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Old 02-14-2013, 12:17 AM   #1390
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!

Originally Posted by jekyl_hyde View Post
I did not expect the family tie you threw in there N0360. Really nice.

My one critique would be what happened to Karin during that little squabble? Really liked how you brought the exhaustion part from the clone training in the manga about him fainting when all of the clones disperse. Nicely done dude.

Thanks J_H, I'm glad you liked it.


the reason i had Karin get lost during this chapter was i find it hard to write for her all the time & i had so many characters to work with already. So that is why i gave Karin a task that she might not make it back before the chapter ended...
Check out my Fanfiction from the very Beginning on page "37" in Naruto Fan Fiction Thread and it continues on pages "47,49,57,61,62,63,70,71,72"

Thank You and Enjoy
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