Originally Posted by Numinous
If you want some help with the Latin, I'm more than ready to help. Just PM me when you have doubts on it and I'll provide the Latin.
Glad I could help. It really helps to write down the plot and every idea you had for it so far, so you can more concisely structure it and see how new ideas fit on it.
Now for the chapter in itself, some questions:
- Is Livontes a new etymology, a misspelling of either Leontes or Levantes or a mix between the two?
- So Faust is the main villain of the new pair and Mephistopheles the sideckick? Curious switch of the duo.
Overall, good return to the fray and I hope to read more from you. (And you from me Kidding.)
Livontes is a mix between the two. Faust and Mephisto...well about them, nothing is certain. The pair has its own agenda, different than Claude's or Lucifer's. After the battle that will take place in the City during the next chapter, Faust will reveal a bit of his history.
And thank you for the help with the latin. I will PM you when i'm done with the next chapter and require your help, whenever you have some spare time.