Originally Posted by MrBIG
really liked it until the end.
"Sasuke opens his eyes, revealing the Rinnegan."
I was either expecting a Snake Sage or Sasuke being able to use natural energy cause of Juugo.
But rinnegan? how'd you to jump to that?
I get what you're saying but don't complain when someone offers a free read. That is one of the many reasons people don't submit predictions/fan fictions hardly anymore...people literally dissect them to pieces..just enjoy what you can and move on..Criticism is fine...and accepted...just appreciate that someone took their time to reveal a different perspective than what Kishi is offering.