This didn't need to take up the whole chapter. Should have been 1/4 maybe 1/2 of the chapter then 1/4 adults fighting and Hashi and Madara stepping in to save their brothers.
Last bit should be going back to Hashirama vs. Madara stand off pose.
Other than that it was okay, shows why Hashi might have spared him at VotE. He still had hope for him and maybe why Madara speaks so highly of him even after coming back from the dead.
Tobirama is a Daddy's boy and uses an arming sword as a weapon,lol.
Last edited by jericho Uzimaki; 03-06-2013 at 04:26 AM.