Re: Naruto_648 Predictions/Spoilers
Free advice on the prediction writing apoc, when you write try to spread out text from the action as much as possible with proper spacing between the two. You managed to clean it up a bit better with the writing as you progressed but its still a little bit heavy on the massive paragraphs. One other thing that also helps is to use quotation marks as it automatically tells people that someone is saying something. Its not exactly a requisite but it does help.