Originally Posted by jekyl_hyde
Just wanted to drop in and say... the little dude is here. After numerous weeks of suffering and bemoaning by the wife, my son is here.
Also, great to see you back N360. Nice turn in the drama between Hinata and Naruto. Just don't get too predictable with it. Also, when you describe a moment such as the ending of this chapter, be a little more descriptive if possible, because that would have been a nice moment if it could have been drawn. But really great to have you back man.
First off, Congrats on the Baby Boy!! & lets hope he is more Dr. Jekyl in him than Mr. Hyde lol.... But I'm getting off topic, So Again Congrats!
Secondly, Its good to be back but as you pointed out I'm a little rusty at being unpredictable, but once i get back into a groove which i hope to be soon i think i will be back to normal.
Finally, can you clarify or highlight what you want me to be more descriptive about in the previous chapter so i can see my error and improve my writing for my continuation, it would be a great help..... But only if you have time.
Thank you for your comments and again Congrats!!