Re: Naruto 644 For Real Ya'll
Other than the awful pacing and shit, not too bad. Rather pathetic that Naruto had to come up with a fancy bullshit hiraishin trick for his dad because Minato was just too depressed from failing at everything to manage it.
EDIT: Also why did this shit need like 6 pages of explanation when it pretty much made sense as soon as we saw the results of it, yet the natural energy beats itself thing still only gets "meh, guess that's just the way it is?"
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Last edited by AOTKorby; 08-28-2013 at 09:23 AM.