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Originally Posted by Vishnu
And Num, please bear with my Latin fail. I'm trying to improve but honestly i didn't had the time yet.
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If you want some help with the Latin, I'm more than ready to help. Just PM me when you have doubts on it and I'll provide the Latin.
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And thanks for all the observations. I took the advices and started with making a writing plan and put it on paper, instead of relying on the plot that existed only in my head as i did so far.
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Glad I could help. It really helps to write down the plot and every idea you had for it so far, so you can more concisely structure it and see how new ideas fit on it.
Now for the chapter in itself, some questions:
- Is Livontes a new etymology, a misspelling of either Leontes or Levantes or a mix between the two?
- So Faust is the main villain of the new pair and Mephistopheles the sideckick? Curious switch of the duo.
Overall, good return to the fray and I hope to read more from you.
(And you from me 
Kidding.)