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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Chapter Continuation for Page 92
We zoom out to see an Ariel view of Naruto and Sasuke talking and running over to them both. We zoom out further and further and further until we see someone looking at Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke from above on the bridge….We see this person slowly walk away ….
The scene cuts to a room somewhere in the whirlpool village. The room is large and completely dark except for the center of the room there is a circular beam of light and in that light stands Yoko who is looking up
Yoko- as a newly appointed elder I’m here to ask the grand elders for much needed help, I mean I’m here to ask help on the behalf of Naruto
In the darkness can be heard great mumbling from many people
Yoko- I know you have your reasons to not trust him, but he is part of our blood, my family and look what he has done for all of us we are reunited as one..
???- what you say is all true, and yet we do have are reasons
???- and some of us on the grand elders do trust Naruto, it is who he is affiliated with that makes us weary of him…
Yoko- I understand that… but you must come to realize Naruto treats everyone as friend and even family until he is given an absolute reason not to and it is hard to even get to that point with Naruto…
More mumblings are heard throughout the room
Yoko- excuse me grand elders, I do have something else I must tell you of Naruto
???- what is it Yoko?
Yoko- Naruto went to go and speak with the other villages
Yoko- he just got back
???- why did he feel the need to go?
Yoko- to warn them about the sage and and….
???- and what Yoko?!?
Yoko- to question them about our demise…
The room is silent but then a whisper is heard
???- what did they say?
Yoko- Naruto says they truthfully did not know anything, and yet that has caused Naruto to have more questions about … You must tell him what
happened that day!
???- that must wait for now
We suddenly see a figure in front of Yoko and kneeling before the Grand Elders
???- what is the meaning of this KIYOMI
Kiyomi is dressed in warriors attire almost like an armored dress she has the signature Uzumaki Red hair and as her name suggests is a pure beauty.
Kiyomi- excuse me Grand Elders, I came to inform you that Naruto is training with outsiders in our Village as we speak….
???- WHAT!!… YOKO what is the meaning of this…. Yoko leave are sights we will talk about your punishment for you lack of Intel on Naruto’s doings later…
???- but Nothing… GO!!!
Yoko glances over at Kiyomi and then quickly walks off into the darkness.
???- Naruto has gone too far this time
???- but what do you expect, we have prevented him to be trained by one of us, so he has sought other masters to train him….
???- but we have made these laws, for good reason and he still tries to find ways around them and to defy us!!
Kiyomi raises her hand
???- Yes, Kiyomi ?
Kiyomi- what is the reason we have made these laws to prevent Naruto to train with us?
???- Two reasons Kiyomi, One he is too powerful already as he is and ….
???- Two we just don’t know where his allegiance stands just yet….
???- None the less him bringing the outsiders have brought danger to this village
Kiyomi- but Naruto would Never bring Danger to this village on purpose
A large sigh can be heard in the darkness and new voice is heard, a deeper voice
???- We cannot allow this idiot to keep defying us like this we must punish him for his insolence!
Kiyomi- Grandpa Yuu… Nooo!
Yuu- Silence Kiyomi, you know the rules here!
Kiyomi bows even further to the ground and averts her eyes even more…
Yuu- as Grand Master of the Grand Elders I hear by Banish Naruto from this village…..
???- that is going a little too far Yuu!!
Yuu- well you didn’t let me finish, this banishment will be only TEMPORARY… until he is done with his training he will not be allowed back in this village. This is to prevent him from bringing any more attention to us by bringing possible outsiders here to train.
Mumbles and whispers can be heard in the darkness
???- that is acceptable then…
???- I will reluctantly agree to this only if we keep watch over him
???- I second that request
??? – ME too!
Yuu- Fine Fine Fine, we will have someone watch over him… Does anyone have someone in mind, because I will have one of my men do it if there are no objections…..
The room is completely silent but Kiyomi clears her throat
Yuu- what is it now Kiyomi?
Kiyomi- Grandpa Yuu
Kiyomi- I mean Grand Master Yuu, just as some of us don’t trust Naruto, Naruto himself only trusts a few people with his life
???- what are you trying to say?
Kiyomi- if Naruto does not trust the men assigned to watch over him, Naruto will not cooperate and will make your lives a living hell
Yuu- Fine, Kiyomi go bring Naruto to us, I would like to have a word with him NOW
Kiyomi- Of course….
Kiyomi stands up, turns quickly and walks into the Darkness and out of the room.
???- you granddaughter is one smart girl
???- yeah and knows quite a lot about Naruto…
In the Darkness we see an evil grin coming from Yuu
Yuu- well of course she does, that is why she will be the one to watch over his every move ….
Scene cuts to Kiyomi walking fast down a dark hallway mumbling
Kiyomi- it had to be done…. there was no way to avoid it…. I had to tell Grandpa of his actions for the village…But now look what I’ve done…… Im so so SO…..
As she just about to breach the door way the sun hits her face and we can see a tear in her eye
Kiyomi- Sorry, my LOVE…..
Scene cuts to a Laughing Naruto’s Face
To be Continued.....
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