are falling down at Madara and Obito.
Madara: heh, it looks like they begin...
Obito: It looks like that...
Back to Alliance shinobi army, captains are standing still with Naruto sitting down on ground while meditating gather nature chakra. Sensing team is focused on Jyuubi position and flying team of shinobi position.
Naruto: *I need to recover my chakra...*
Sensing team: ?!
Sensing team: Madara, Obito and Jyuubi caught it decoy, you can begin.
Captains: great !, Now Nara clan please split yourself in four teams then rush to four directions, North, South, East and West and take your position, then wait for our signal
Nara Clan: Yes!!
All Nara Clan shinobi split yourself in four teams, then each team move to take their destinate position, so they surround Jyuubi from four directions.
Back to Madara, Obito and Jyuubi. Madara and Obito notices shinobi flying on ink birds, Madara and Obito order Jyuubi to use it tails to attack shinobi floating in sky. It looks like big monster trying to throw away all flies. Some of shinobi are almost hit by Jyuubi tails but avoid in last second thanks to sensor shinobi being with them
Madara: Attack from air, eh.
Obito: they understimate us.
Madara: hmph, let's finish them
Obito: Kill them all.
Random Shinobi: I am quite good, hehe?!
Sensor shinobi: dodge this now!
Random Shinobi: wow, so close but I am lucky one
Random shinobi 2: monster is quite big, but...
Sensor shinobi 2: look out on your left side
Random shinobi 2: thank for warning
Random shinobi 3: this monster is too slow!
Sensor shinobi 3: watch your back!
Random Shinobi 3: Woah!!!, wow, I survived
Madara: Using sensor shinobi to predict incomming attack, impressive.
Obito: they are flies, besides they are not dangerous for us *wait, could they try turn our attention away from ground, it is prey, Madara at least didn't notice something suspiscious, so*(turns to Madara)
Madara: *looks like they try to attack us undeground or on ground while we will be focused on air, impressive strategy, let show me*
Obito: Looks like mist begin thinner and thinner, it is no more thick as before.
Madara: so they covered area to realize their plan, now they will attack.(smirks)
*I wait for you Alliance shinobi, attack with your full power, then you notice your attack is meanigless, so I can destroy you all slowly or wipe out everyone in on second, hehe *
Back to Alliance Shinobi, Naruto still sitting on ground while recovering , while Captains are waiting for mist to clear up, so they give next order. Mist is clearing up slowly, meanwhile all four Nara clan teams are showed on the of Jyuubi all sides, 100 meters from Jyuubi each team. Jyuubi is shown as big creature, with small team of Nara clan shinobi 100 meters away at West, East, North and South. Then we finally comes back to Shinobi army while mist is about to disappear completly.
Captains: Nara clan teams attack!
Nara clan team first: Kage mane no jutsu !
Nara clan team second: Kage mane no jutsu !
Nara clan team third: Kage mane no jutsu !
Nara clan team fourth: Kage mane no jutsu !
Madara: Signal to attack ?!
Obito: From where ?!
Back to Shinobi Alliance. Naruto still is meditating, while Alliance shinobi army prepares next steps of Naruto Master plan. Captains give new order to earth element users.
Captains: Earth elements users, now it is your turn !
Earth elements users: right!, Earth release: Earthquake !
Earth elments users: Earth release: Giant crater no jusu !
Earth elements Shinobi slams their all hands in ground, creating powerfull earth quake which begin to spread reaching Jyuubi position, making it unstable, then second jutsu cause ground under Jyuubi to cracks, Jyuubi fall down in huge, deep hole with only Madara and Obito with highest part of Jyuubi head with it is eye above ground a little, rest of jyuubi body is all underground.
Last edited by Rikudounaruto; 11-29-2012 at 07:15 AM.