Not bad chapter I suppose. Naruto used each tail of the kyubi to create a rasengan then while the rookie 10 were close he gave them just enough chakra so they could control the rasengans without them exploding in their faces. When they hit the shield, it basically had to absorb the potential damage thus weakening it overall until it was no longer useful.
As for the DNA sword, I think I understand why it failed. The sword was manifested through the juubi's chakra but so was the shield. When the shield was overwhelmed it disrupted the strength of the sword making it weak enough that its density was not enough to deflect an attack from naruto/sasuke.
Not bad chapter though as everyone would agree it could use a little more cow bell.
Last edited by jeanericuser; 10-16-2013 at 07:55 AM.