Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
The Death God
*The scene opens with Naruto facing Sasuke with the Shinigami behind him. Sasuke is doubled over in pain as the juubi is trying to take over his body.*
Kurama in thought: I’m sorry Naruto.
*Scene shows Kurama looking defeated.*
Kurama in thought: I’ve let you down.
Naruto in thought: What’s wrong Kurama, we’ve got a job to do!
*Naruto walks up to Sasuke as the shinigami floats behind him. Sasuke looks over at Naruto and sees the shinigami. Sasuke roars, pushing Naruto back. Suddenly the soul arms go after Sasuke, tugging at his soul. The juubi fights back, roaring at Naruto.*
Naruto: Damn… this is so hard.
*Scene shows Kurama sweating.*
Kurama: I’m not holding back from you.
*Sasuke stands up and roars at Naruto.*
Kurama: We need to hurry.
Naruto: I know.
*The scene switches back to Konoha, with the support division and defensive division all gathered around the sensor group. Suddenly the all of the sensor group have grave looks on their faces.*
Tsunade: What is it?
Ao: I sense an evil… a darkness… like no other. And now… there is a… it’s like a nothingness.
Tsunade: That’s probably the juubi.
*The panel shows the constant tug-of-war between the juubi and Naruto. Scene switches over to Madara as he starts to come to, moaning.*
Madara: What happened?
*Madara stands up and looks over and sees Sasuke turning into the juubi. He then sees Naruto, just standing there.*
Madara: What the hell is going on with him? Now’s my chance!
*Madara begins to rush at Naruto with his fan.*
Kurama: Madara is back!
Naruto: Dammit. I can’t really do anything since I’ve summoned the shinigami.
Kurama: Let me take care of him. I owe him.
Naruto: Have fun.
*Scene zooms out showing Madara running towards Naruto, getting ready to swing his fan. Just as he is about to start swinging his fan, a Kurama arm comes at Madara with a rasengan. Madara has to jump and evade at the last minute.*
Kurama: Not so fast motherf^cker!
*As Madara is about to land, the Kurama arm slams down on the ground splitting the ground in the direction of Madara. As Madara lands, the earth shakes. Madara stumbles.*
Madara: I will not be denied.
*Scene shows a closeup of Madara with his rinnegan activated.*
Madara: Shinra Tens…
*Suddenly Madara is sent flying by a punch to chin. Scene focuses on Tsunade, her guards, Shikamaru, Shikaku, Hinata, Sakura, Temari, and Gaara.*
Naruto: What the hell are you doing?!!!!
Shikamaru: We told you, we’re going to Hell with you!
Naruto: No you’re not.
Shikaku whispers to Tsunade: Look at him Hokage-sama. He hasn’t moved yet. Do you think…
*Tsunade sheds a tear.*
Tsunade: Naruto… please tell me…
Naruto: It’s too late for me.
*Hinata looks at Tsunade.*
Hinata: What is it Hokage-sama?
Tsunade giving orders to everyone: We must protect Naruto!
Hinata: Tell me what’s going on with my husband.
*Tsunade looks at Hinata.*
Tsunade: He’s showing how much he loves you… and all of us.
*Suddenly everyone is thrown back by a shockwave coming from Sasuke, as he now has 7 tails showing.*
Madara laughing: You’re too late fools. Once the juubi has taken over Sasuke, and he is under my control, you will have nothing.
*Madara jumps in the middle of everyone as they are regaining their composure and posture.*
Madara: Shinra Tensai!
*Everyone but Madara, Sasuke, and Naruto are thrown back.*
Madara: And now, it is your turn to die, kyuubi boy.
*Madara evades the jutsu just as it is about to annihilate him.*
Madara: Oonoki… I thought you were dead!
*Scene shows Oonoki wearing his battle gear, with blood flowing from a cut above his right eye.*
Oonoki: Not yet, Madara!
*The scene switches to Sasuke’s subconsciousness.*
Sasuke: I’m so weak.
Unknown voice: Yes you are. I can give you power, power beyond your imagination. Just let me out.
*Sasuke starts to walk to the shadowy figure that is shown to be the juubi.*
Juubi: Everyone is weak compared to me. No one can stand against me.
*Suddenly Naruto and Kurama’s voice is heard is Sasuke’s in subconsciousness.*
Naruto and Kurama: Sasukeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
*Sasuke turns to Naruto.*
Sasuke: What is it twerp?
Naruto: I’m sorry that I won’t be able to keep my promise to you.
Sasuke: Oh yeah, what’s that, not bringing me back to Konoha?
Naruto: Not that one… the one where we promised to fight to see who the best is.
*Sasuke is shocked.*
Sasuke: So you’re giving up on me?
Naruto: No… but I need your help.
Sasuke: The all-powerful Naruto needs my help?! Don’t make me laugh.
*Sasuke puts his hand on the key to unlock the juubi.*
Naruto: Madara wants the juubi to take you over, and then he plans to control the juubi.
*A thunderous, evil laugh is heard from the juubi that shakes Sasuke’s subconsciousness.*
Juubi: No one can control me.
Naruto: He’ll destroy everything.
Sasuke: So what?
Naruto: You’re going to let Madara beat you?
*Sasuke glares at Naruto.*
Naruto: Then fight him *points at the juubi*!
*Naruto disappears from Sasuke’s subconsciousness. Scene switches back to Naruto and Kurama.*
Kurama: Think that will work?
Naruto: I hope so.
*Naruto looks at Kurama.*
Naruto: It’s been fun.
*Scene switches back to reality, showing the stalemate between Naruto and the juubi. The next panel shows Madara looking up at Oonoki.*
Madara: Your dance ends here. Banshou Tennin!
*Boulders start to gather and form around Oonoki. Madara turns around to Naruto.*
Kurama to Naruto: If we’re going here, we’ve got to give them a fighting chance once we’re gone.
Naruto: I’ve got an idea.
Kurama: That should do the trick.
*Scene switches back to the stalemate and shows that Naruto is now winning in the stalemate. A roar is heard from Sasuke that is definitely Sasuke this time, not the juubi. We’re then shown both the juubi and Sasuke’s souls being taken from Sasuke’s body.*
Madara: What’s going on?
*Madara switches back to the EMS to read Sasuke and the juubi’s chakra.*
Madara: Impossible! But how????
*Naruto sends one of his soul arms out to Madara. Madara then has a grave look on his face.*
Madara in shock and fear: Impossible!?! What is he doing here?
Naruto: He’s here to take away all of your power.
*Madara switches back to the rinnegan.*
Madara: I won’t let you have the juubi!
*Madara summons the enma and goes after the soul arm trying to pull the juubi and Sasuke.*
Kurama: We’re about finished Naruto.
Naruto sweating: I know…
*Scene shows Madara grab the juubi and try to rip it from Naruto’s soul arm. At the same time, Naruto grabs at Madara.*
*The shinigami goes to cut what souls have been pulled out thus far. You see a trifold panel: one with Madara ripping the juubi’s soul from the pull just before the cut is made, another one of one of Madara’s rinnegans being ripped out and cut off, and the final panel on Sasuke’s limp body.*
*Madara doubles over in pain at the loss of his eye. Naruto falls to his knees.*
Juubi: I’m finally free!!!!
*The juubi leaps away. Hinata screams as Naruto falls over. Sakura is finally able to pick herself up and sees Sasuke’s limp body. Tsunade is crying.*
Shikaku: Inoichi, contact the toads to help us get everyone back to Konoha. We’ve then got to move.
*A sudden crash is heard, and both Kichi and Tatsu are shown around the body of Naruto. Hinata is bent over the body crying. Shikamaru walks up to her.*
Shikamaru: Let’s get out of here Hinata. It’s not safe.
*Temari and Sakura walk over to her and help her up.*
Shikaku: What about Sasuke and Tsuchikage-sama?
*Gaara shows up carrying the Oonoki.*
Gaara: I was able to spare him at the last moment.
Shikamaru: We should take Sasuke back.
*The scene show Shikaku picking up Sasuke and tossing him over his shoulder. The scene then switches to the Shinigami’s dimension.*
Naruto: Where am I?
Kurama: We are in his dimension, now.
*Naruto turns to his right and sees Kurama. Fighting is heard in the background.*
Naruto: What’s that?
Kurama: I don’t know… let’s check it out. Hop on.
*Naruto leaps up onto Kurama and Kurama flickers over to the fighting. Suddenly everything stops as everyone begins to look at one another.*
Minato: Naruto, is that you?!
Hiruzen: It is Naruto!
Hashirama: Who is he?
Tobirama: And how is he riding the kyuubi?
Naruto: Dad… Old man…
*Scene shows Kurama’s shocked face. Naruto finally looks in the direction that kurama is facing. The scene shows the other half of the kyuubi that was sealed away over 16 years ago.*