God of the Moon:I like the cartoon lines you have added around the skater. As others have said, add some text.
Goku100:It's extremely busy and you can't see what's going on. Still looks good visually. The text seems a little plain and just stuck there without much thought.
Ninja48:I like you patterned background. It's awesome. I like the layout of you text. Very busy but looks good also.