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Old 01-20-2013, 02:06 PM   #81
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Re: Naruto 616

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Originally Posted by ckraizitee View Post
The pacing is so bad I don't understand how people follow it weekly.
OP's pacing is slow but good, I don't understand how people haven't bumped into works of fiction with truly bad pacing to says OP's is bad.

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And about suspension of belief, is it only the good guys that get that? The good guys were just receiving 20million volts of electricity like the man was using a clown buzz glove, then as usual eneru gets some punches and looses.
That 20 million volts of electricity is in the same category as Amaterasu's "hot as the sun" claim: purple prose just to make the user sound cool.



To be perfectly honest, I read OP for the writing and characters and I rarely care for its battles since Oda makes them ridiculous to the point of absurdity in some cases and I when I do care for battles it's for character interaction rather than the action. Maybe if you skip the action and focus only on the characterization and plot points OP will be a lot more tolerable for you.

@Vengeance: Your OP trolling is getting old. I'm disappointed with you applying the same old hook, just dressed differently. C'mon, I know you can troll better than that.
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