Originally Posted by MrBIG
I don't think theres enough forshadowing and flashbacks.
The shinobi alliance doesn't seem that motivated to me. I hope the next chapter Naruto goes all Braveheart style to really get their juices flowing.
Great chapter. 10/10 Would suck naruto's dick again.
By "Braveheart style" I assume you mean brutally killed, cut into pieces, and scattered to the four corners of the earth. Yeah, that definitely would be a 10/10.