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Old 02-05-2013, 05:23 AM   #15
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Re: Naruto_619
Good Cthulhu, I cringed every time the word "love" sprouted. It's as shoehorned as Hashirama being a proto-Naruto.

Kishimoto, get writing lessons. You desperately need them.
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