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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
*Sakura is struck with a fear that stifles her. Scene changes to Naruto.*
Naruto in thought: Dammit, Sakura stopped moving. Did they cross paths?
*Scene switches back to Orochimaru and Sakura.*
Orochimaru: Tell me… Mrs. Uchiha… how does it feel being the worthless, useless one on such a dominant team?
*A tear is shown running down Sakura’s cheek.*
Orochimaru: You’re worse than Tsunade-chan. Two bitches, one following in the footsteps of the other. At least your husband had enough strength to die with some dignity.
*Something snaps in Sakura. She looks at Orochimaru determined.*
Sakura: You bastard!
*Sakura lashes out at Orochimaru, charging him with both fists charged with chakra. When she’s covered halfway of the original distance between her and Orochimaru, she slams the ground, causing a small quake, destroying the ground, making it unstable. Orochimaru is seen, trying to gather his footing. Suddenly, Sakura comes down with a crashing heel kick, nailing Orochimaru right on top of his head. Orochimaru is sent crashing through the earth. Sakura leaps atop a building that has remained standing in Konoha. Scene switches to Naruto and crew as they race towards Sakura.*
Sakura: Serves you right, you son-of-a-bitch. My Sasuke wouldn’t leave me like that.
*Scene shows Naruto and crew coming around a corner and seeing Sakura down the road on top of a building. Naruto looks down further and sees Susanoo. Panel focuses on Susanoo looking at Sakura. Susanoo flickers to Sakura, puching her in the midsection, sending her flying. Naruto leaps up, catching her and landing back with the group. Naruto looks at Hinata.*
Naruto: Get her back to Shizune. And stay there. We’re about to be on our way as well.
*Hinata grabs hold of Sakura and flashes out.*
Naruto: Neji, Kiba, did you see or smell any evidence of Sasuke?
Kiba: His scent is still here, as well as another one. I can barely smell Kakashi, Gai, and Yamato.
*Naruto goes wide-eyed.*
Kiba: Sasuke is still here somewhere. But Kakashi and Gai have been gone for at least a day now. And Yamato…probably half a day.
Naruto: Sai, take to the air again. Shikamaru, come up with some strategy to immobilize that army. Susanoo is mine. Steer clear of us. We’re leaving in a couple of minutes.
*Sai draws another bird, hopping on it, flying in the sky. Everyone huddles around Shikamaru. Naruto flashes out to Susanoo. Scene shows Susanoo and Naruto.*
Susanoo: Well, well, if it isn’t the son of wind.
Susanoo: You’ve changed in these… how long has it been… 4 years?! Show me what you’ve learned.
*Scene switches to the group huddled around Shikamaru.*
Shikamaru: Tell me Neji, are there any clones?
Neji: I don’t think so. And this is it. I don’t see anyone for miles.
Kiba: Same here, I don’t smell any new scents.
Shikamaru: Sai, can you confirm that?
Sai through the radio: Aye.
Shikamaru: So how many are we facing?
Shikamaru: Ok, we’re going to let Choji and Lee have first crack. Sai, I want you to keep an eye for anything that might be approaching. Neji, Kiba, you’re staying here with me. Choji, you take the right, Lee, the left. We’ll intervene if we have to.
Choji: You won’t.
Lee: Exactly! *gives the thumbs up*
*The next panel shows Choji and Lee attack the battalion from the sky, with Naruto and Susanoo seen in the top right corner of the panel. The next panel zooms on them.*
Susanoo: C’mon son of wind. Show me what you have.
*Suddenly Tsukuyomi and Amerterasu appear standing beside Susanoo.*
Amerterasu: Come now brother, let us have some fun as well.
Susanoo: Shut up, bitch. You’ve been around her too long.
Tsukuyomi: Speak for yourself brother, but I like that fact.
Amerterasu: Yes, let me have my way with the boy. Maybe he’ll join our side.
*Amerterasu is rubbing herself provocatively, licking her lips, looking at Naruto (Amerterasu has taken the appearance now of 5’10 woman, long red hair with black streaks, dressed in a black leather suit, with a long black leather skirt)*
Naruto in thought: This is not good. If they all show up, we’re going to have to leave without Sasuke.
Susanoo sighs: Fine then sister. Let’s see how good you are.
*Amerterasu kisses Tsukuyomi deeply, then walks to Naruto.*
Susanoo: Don’t even think about it. One move, and all your friends down there and the one up in the sky die by my lightning.
*Naruto just stands there. Amerterasu approaches Naruto, beginning to grope him, licking his neck and then his cheek. Tsukuyomi and Susanoo watch on.*
Amerterasu: Well, he definitely likes it.
*Amerterasu keeps her hand over Naruto’s manhood. She begins to nibble and suck on his neck. Naruto closes his eyes and begins to smile.*
Susanoo: The bastard is actually enjoying it!
Naruto: What can I say… she’s hot.
*The next panel shows Neji, Shikamaru, and Kiba looking on at Naruto as he is seduced by Amerterasu.*
Kiba: Why that bastard…
Neji smiles: Keep quiet Kiba. Things are about to get interesting.
*Kiba sniffs the air and smiles.*
Kiba: Yeah it is.
*Naruto takes control of the situation, grabbing Amerterasu, holding her back a bit and looking at her.*
Naruto: You’re hot…
*Suddenly a bolt of lightning hits Tsukuyomi square in the chest, sending him flying. Sasuke appears infront of Susanoo, kicking him in the gut, knocking him off the building. Sasuke pursues him. Meanwhile a rasengan comes crashing down on Amerterasu, sending her crashing to the ground. Naruto turns to his wife, Hinata.*
Naruto: But you’re not beautiful, nor are you my baby.
*Naruto smiles at Hinata. Hinata gives Naruto an evil eye.*
Hinata: We’ll talk about this later.
*Hinata walks up to Naruto, kissing him deeper than Amerterasu kissed Tsukuyomi. She grabs his manhood in a domineering, playful way.*
Hinata: As long as I’m alive…
Naruto: I would never touch another woman, I swear.
*The couple kisses again.*
Naruto: We’ll definitely talk later, about you not listening to me. Now go on and get everyone together so we can leave. I’m going to go help Sasuke
*Naruto grabs Hinata’s ass as she walks away seductively.*
Naruto in thought: Man that was close.
*Naruto flickers to Sasuke who is standing, facing Susanoo.*
Sasuke: I know. Just give me one moment.
*Sasuke walks closer to Susanoo.*
Sasuke: If you ever touch my wife like that again, you will die by my hands.
*Susanoo looks on laughing.*
Susanoo: You can’t kill me boy!
*Sasuke suddenly enters into his full Susanoo, while Susanoo takes on his true form. Both beings look the same size. Sasuke begins to shoot Amerterasu arrows at Susanoo. Susanoo deflects several, with one getting caught in his shield. Suddenly the flame has consumed the entire shield. All of sudden it dissipates. Amerterasu is seen walking towards the battle.*
Amerterasu: I don’t think so, Uchiha bastard. And you!!!! *looking at Naruto* You and your bitch of wife will die. Even if I have to kill her myself!
*Sasuke has cancelled his Susanoo, flickering over to Amerterasu, kicking her several times, alternating on her right and left legs. Suddenly, he hits her square in her chest with a lightning infused fist, sending her flying towards Susanoo. Tsukuyomi flashes in and catches her. Sasuke begins to race to their location.*
Naruto yelling: Sasuke!!!!!
Naruto: We didn’t come here to fight. We came here to get you. Now let’s go.
Susanoo: I don’t think so.
*Susanoo holds out his palm. Several lightning bolts are gathering into a ball. The next panel focuses on Naruto, who has leapt in front of Sasuke. He holds out both hands, fingers spread apart as wide as possible. He suddenly claps his hand, causing a strong gust of wind with a shockwave to head right at the brother and sister trio. All three are pushed back, with Tsukuyomi and Amerterasu being blown away. Naruto turns to Sasuke and the two flee towards their group.*
Naruto: When we get back, we need to talk.
*Meanwhile, back at the land of whirlpools, Professor is seen standing on the ocean.*
Professor: You should be able to make this journey. Don’t forget to deliver our message.
*Scene switches to a hut where Inoichi’s body lays. Suddenly the eyes open. Inoichi sits up, breathing deeply. He hops up and runs out of the hut. Scene switches to Kiri, showing Kabuto and Ryu walking down a street.*
Ryu: How come didn’t you tell him about your prisoners?
Kabuto: Because these prisoners are tests for our new battalion leaders.