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Old 12-07-2006, 10:57 AM   #4
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Chapter 4: New Beginnings

Chapter 4: New Beginnings.

“ Good boy Naruto, now get on your knees or I’ll squeeze every inch of life out of here,” yells Orochimaru. “ A…. AAHH.. Naruto…. don’t…worry…about me…just…kill him!” cries Hinata.
“ Yes Naruto kill me, but you’ll also kill her.” Says Orochimaru.^^^
Naruto starts to break down, he doesn’t know what to do .
{Inside Naruto}

“Naruto, come on; let me out, I promise I’ll kill him.”
“But…. but what about Hinata huh, will you save her Kyubi?”
“Naruto…I’ll save her, I promise!!” says the Kyubi, with a big grin.

“Naruto…. Naruto…. Snap out of it,” yells Hinata, as the snake tightens its grip on Hinata making her spit up blood. “Hinata… Hinata!! Yells Naruto as he comes back to his senses.
“Ok, Naruto time to end this,” says Orochimaru.^^^
Orochimaru stretches his head again and comes up to Naruto’s ear and whispers to Naruto, “ To save her, you must join me or I’ll kill her and every one close to you right now!!” With that Naruto bows his head and with his free hand Orochimaru starts going through hand symbols and then yells “Curse mark Jutsu” then Orochimaru bites Naruto on the neck, the dark symbols start to spread on his neck and Naruto winces in pain.
As Hinata is watching this she starts to tear up, she starts thinking that she must go to him, she must help.
{Inside Naruto}

“What is this, what are you?” yells the Kyubi as a flood of dark liquid overwhelms him, causing him to transform into a, coal, darkish color, and an even eviler creature than before. “ Ha…. ha…. now I shall rule all that oppose me and get out of this weak body,” growls the new Kyubi with a stomach turning laugh.
Back outside

Orochimaru lets go of his clasp on Naruto’s neck and pulls away. Naruto falls to his knees, as he is about to lose conscious, he looks over at Hinata and yells to her, “ Hin…Hinata tell Hiero to never quit, to never give up, and tell him I will always love him,……and Hinata never forget that I love you and that I will always protect you, never forget that, never.” ^^^

“Naruto!!….. I love.. you to forever, but please don’t leave me,…. I ….. I cant live without you.” Yells Hinata as tears start rolling down her dirt covered face.
“ Hinata…I’ll see you again, believe it I’ll never leave the ones I love, and no matter what remember what I told you, and I promise you I will return one day, and ……Ahhhhh,” whispers Naruto as he passes out and hits his head on the ground with a thump.^^^

Orochimaru lets his grasp on Hinata go, and she falls to the ground covering her eyes with her bloody hands that she used to wipe her mouth, she then starts to recover and looks up, to see Orochimaru picking up Naruto and putting him on his shoulders.^^^
“Orochimaru, let my Naruto go or else,” “ Or else what Hinata, what are you going to do.” Yells Orochimaru
“Please…..let him go,” pleads Hinata. “No,” “I wont, let him go and you wont do anything…. “ Mind Stall Jutsu” yells Orochimaru^^^
Hinata gets hit by a numbing feeling, she cant move or speak.
“ Now Hinata you be a good girl and stay there, Ha….Ha… don’t worry in about 2 days you’ll be able to move and speak again, but it’ll give me time to get away before your nit wit ninjas come looking for us, oh by the way if you do come looking I promise you, he will die and so will you and your entire family.” States Orochimaru
“ But Naruto…yells Hinata but no words come out of her mouth.
“ Well by for now,” yells Orochimaru as he disappears into the woods with Naruto.
After a few minutes Tsuanda and Mighty Guy appear at the gates.^^^

“ Hinata, why are you standing there, where is Naruto?” yells Tsuanda.^^^
As Guy helps Hinata to he hospital, Tsuanda scans the woods and the small training area, she cant see Naruto any where, and only assumes that he must be dead, but why cant she find his body.” ^^^
“Miss Hokage mam?” “Yes” “Well Hinata is in a stable condition, she has 3 broke ribs and some ruptured veins, but other than that she’s fine, the Jutsu placed on her should ware off in about a day or so.” “Thank you, Sakura.” ^^^
Tsuanda cant understand why she couldn’t find a body, unless Orochimaru took his body, but why, she realizes that only Hinata will be the only one that can answerer this , so she must wait.^^^
“Miss Hokage,” “ Yes Sakura I told you to call me Tsuanda.” “ Yes mam, but I was wondering about Hinata’s baby, what shall we do?” asks Sakura. “ Well… I guess you should look after him Intel Hinata is better, is that ok.” “Yes mam,” answers Sakura.^^^

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Well I guess that Naruto is dead why else would she not send someone after Orochimaru, I can’t believe it, Naruto was always annoying but he……was my friend. It took me a while after Sauske’s death to talk to Naruto again but I loved Sauske and if he didn’t die we where to be married by now. Its weird Sauske was killed on the 1st of December and Naruto was killed on the 3rd. Every one blamed Naruto for Sauske’s death, but that must not have affected him because they treated him like dirt any ways. I can remember when Naruto and Hinata got together everyone shocked, her dad disowned her, and that would make anybody hurt, but not Hinata and Naruto they had each other and that’s all they needed. They where always happy, they even have a kid now, and Naruto finally had a family, why….why did that have to be took away, its not fair!!

“Sakura are you ok?” “Oh…Yes I’m fine, so where is baby Hiero?” “Here he is,” says the nurse that was watching the baby.
“ Gouchey, gouchey, goo,” says Sakura messing with the baby.^^^
As Sakura and baby Hiero are walking home she looks up at the moon, and a cool breeze of wind blows her hair in her face. Sakura looks down at the creation made by Naruto and Hinata, and starts to tear up, she starts to think about Naruto and how he grew up with out a dad, and now so will his son.
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I hope ya like this chapter its sad but don’t worry it gets happier and when I put the line above it means that someone is thinking in their head ok, and if you couldn’t figure it out it was Sakura ok. Well please give me ya thoughts and I should get the next chapter soon. Also if you like my story and have some friends on this site please tell them about it and ask them to read it, thanks. And thank all of you for your support, this chapter is special to me because my mom died on December 3rd, and I’m a little sad right now, but thanks to ya and ya’s support I was able to write this chapter, thank you!!
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