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Old 02-15-2013, 10:55 PM   #1392
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Originally Posted by andreyyy View Post
1 hell of a job NARUT0360 , i didn"t expect that will happen so fast ( the Naruto and co "restrain" LOL) and you didn"t let Sasuke rampaging one bit = clever!!!!... the 5 thousand clones , let me tell you that is just AWESOME.....( y always thought that Naruto will have a technique like that( dragon army no jutsu ( wind ) or something like that )... good job AS ALWAYS

Thanks.... you mentioned the speed of Naruto's Containment that is my fault... i feel that the pace of the chapters and action sequences are my major flaws but i'm trying to work on them

Any more thoughts from anyone?? ...... KiddJutsu i'm waiting for you assessment
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Check out my Fanfiction from the very Beginning on page "37" in Naruto Fan Fiction Thread and it continues on pages "47,49,57,61,62,63,70,71,72,90,92,93 ,94"

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