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Old 02-13-2013, 11:53 PM   #1389
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

I did not expect the family tie you threw in there N0360. Really nice.

My one critique would be what happened to Karin during that little squabble? Really liked how you brought the exhaustion part from the clone training in the manga about him fainting when all of the clones disperse. Nicely done dude.
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