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Old 12-16-2006, 10:22 AM   #6
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Re: VBFC Fan Fic.

Nani Kingdom = What Kingdom O.o

Also the Kage names mixed with English sound wierd, perhaps you should do element shadow and Mystery shadow etcetc

I'd say more but I read like a small bit of the first chappie.

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