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jekyl_hyde · 02-13-2013, 11:53 PM

I did not expect the family tie you threw in there N0360. Really nice.

My one critique would be what happened to Karin during that little squabble? Really liked how you brought the exhaustion part from the clone training in the manga about him fainting when all of the clones disperse. Nicely done dude.

02-13-2013, 11:53 PM	#1389
jekyl_hyde Hunter-Nin Join Date: Feb 2012 Posts: 1,131 Thanks: 662 Thanked 1,122 Times in 438 Posts	Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!! I did not expect the family tie you threw in there N0360. Really nice. My one critique would be what happened to Karin during that little squabble? Really liked how you brought the exhaustion part from the clone training in the manga about him fainting when all of the clones disperse. Nicely done dude.