Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue.

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:30 AM

Hello. In the fanfiction thread that we created so long ago there has been some amazing developement and story telling. When we started that thread and I wrote the beginning of Nila we had no idea it would be so popular and that so many would help us write. Now, I can't take any credit for that post as My only contribution was the beginning. Right after that start I continued the story of Nila and much happened that made me stop writing. I still enjoyed seeing where people took Nila.
From time to time I came back and wrote a little more on my own path of Nila and in the end I ended up with some small chapters.

I hope the fan-fic team don't mind me posting my version of that here.
I will continually keep posting on this because the story is far from done.
I start with the first part I wrote for the other fanfiction with only some small changes. Then I move on to the other path.

- enjoy -

//ShiverX

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:35 AM

Naruto fan-fictional epilog story by ShiverX
- enjoy -

Part 1: The past and the future.

Chapter 1: The mysterious awakening:

"Shhh" this is what she thought, to the extent she actually formed her lips to the sound.
The silence was proof more than anything that there was something amiss.
Normally you would hear the bugs of the night or the distant sound of animals and people moving around, even at night. Many would consider Konoha to be a quiet village but it was not always so. And Nila often thought that it might be because of it's more "active" past that it never seemed to be completely silent. She could not remember one day in her entire fifteen year old life when she had heard total silence. The thought amused her and annoyed her at the same time. She loved to let her mind wonder but it was the same tendency that often got her into trouble. It was the same reason why she was still not Jounin. And there she went again!

Nila snapped out of her thoughts and focused on the sounds of the night, or the lack of them. Total silence. She could hear her self breathing while she sneaked up out of bed and up to the window. She opened the panels and peeked out. Outside the village was dark, no lights was shining like they used to, was there a power outage? She could still see quite clear though as the stars and the moon shone very brightly above. As she looked up towards the moon her eyes caught a glimpse of something red. She turned her head and there was something she had never seen in her life. A red meteor was burning through the atmosphere, or thats what she thought it was at least. She had only read about it in books.
Her eyes wide taking in this sight she felt somewhat drowsy. Letting the panels drop she backed into the room and sat down on the bed again, her head filled with ideas.

A second later she was up and filling her kit-pack with needful things. Kuenei, scroll, some provisions her flute and some other tools.
She slowly opened the door and snuck out, focusing her chakra on her feet to step lightly as to not awaken mom and dad. She came to the stairs leading down to the first floor. She could hear the faint sound of someone breathing heavy. "Good, dad is asleep" she thought and jumped up on the side wall focusing chakra to hold her in place. Sneaking down and up to the door of their bedroom while hanging from the sealing Nila watched the slight opening leading into her parents room. They were both asleep. She smiled and continued to sneak away past the kitchen and to the front door. She made a hand-sign as she dropped to the floor producing wind-chakra under her feet softening the sound as she landed. It still made some sound though and she made a face as she sat perfectly still waiting to hear if someone woke up. Her parents had always been light sleepers in regards to her sneaking out. "Well, her mom at least" she thought. During the years she had gotten quite good at it. It was never to go out and do bad stuff or meet boys or anything like that that many of the other girls her age were doing, she imagined at least. No, she had always been a bit "awake" at night and just loved roaming the nature around Konoha. It calmed her and she often slept outside, to her parent's dislike. There she went again drifting away in thought from what she had to focus on.
She sighed. It seemed no one was awake still. She took her cloak, the dark one, and sneaked out closing the door real silent behind her.

Outside she looked around at the now dark village. The moon was shining brightly and at the hight were their house stood overlooking the village she could see far around. Above her was the big bright red meteor falling and burning. Now when being outside she was consumed by the image. Her eyes wide she couldn't take her eyes of it. It was so close....and silent. In fact she heard nothing at all, it was unreal. Standing like that for some time she lost track of time as the meteor spread across the sky. It was so close she could se it move at quite a speed. Following it's path it neared the mountain monoliths of old that hovered over Konoha looking down and for ever watching over the villagers. The stone depiction of the past and present Hokages. She stopped for a moment at her fathers face. It looked really young compared to now but still the likeness was uncanny. It even bore a somewhat goofy look with that grin it had. She had always found it funny how her goofy father could actually be the Hokage. She new he was strong but sometimes he really didn't fit the description. She admired and loved her father but as a daughter it was hard seeing the very respected and even feared man in him.
The seventh Hokage huh. She glanced at the face before and looked upon another face. More gloomy and spiky haired. He had only been Hokage for a short time but he was handsome. She blushed a little at the thought. She was not normally one to think such thoughts.

Her wandering mind was interrupted by a boom and a green flash! The meteor had shifted color and was rapidly speeding up, descending! She stood up and made a hand sign.
"Byakugan!" she exclaimed and her inherited eyes kicked in. She focused her eyes on the meteor and was immediately blinded by the green flames. She couldn't see past the flames! They were some sort of chakra it seemed. With her eyes she could follow the path it took in it's decent though. Noticing where it went down behind the tree's far away she took out her map and checked. It would probably be just outside the fire countries borders. Putting down her map she didn't think twice about speeding towards the crash-site. This adventure was something she was not going to miss! And as the lights started to reappear in the surrounding houses she quickened her pace towards the edge of the village.

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:37 AM

In the meantime some distance away Sasuke slowly awoke from a dream. He was almost back at the fire counties borders and had set up camp for the night. He could clearly remember the dream. It was about his brother Itachi. In the dream he had been living with his brother at a house by a lake somewhere away from Konoha. The weirdest part was Itachi and Sasuke had both been older. In short Itachi had been alive. Sasuke concealed his face in his palm. "just a dream"....
Suddenly he twitched and removed his hand from his face. His Manekyu Sharingan was activated?! "What!?" Why was the Sharingan activated like this when he just woke?
Confused he got to his feet and looked around. With the Manekyu Sharingan he could see quite clear in the dark forest that surrounded him and besides, the stars and moon was out to lighten the sky. He looked up and was shocked to see that he missed the quite obvious object flying across the sky. "A meteor?" he whispered. Thinking closer on the subject it was no surprise at all. The meteor didn't make any sound, in fact, everything was in total silence. He began sweating and with all his senses on high alert he scanned the surroundings and realized nothing around him was moving. Nothing at all, no creatures, no insects. Something weird was going on, this much was clear.
Sasuke turned his gaze to the meteor and fixed the sharingan on it. He could see it clearly as it was surrounded by some kind of chakra. He could even predict it's chakra projectory and thus he knew it was going to fly for some time still.
Focusing closer on the meteor as to see what was behind the chakra he found himself *yawning* and feeling as falling to sleep. Right before he involuntarily would doze of it suddenly seemed to react to his gaze and with a blinding flash and boom it turned green. Blinded Sasuke tried to look up again just to find that the meteor had changed path. It was falling fast and it was falling towards the location where he stood.
"It reacted to my Sharingan?" Sasuke thought as he gathered his equipment. "I must get out of here quick!".
Sasuke began running sideways to check the meteors path, still going towards the boarders but not straight. He could see the meteor moving as he himself moved wich could only mean it was really close. Furhermore it was getting bigger by the second as it closed in on the location.
Focusing chacra in his feet and legs he sped up to highest speed and with a flash he was jumping from tree to tree.
After some minues, looking up and evaluating that he was out of harms way he slowed down but still kept going as to make sure he was out of the blast radius when that thing hit the ground. After yet another couple of minutes Sasuke could feel the heat from the meteor's chakra. it was burning and appeared quite physical to Sasuke's surprise. The heat-wave soared overhead and past Sasuke as the meteor made it's final decent. Sasuke jumped down behind some trees to take a final cover, he brazed himself for the impact.
The impact never came. The night tuned dark again and in a moment all of the surroundings was bursting with sound once more, animals and insects. "What in the world is going on here?" thought Sasuke. "I better check it out".

In Konoha Village Naruto woke up from what seemed to be a long sleep. His eyes focused to regain vision in the darkness, it was still night. He slowly sat up as to not wake the woman lying next to him. He looked down on her and smiled. After all these years he was still fascinated by just looking at her. Her blue hair and calm face as she slept. The moon and stars from outside shone into the bedroom aluminizing her figure. He smiled at the vision."To think Hinata, we almost didn't get to be together" he thought and stroked a line of hair from her cheek. Hinata stirred in her sleep and woke slowly smiling at Naruto when she saw him.
"You can't sleep honey?" She sai d and he crawled down so that they where face to face. "I don't know why, I just woke and I feel completely rested" he whispered to Hinata. "Oh do you now?" Hinata smiled and kissed him.
They lay like that kissing for a moment when all of a sudden a boom was heard from outside. "What the!?" was Naruto's reply as he jumped out of bed getting dressed. "That sounded like an explosion!". After dressing he looked out the window but the village was mostly silent and dark, which was weird. Only a few windows was lit. His eyes went left and right and he caught glimpse of someone running away at high speed. Whoever it was they were already some ways of. A thought struck him. "Nila!" he exclaimed. At the word Hinata sat up quickly and looked straight at him. "What?" she ordered in a somewhat upset voice. "Is Nila out again? At this hour?" Hinata got dressed and joined him at the window. Naruto kissed Hinata again. " I'm sure it wasn't her. How could she have passed the detectors I put up in the stairs and windows?" he explained.
"She is smart Naruto, she wouldn't fall for those just as she haven't fallen for your other traps. Maybe she found another route." Hinata said. Naruto scratched the back of his head and smiled goofily at the remark. "Yes, she always did outsmart me. She must have gotten that from her mother" Naruto smiled again. Hinata looked at him with a smile. Go Naruto, check to see if your daughter have escaped again.

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:38 AM

Confusion and pursuit

Nila was running like the wind. She laughed at the thought, wind chakra should enable you to do just that. She guessed that fire/lightning should be faster though. Her mind contemplated this as she kept jumping and moving towards the crash site.
Strangely enough there had not been an noticeable explosion or crash from the meteor that she could have seen or heard. She thought about it for a moment. Something was very strange about that meteor. First of all there were the fact that chakra normally couldn't be seen with the naked eye. Second this chakra was green...and then there was the silent it brought. Maybe it had some sort of barrier that removed the sound? Nilas mind wandered again and just as she jumped into a clearing her foot was caught in a snag and she fell. In an instant she thought about using wind to soften her blow but there was no time to react, she crashed in the ground and her foot still stuck in the snag twisted painfully. She cursed her clumsiness for a second. then she looked at her foot. Nothing to bad but she wouldn't be able to move as fast anymore. As she got to her feet she felt a stinging pain in her leg. Once again she cursed her self and then started to walk fast. As the foot got used to the strain she soon sped up into somewhat of a easy sprint.
Trying her best to keep the pace she soon arrived near the boarder. Once she got close she slowed down. She didn't know exactly where the meteor had fallen. She stopped and looked around. She heard animals and the sounds of the night, just as normal. The forest also looked fine, and nothing indicated impact. It was weird, there should be some sign of the impact. She couldn't have been so wrong as to where the meteor had struck?
Starting to walk again she got a bad feeling. Whatever the meteor was it was becoming more and more apparent that she didn't understand it. Nila didn't like to not understand things. She would obsess over things for long times until she had at least a basic understanding of how they worked. This was the very core for her capacity with chakra-based Ninjutsu and a big reason for her results in school. Her mind was curious, or so people kept telling her. She was quite proud of the fact that she was a good "problem solver" as she thought of it. That though defined her and was something that she often depended on in uncertain situations. This was definitely one of those.
Nila shook her head dispersing all the thoughts. She was going to have to be focused for this, she thought as she moved closer and closer to her fateful meeting.

Sasuke was moving with a precision that would make any normal ninja seem clumsy by comparison. He moved fast and his sharingan was activated to pick anything unusual.
The fact that there had been no impact alerted him on many levels. Whatever that "meteor" was it had activated his sharingan. It was in al certainty something powerful, something dangerous. He wondered if Karin had ben able to feel the chakra from the meteor if she had still been around.
His trail of thought was soon interrupted as he picked up on a movement on the ground about a hundred meters in front. He landed on a branch and observed.
Below, a ninja was moving at a slow pace towards the meteor area. The ninja had blue long hair, a woman. She was young and seemed to be scanning the area ahead. She didn't notice him, which was understandable, he thought and focused on her with his sharingan.
There was something familiar with the ninja on the ground, but he had never met her before, that he was sure of. She had quite a large amount of chakra reserve. Did she have anything to do with the meteor? She seemed to be looking for something. Probably for where the stone had landed. Sasuke paused for a second and thought about the situation. Of course there would be more Ninjas that had seen the Meteor that would come looking for it. It was actually weird there were no more ninjas this close to the crash site. He quickly snapped out of the thought as his eyes reacted to a detail on the young ninjas clothing. A Konoha emblem! The girl was carrying a headband of Konoha on the right side of her gear. It was partly concealed by one of her smaller packs hanging from a belt-constraption over her shoulders. "Konoha haa?" He thought. That meant trouble for him. For so long he had concealed himself, not going back to that place. Sasuke's thought went to Naruto and it hit him. The likeness he had felt before, it was Naruto! Sasuke smiled, a somewhat vicious smile. This had become quite interesting. The branch twisted as the force of his chakra pressed down when he jumped into the air, following the young ninja towards the meteor.

Nila felt a tremble in the earth as she moved closer to what seemed to have to be the crash-site, even if there was no signs so far. The tremble wasn't an earthquake but rather more of an stir or unrest in the earth. Nila couldn't explain it better that that. She had never felt anything like it. Just as she recovered her stance from the first shock another one came. This one didn't shake the earth but rather her senses. She felt it move up her leg and into her body.
Feeling woozy she experienced something unexpected, her senses where heightened by the force. She could hear all sounds around her and see the smallest detail, extremely clear. She felt a presence behind her, hiding. She could hear it.
Then as quick as she had gained it, the heightened state faded again and she exclaimed. For some reason time seemed to had stood still.
Stopping she braced herself for another shock, breathing slowly trying to force her senses to focus. Did she hear anything just then or had it been her imagination? At any rate she felt like someone was watching her. What did it all mean? the force, the stalking presence?
The first rule of Ninja was to conceal themselves at any sign of danger, to assert the situation before acting. This was in many ways in contrast to her fathers more robust way of doing things. "Follow your feelings Nila" - was something he had told her over and over. To trust the gutsy way. But that of course was something her mother hadn't recommended. She always tried to instill more of a calm sense into Nila, or so it seemed.
Nila shook her head again, "Focus!".
I need to get away from the ground, she thought, the force came from there. And I need to hide as to avoid anyone around that might not be friendly.
And with that she jumped.

Sasuke didn't move a muscle. The girl had stopped so suddenly he hadn't gotten the chance to properly hide his presence. He was pretty sure she had noticed him. Now she seemed to be totally still, she was probably scanning the area. Maybe she was a sensory type of Ninja?
All of a sudden she jumped towards the side and some tree's standing at that side. She was making her move, he thought. She had quite the speed and had it not been for the fact that his sharingan was activated her little surprise dodge would have worked. As it were he could follow her chakra trail into the trees. He smiled. Naruto indeed, but more refined. There was no immediate rush to move forward. He could stay concealed, waiting for her to move. Sasuke made a series of hand-seals. "Shizen ma-ji no jutsu" he thought as the seals completed and immediately he became transparent. A nice little jutsu that was almost undetectable and that made him blend into the environment body and spirit. The only thing he could not hide was his life force. This had caused him quite a lot of trouble back in the days with Naruto.
The girl seemed to sit still on one of the branches. With his sharingan he watched her chakra emit from the hiding place. It seemed unrestful, she was afraid.

Nila's heart pounded. She was listening intensely. She felt for the first time since leaving the village that she might have made a mistake. The meteor, or whatever it was must have attracted more ninjas. Why did she not think of that before she left? She had never faced another Ninja out-side the village and the jouunin exams. She had felt the presence quite clearly at that time, but maybe it was only due to the effect of the force she had felt? Maybe there was no Ninja watching her. But who else had emitted the chakra serge, or the force that shook the ground? She thought back to her learnings under Master Shikamaru about chakra types and strategies. Earth type, not strong against wind but also not weak against it. If there was a fight the outcome would probably come down to techniques. As long as the person stayed hidden there was not much Nila could do. She had never been able to master the shadow clone technique her father was so famous for. She had to the most been able to hold one clone, and not for to long.

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:39 AM

Some time had passed and the girl hadn't moved at all. Her chakra was beginning to stabilize, she was getting more calm and sure of herself. Sasuke breathed slowly, time was on his side and he had no interest in confronting the girl yet, he was merely following her for now. The meteor had to have something to do with this shinobi and he was determined to find out what. What other reason would a Konoha Ninja be doing here?
He felt like he had come across something huge. For some reason the girl had some relationship to Naruto and whatever that cluts did it usually ended in something interesting. He smiled at the thought.
Obviously deciding the immediate threat was over, the girl slowly began to move forwards again. She was still concealed like a shinoby should but she still moved with some speed. Sasuke exhaled and silently followed her, making sure she couldn't detect him. He kept some distance but her chakra trail was easy enough to follow. Suddenly she turned quite strongly. "Trying to avoid followers by changing directions" he thought as he easily followed after. She also seemed to speed up and Sasuke had to let some of his defenses down to keep up, she was much faster than he had originally thought.
After what seemed to be quite awhile she slowed down and Sasuke resumed his fail-safe silence mode. The forest around them started to end and tree's to land on became scarce. He adjusted and took to the ground. He could move faster on the ground but was more exposed.
Suddenly the girl's chakra stopped all together. With the sharingan he saw ahead that she was standing still at what seemed to be a clearing by a river. He closed in and hid behind a tree to observe.

ShiverX · 01-20-2010, 11:40 AM

Lost into dream.

The clearing was bigger than it initially seemed and Nila knew she was in the right place. She could feel something pulsating from up ahead, and soon she could see it. The green fire was still burning and the light it gave of was shining in a pulsating matter. The meteor was not a big as she initially thought, or had it become smaller? She could feel energy emitting from the fires and she stopped some meters away from the stone. Looking at the meteor and the flames her head felt heavy and she noticed that even here there was no sound around. Not even the flames made any sound at all. For some reason, somehow it was very alluring, the green flames. She took a sep forward without knowing why and yawned as drowsiness filled her body. She felt as in trance as another step was made, and then another. Every step closer to the meteor and more unaware of her surroundings, the green light felt so comfortable in her mind. She drifted of into a dream.

Sasuke had been patient but something was wrong with this situation. The girl had not moved at all for some time. Just standing there and staring as if she had fallen asleep. He made a snap decision. He had to confront her. Maybe she was waiting for something but whatever it was she had clearly reached her destination.
He threw the shifting dark-blue and silver-grey cloak over his back and pulled the hood up. The cloak made him shift in and out of the environment and made it hard for people to focus on the details of his appearance. The hood concealed his face, better to be sure she couldn't describe him later.
Deeming that his concealment was suffice he jumped out from the trees and into the clearing right behind the young Kunoichi. She still didn't move. Maybe she hadn't noticed him? He took a somewhat casual stance but still keeping his defenses intact. He was not worried about this Kunoichi, but one thing he had learned about Ninjas and about Naruto in particular was that he should never underestimate surprises or opponents until he had a full understanding of them. He had learned this the hard way and was still paying for those mistakes. Anyway, he had become an expert in asserting situations and taking mesures to always have the upper hand. He approached the girl slowly.
"Oy! Konoha Shinobi!" He stopped and observed. "What are you doing out here?" She still didn't move. " Are you here for that strange meteor?" No reply. There was definitely something wrong, the girl was unresponsive. He took some steps sideways to get a better look, and activated the sharingan. The face of the girl was somewhat concealed as she seemed to be looking downwards towards the ground. He watched her chakra, it was very calm. And then he realized! She was sleeping, she was standing up and sleeping! "Naruto indeed!" he thought. Annoyed by the situation he approached her.
"Oy!!" he called a little louder. Still no response. She seemed to be heavily asleep. He scanned her appearance. She was wearing a dark cloak probably used for sneaking in the night. Over her shoulders bas a belt contraption that followed her back and chest. It was used for hanging bags, Kuenei and the sorts. By her side was the headband of Konoha. She seemed to be carrying a book or two in her light backpack and the rest of her gear was also seemingly made to be light but full of places to put small stuff. He noticed a flute sticking out from one of the pockets. He couldn't define any particular fighting style in her gear except the kuenei but she seemed to be a jack of many traits with the various objects. There was definitely something suspiciously familiar about the girl. She looked alot like Naruto, but her hair was darker with a blue nyance. But the thing that stood out the most was her eyes. Sasuke recognized the Byakugan immediately but it was still different from the one he remembered from Konoha. A mutation maybe?
"A daughter" he thought. "Maybe, she seems to be the right age for that." However it was she didn't seem to wake up. Maybe if he shook her? He stepped forward and put his hand on her shoulder.

"Nila.."
Just like that she woke up and felt fully awake, as shaken from a weird dream. She was still standing in front of the meteor and the flames was still burning but she was alot closer now. She had no memory of how she had approached the stone. Had she fallen asleep? What was going on here!? She looked at the flames and the stone and realized something she missed before! The stone was not touching the ground! It was hovering just around half a meter above the ground. She took a step back and suddenly the stone began to move. It transcended slowly towards the ground. Nila took another step backwards. As the stone touched the ground she could feel the force surging outward from it trembling the earth and her senses. It stirred her chakra and she became dizzy. Somewhere she could feel a touch on her shoulder just as the shadow clone was released.

ShiverX · 02-17-2010, 09:48 AM

Chapter: The destined fight

This time Sasuke had his sharingan on the clones. Roaring at him with another Rasengan Naruto used two clones as usual, that made it a total of three Narutos running at Sasuke. He felt other clones moving around him but nowhere was the familiar feel of the Rasengan present. He only needed to dodge this one.
Sasuke prepared to jump to the side in a new flash move. This move involved stunning the target with a Sharingan infused Illusion just for a second. Sasuke was sure that there was no point trying to capture Naruto in an Illusion. That method hadn't worked on Naruto for a long time. But stunning his senses for a second was a valid strategy. After sidestepping Naruto, Sasuke should be able to outmaneuver him and bring him down. Fire bonds should be sufficient. The trick was to disable him fast, before he could call for the Kyuubi's help. Naruto was stubborn and vastly superior in healing and lasting capabilities, but Sasuke was technically better as long as he ended the fight fast. Or so he hoped.
There had never been a fight with Naruto in which he hadn't improved beyond Sasukes expectations. This was going to be difficult indeed.

Sasuke focused on Naruto with his Sharingan and noticed something he missed at first glance. Naruto's chakra was very strong compared to normal.
There was no time to reflect anymore at this as Naruto closed and Sasuke felt the chakra from Rasengan start to pull the wind around him. The sound of the swirling energies was all he could hear and he prepared to sidestep. Naruto was focusing straight at him and his gaze was as piercing as ever.
All of a sudden Naruto's clones jumped up into the air as if wanting to block a jump. Lowering his eyes instantly again to face the original Naruto on the ground Sasuke was chocked to see that Naruto had split in three!! As if foreseeing Sasuke's sidestep these new Narutos spred sideways, each carrying a Rasengan of their own. Naruto had hidden them behind!! That was why his chakra seemed stronger, Sasuke thought in panic!!
There was no time, a second away! "Susanoo!!" Sasuke formed the words as his Manekyu activated and shielded him from the blow of two Rasengans. The third Naruto seemed to blur and the a second after it crashed into Susanoo's back with Rasengan! The force of the three Rasengans pressed against Susanno's defenses and the force turned Sasuke's senses upside down. He could feel Susanno almost giving way to the strength in the blow. There was a high screeching sound as the Rasen shuriken formed overhead where the two clones had jumped up into the air. The Susanoo would not last!
"Amaterasu!!" Sasuke screamed the words as the clones roared down at him. They disappeared in a "poof" as the black flames hit them! The Rasen Shuriken spun out of control and slashed Susanoo's top part continuing and hitting the ground just some meters of. The impact activated the expanding eruption and the ground exploded. Swiping the ground the Susanoo's sword took out the frontal clones at the same time as the Rasen shuriken shock-wave hit both Sasuke and Naruto throwing them to the side.
In the air Sasuke felt the damaging-strain on Susanoo forcing it to be released. Almost loosing consciousness from the impact his Sharingan was slowly fading from him also. He landed hard on the ground next to Naruto. The air pushed out of his lungs he coughed and struggled to breathe. Sasuke slowly regained his consciousness and looked to his side where Naruto was also struggling to get up.
"Naruto!...." Sasuke's breath blew some dirt away.
"Shut up!" Naruto's voice roared in Sasukes head. The intensity of Naruto's voice, the anger, was something Sasuke had never heard before. His inside froze as fear gripped him for the first time in so many years. It was all wrong. Why where they even here? The chaos he experienced in that moment shattered his calm. He was panicking. Only few times had he lost control over his posture in all of his life, and being who he was he didn't like it. He felt a rage towards Naruto and the whole situation.
Taking control of himself and his surroundings he decided that fighting was not the answer right now. They were both in this situation together. He got to his legs before Naruto, staggering a little he turned to his old teammate.
"Naruto! stop this!!" he exhaled while trying to find balance. Naruto also turned to him and Sasuke saw that he was no longer in Sannin mode but still in rage.
"Let's calm down!" he tried.
Naruto stood up straight and his face turned mild. He seemed to calm down. Sasuke also took a more lenient stance.
All of a sudden the ground at Sasuke's feet sprouted arms that latched to Sasuke's legs. Up came clones hidden in the earth.
"When!?" Sasuke swore as two clones from above came crashing down towards him again with a huge Rasengan! Sasuke looked at the Naruto in-front of him in fear. This Naruto had a dead-serious face. "This is for Nila you bastard!" he whispered.

ShiverX · 02-17-2010, 09:49 AM

Naruto could see the fear in Sasuke as the Rasengan closed in. The whole event lasted only a couple of seconds but for some reason it seemed longer. It all seemed to be moving in slow-motion. If it had been at any other time or any other person Naruto would have stayed his hand. But Sasuke was responsible for Nila's death in some way! There was no forgiveness! Naruto felt cold inside, there was nothing left now, Nila had been his life!
In the last second Sasuke turned his eyes towards Naruto, as their eyes met Sasuke smiled!
The explosion shook the earth again and burrowed deep inside creating a crater. Naruto had felt Sasuke's clone disperse the second Rasengan had hit it. Somehow Sasuke had fooled him with a lightning clone. As his own clone disappeared he could feel the lightning-based jutsu that had stunned his clone the last second before release. He focused to feel the surrounding energies. Where was Sasuke?! From his own hiding place among some clones at the side he didn't feel anything. He needed Sannin-mode for this.
"Naruto!" Sasuke's voice caught his attention, he turned towards the tree. Up in the tree he spotted Sasuke, almost invisible against the branch. Naruto made another hand-seal.

"Stop!" Sasuke's voice echoed. over the now silent field. Somehow the world had turned to include only him and Naruto. The capabilities of them both left no time for anything other than extreme focus. Naruto didn't seem to slow down much. He was already gathering Nature chakra at the same time as clones surrounded Sasuke and some Rasengans started to form. Sasuke's thought raced. He needed to stop the fighting. There was a war going on around them, they needed to figure out what was going on. Nila! he thought. The remembrance hit him. This is what Naruto said. Naruto thought he had killed the girl. "Naruto! Stop! I did not kill Nila.." he tasted the name. "I did not kill the Konoha Ninja! I swear it" Sasuke's raised his voice.

"I did not kill her, you hear me Naruto?!" Sasuke's voice was dfferen't somehow.
Naruto heard his voice, but he didn't want to hear the words. He was hurting to bad. "Nila..." he whispered. "I don't want to hear your excuses!!" he roared and charged straight at Sasuke with a newly formed Rasen Shuriken. This one would not miss. He just wanted to end it. All the clones jumped up and made the hand-seal of "air-Barrier!!" Surrounding Sasuke a thick field of air quickly pressed inward enclosing Sasuke. "Now!" Naruto thought as he released some of the Kyuubi's chakra into the ground and up into the tree connecting to Sasukes feet. Again Sasuke was completely secured in spot. As before Naruto closed his eyes and reached out in thought to the mark the kyuubi chakra left on it's victims. In a flash he connected to Sasuke with his Rasen shuriken. The teleportation was so fast that Sasuke probably had no time to react. The explosion knocked him back again and he hit the ground hard once more. For a second he passed out. The explosion obliterated the tree and Sasuke with it.
Lying for some minutes just breathing Naruto felt utterly spent.
"Wasn't it you who preached about how we must let go of anger and hatred?!" Sasuke's voice was somewhat criticizing. Naruto slowly turned around and faced Sasuke who was standing somewhat kneeled behind him. He was in bad shape."It seems your Lightning clones takes a lot of chakra" Naruto panted. He was also very tired. "Your not attacking me anymore? And why in the world did you attack that clone if you knew it wasn't real?!"

"Because I needed you to reveal yourself" Naruto's voice came from behind Sasuke!. He tried to turn around but felt that he was trapped in yet another jutsu. At his feet he saw with his sharingan traces of Kyuubi chakra that mixed with Naruto's normal chakra formed a seal that locked his senses. the seal pressed out of the ground and surrounded him. He was trapped! Damn! Another new jutsu, Naruto never stopped to surprise! "Don't even think about trying anything. Inside that seal I can track any movement you try to make!" Naruto's voice was cold.
"Naruto, I told you. I did not Kill her! I don't even think she is dead!" Sasuke's voice revealed panic.
Naruto felt his senses sharpen at this remark.
"Don't try to lie your way out of this Sasuke. This time you have gone to far." Naruto started to walk around Sasuke. "I can tell when your lie. In this field there is no escaping the truth!" Naruto stopped right in front of Sasuke and faced him. Sasuke looked Naruto straight into the eyes.
"I swear Naruto. The Ninja was unconscious on the green meteor when I found her. I don't understand it but somehow It got a hold of me too and I ended up here..." Sasuke's mind raced again trying to figure out the truth. Naruto observed carefully how Sasuke seemed to struggle. "I don't think she is dead. I ended up here.. and She might as well have. Wherever this is..." Sasuke whispered the last part and looked around.
Naruto could feel that Sasuke thought he was telling the truth. "That might be the case Sasuke, but I should still catch you and bring you back, for all that you did." Naruto still felt angry.
"Maybe, but look at where we are Naruto... We need to figure out what is going on first... Haven't you noticed?!" Sasuke pointed with his gaze to the sides around them. Naruto looked around. All over was bodies and a huge open field. He could feel two huge masses of people at the opposing sides of each-other far of. "What the!?" he whispered.
"That is two armies that is closing in." Sasuke's voice was calm. "Some scouts are already around. They almost hit me with some arrows before you came here." he paused. "We both seems to be in this together, whatever it is..."

Naruto did nothing for some seconds. He just stood there watching the fields. It looked like he was searching for something. All of a sudden Sasuke felt the barrier release and he fell to his knees. Standing up he looked at Naruto again. He hadn't moved at all. He was like a statue. Suddenly he moved. He turned his head towards Sasuke with a complexing look. "Do you have any idea where we are?" he asked. Sasuke was surprised at his everyday calm tone of voice. "No," he simply replied.
"If they shot at you before....why have they stopped now?" Naruto turned to gaze at the field again.
Sasuke felt a chill run through his spine. The silence was for-boding and Naruto seemed to be a perfect mirror of it.

Next chapter:
The victims of War.

JEWbii · 05-22-2010, 10:36 PM

can a mod please drop the sticky on this??? its been tree months since the last entry.

ShiverX · 05-28-2010, 02:58 AM

And for that I am sorry. I will try to post something soon. Life you know ;D It has a habit of getting in the way of a creative state of mind.

ruck1b · 07-08-2010, 08:50 AM

Yo shiver..you got to finish this man. So far the story is great.

Sensei-Q · 07-08-2010, 11:48 AM

Oh this is great. Great indeed.

ShiverX · 07-09-2010, 07:46 AM

Im working on another part, so it will be up in a couple of days I hope. (going on vacation soon so I can write ;D)

ShiverX · 07-20-2010, 07:39 PM

The victims of War.

The horse came galloping at high speed along the road. Not having any time to hide, Nila was still in the tree and Ryo only moved to the side. As the horse approached Ryo it stopped. As the dust settled Nila could see a brown haired young man on top of the horse. He was dressed in a green leather-armor vest and at his side he had a sword in a travel-belt. He looked like a soldier. His green eyes was strict as he glared at Ryo.
"Where have you been?", the mans voice had a rather deep voice that implied authority.
"I could ask you the same question." Ryo's face was also serious. Nila could feel the tension.
Then Ryo's face changed from serious to more of a goofy look, in that regard he reminded Nila of her father.
"I just came from the mountain, I've been fishing for your return!" Ryo seemed really excited. The man still looked somewhat angry but his face softened somehow.
"You know what I have said about going alone to the mountains? It's not safe! What if something would happen to you when I'm not here? I could never..." he was interrupted by Ryo. "I know! I know! But I knew you would come home today and I wanted to surprise you! I wasn't going to stay this late but something happened!" Ryo was still smiling and the man's face changed even more at this remark. He became more alert, looking behind Ryo.
"Are you alright? What happened?"
Ryo smiled again. "Yes, I'm fine. I met someone, someone I think you'll like!"
At this remark, Nila responded. "Hello! I'm Nila!"
The man was utterly surprised by Nila's voice, he had not seen her in the tree. At this height she was just a little above his head. In surprise he almost fell from the horse. Taking control at the last second he maneuvered the horse towards the other side of the road, whilst pulling out his sword.
"Who in the..?!" The man readied himself for combat.
"Stop!" Ryo's voice sounded upset. Nila did nothing but sit squatted on the tree-branch waiting calmly. The man looked down at Ryo and lowered his sword. "Is this the person?" he asked. Ryo nodded and looked happy again.
"This is Nila. We met in the mountains. Don't worry, she is a wanderer but not a bandit." Ryo looked up at Nila. " Nila, this is my friend that I was talking about, Raiku." He made a gesture at the man on the horse. "He is a guard here in the town." Ryo turned to Raiku. "This is Nila...em" he hesitated. " Nila Uzumaki Hatake, em I believe was her full name."
Nila watched Raiku closely but he didn't seem to recognize the name. She thought, another one without a family name? Raiku pointed at her. "What are you doing in the tree?" Ryo answered his question before Nila could. "Oh nothing Raiku, she was just showing me a trick." Raiku didn't look satisfied with the answer and he looked rather suspiciously at Nila. "Forgive me, but I am as Ryo said a townsguard. It is my job to be careful." Raiku paused. "My name is Raiku." he made a subtle bow in the saddle. "Again, I'm sorry but I don't recognize your name or appearance. Could you please tell me who you are and why you met Ryo here in the mountains?"
Nila looked at him in silence for some seconds. " My name is Nila Uzumaki Hatake. I came from a country far away. It seems neither you or Ryo here has ever heard of it. It's called the country of fire and I live in a village named Konoha. I will be honest with you Raiku.." Nila tasted the name. " I don't know where this land is situated in comparison to Konoha, so I don't know if it's south, north, west or east?" She thought about the meaning of this. " I don't even know what the name of this country is?" Raiku was also silent for a moment. "It's true I've never heard of this country of fire. Maybe it's one of the old countries that disappeared in the fall of the Allied lands so many years ago? There was many countries that ceased to exist at the time. Even this country was a part of that great nation. What the name of this area was has long since been lost. We still have local names, but this is no longer a country with a name or borders. No one rules here. Did perhaps your parents or caretakers tell you about this Konoha?"
Nila looked at Raiku with disbelief, "a country without a name? Or not a country at all?" she whispered to herself. Where in the world was she? How had she come to this place?
"Well, no.. I actually came from that place. I was there as late as yesterday. I think.." She paused and thoughts raced through her head. Had a lot of time passed since she fell asleep? " I was raised there and lived happily there up till now?" Nila was confused and felt fatigue. Raiku dismounted the horse and looked up again. " Then how is it you came to meet Ryo here in the mountains, and how could you have traveled so far as from a country we don't know about in just a day?" Even Ryo seemed puzzled by this. Nila made a signal that she was going to jump down and Raiku nodded. Nila jumped carefully down to the ground as not to hurt her tired body.
"Now there's a question I can't answer" Nila looked at Ryo as well. " As Ryo can tell you I kind of woke up in the mountains, in a somewhat unusual way. I actually fell onto Ryo. I have no idea how I came to be in that place. The last thing I remember was falling asleep outside my village at this strange stone that had dropped from the sky." Nila frowned at the how her story sounded.
Raiku also didn't look to happy with that explanation but he let go of the sword and seemed to relax. "Well, I'm sure that either way your telling the truth or have a reason for keeping it from us you don't seem to be a dishonest person. I don't know what it is, but you seem trustworthy enough, and I'm usually a good judge of character. If you wanted to hurt Ryo you could have done so by now. And you don't seem to be a demon, even if your appearance is different." At this remark Nila smiled. "How do you know I'm not a demon?" she laughed at the thought. "I mean, look at my eyes and my hair-color? I guess this is what your referring to?" Ryo looked annoyed by Raiku's questions. "Yes, this is indeed what I mean. But it's not the first time I've seen different appearances. I have often traveled protecting our caravan, and in the fights with monsters of the lands that i've experienced I have learned to sense a demon's special presence. And it's normally pretty obvious that your not dealing with a human. I don't get that feeling from you." He paused. "In fact, I get a feeling I can trust you." he smiled at Nila and a whole new character was revealed with this new emotion. He seemed to be a very warm person. Even Ryo's face changed to a more carefree one. Nila returned the smile. "Well, that's good then. These eyes are a family trait. I assure you I am no demon."
Raiko started to walk towards town and the two followed him. "As your background, let's talk more about that once we get inside the walls and have something warm to eat."
They all agreed and kept walking towards the gate, Ryo bombarding Raiku with questions about his trip.

ShiverX · 07-20-2010, 07:40 PM

Naruto was still "feeling" the armies as he had explained it. Sasuke also scouted the surroundings and at the same time glared at Naruto. Naruto was sitting in a meditation pose, gathering natural energies at the same time no doubt. He looked older than when they met so many ears ago. Somehow he looked to be a lot more wise. Sasuke shook his head. A fool is always a fool. He smiled at the many memories they shared.
"So, what are you sensing?" he asked, tired of waiting in silence. Naruto didn't move, but answered. " There is indeed at least two huge armies... They are moving slowly towards us again. Before they seemed to have stopped."
"Two armies?" Sasuke mumbled. " Can you see who they are? What kind of Ninjas are there?"
Naruto didn't answer but sat in silence. Then he opened his eyes, turned his head towards Sasuke with a peculiar look. "That's the weird part. I don't recognize anyone. There is also very, very little chakra moulding going on. It seems that these armies are not Ninjas. They don't use Ninjutsu." Naruto looked back towards the horizon. He was puzzled. "But, what armies this size today does not contain Ninjas?" Sasukes voice was low but Naruto still heard the question.
"I don't know Sasuke... but it seems they noticed us, or their scouts that you encountered before has reported back about us." Naruto stood up. "We are surrounded. We might as well wait for them to reach this point. I don't think it will take long."
Sasuke looked annoyed. " I guess.." He gazed at the horizon, "we should at least have a game plan for if they get hostile?" Naruto nodded, " Yes. I don't think they will if we play our cards right, it seems they are scared. Anyhow if there is no Ninjas in the armies we should have no problem escaping this scene. I always have my clones for distraction." He looked at Sasuke, "What do you have?" Sasuke shrug his shoulders, "Anything a fool can do shouldn't be a problem for me" he whispered.
Naruto looked out again and his face was concerned. "There is a lot of dead bodies around here though. And I mean, really a lot of them. Some almost entirely decayed. This fight must have lasted for a very long time. I've never heard of any countries that are waged war on this scale. And I get reports from most parts of the known world as Hookage.."
He was quiet for a moment. "Where ever we were transported it must have been far, far away from the land of fire." he paused again. "Or something has erupted in countries without our knowledge.. but how could it? So many dead people.." Sasuke felt bad to his stomach..
"I don't know Naruto..maybe it was some kind of teleportation-jutsu?" Sasuke shrugged his shoulders. Naruto thought about this. "Well however we got here or wherever we are, I must find Nila. She is not close to this place, I can't sense her at all." Naruto paused. "But as we don't have any means of getting out of here without knowing where this is..."
Sasuke nodded. "Yes, let's try to find out where we are first. I.." He hesitated. "I will help you find this Nila." He looked at Naruto again. He indeed looked a lot older. "I'm sorry Naruto, could you tell me, is this Nila....your daughter?" Naruto met Sasuke's eyes with a newfound intensity. "Yes, she is my daughter, now could you tell me something Sasuke?" Sasuke didn't answer but Naruto asked anyway. "Where have you been all these years?" Sasuke had thought of this question many times. What he would answer and how he could explain. Now, faced with the questions, he was at a loss for words. He lowered his gaze. " To much has happened Naruto.... I'm sorry, we will have to talk about that another time...." Naruto didn't avert his gaze from Sasuke. "I know we don't have much time and this is all confusing. But please start to explain it to me anyway." Naruto's voice demanded a reply. Sasuke looked up again. "Why? Naruto? What good will come of it....Ha?!" Sasuke raised his voice. "I don't have the words you seek." his voice went silent.
Naruto looked at him as his defiant expression settled down. "Words are the first step to understanding Sasuke. You may never believe me when I say that's all I want. And I do not demand the same of you. But that's at least a start." Naruto looked again to the horizon. "We thought you were dead Sasuke... To find you alive again after all these years... It feels like we can at least correct some of the wrongs of the war.. " He looked back at Sasuke. "And seeing as we are both stuck together for the time being.. Some understanding wouldn't hurt. We still have some time."
Sasuke sat down on the ground. " I give up Naruto. I never meant to stay away forever. In fact, I was heading back to the village, "somewhat". A lot of things have happened I guess. I don't even know where to start.." Sasuke looked at Naruto. "It's the same for you i figure.. When did you even get a daughter? I guess even clumpsy people can be fathers...And hookage at that....pfff"
Naruto smiled and sat down himself. "Well, that's an long story, but it starts before we last met." Naruto got a more serious look. "Speaking of that, what happened after that meeting? I know of some of your actions after our fight, but after Madara 's fall, you disappeared?" Sasuke sighed. The time had come after all. He looked up towards the sky. "You really are a fool Naruto."
He smiled.
"But I'll tell you anyway."

01-20-2010, 11:30 AM	#1
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Hello. In the fanfiction thread that we created so long ago there has been some amazing developement and story telling. When we started that thread and I wrote the beginning of Nila we had no idea it would be so popular and that so many would help us write. Now, I can't take any credit for that post as My only contribution was the beginning. Right after that start I continued the story of Nila and much happened that made me stop writing. I still enjoyed seeing where people took Nila. From time to time I came back and wrote a little more on my own path of Nila and in the end I ended up with some small chapters. I hope the fan-fic team don't mind me posting my version of that here. I will continually keep posting on this because the story is far from done. I start with the first part I wrote for the other fanfiction with only some small changes. Then I move on to the other path. - enjoy - //ShiverX __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-20-2010 at 11:33 AM.

01-20-2010, 11:35 AM	#2
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Naruto fan-fictional epilog story by ShiverX - enjoy - Part 1: The past and the future. Chapter 1: The mysterious awakening: "Shhh" this is what she thought, to the extent she actually formed her lips to the sound. The silence was proof more than anything that there was something amiss. Normally you would hear the bugs of the night or the distant sound of animals and people moving around, even at night. Many would consider Konoha to be a quiet village but it was not always so. And Nila often thought that it might be because of it's more "active" past that it never seemed to be completely silent. She could not remember one day in her entire fifteen year old life when she had heard total silence. The thought amused her and annoyed her at the same time. She loved to let her mind wonder but it was the same tendency that often got her into trouble. It was the same reason why she was still not Jounin. And there she went again! Nila snapped out of her thoughts and focused on the sounds of the night, or the lack of them. Total silence. She could hear her self breathing while she sneaked up out of bed and up to the window. She opened the panels and peeked out. Outside the village was dark, no lights was shining like they used to, was there a power outage? She could still see quite clear though as the stars and the moon shone very brightly above. As she looked up towards the moon her eyes caught a glimpse of something red. She turned her head and there was something she had never seen in her life. A red meteor was burning through the atmosphere, or thats what she thought it was at least. She had only read about it in books. Her eyes wide taking in this sight she felt somewhat drowsy. Letting the panels drop she backed into the room and sat down on the bed again, her head filled with ideas. A second later she was up and filling her kit-pack with needful things. Kuenei, scroll, some provisions her flute and some other tools. She slowly opened the door and snuck out, focusing her chakra on her feet to step lightly as to not awaken mom and dad. She came to the stairs leading down to the first floor. She could hear the faint sound of someone breathing heavy. "Good, dad is asleep" she thought and jumped up on the side wall focusing chakra to hold her in place. Sneaking down and up to the door of their bedroom while hanging from the sealing Nila watched the slight opening leading into her parents room. They were both asleep. She smiled and continued to sneak away past the kitchen and to the front door. She made a hand-sign as she dropped to the floor producing wind-chakra under her feet softening the sound as she landed. It still made some sound though and she made a face as she sat perfectly still waiting to hear if someone woke up. Her parents had always been light sleepers in regards to her sneaking out. "Well, her mom at least" she thought. During the years she had gotten quite good at it. It was never to go out and do bad stuff or meet boys or anything like that that many of the other girls her age were doing, she imagined at least. No, she had always been a bit "awake" at night and just loved roaming the nature around Konoha. It calmed her and she often slept outside, to her parent's dislike. There she went again drifting away in thought from what she had to focus on. She sighed. It seemed no one was awake still. She took her cloak, the dark one, and sneaked out closing the door real silent behind her. Outside she looked around at the now dark village. The moon was shining brightly and at the hight were their house stood overlooking the village she could see far around. Above her was the big bright red meteor falling and burning. Now when being outside she was consumed by the image. Her eyes wide she couldn't take her eyes of it. It was so close....and silent. In fact she heard nothing at all, it was unreal. Standing like that for some time she lost track of time as the meteor spread across the sky. It was so close she could se it move at quite a speed. Following it's path it neared the mountain monoliths of old that hovered over Konoha looking down and for ever watching over the villagers. The stone depiction of the past and present Hokages. She stopped for a moment at her fathers face. It looked really young compared to now but still the likeness was uncanny. It even bore a somewhat goofy look with that grin it had. She had always found it funny how her goofy father could actually be the Hokage. She new he was strong but sometimes he really didn't fit the description. She admired and loved her father but as a daughter it was hard seeing the very respected and even feared man in him. The seventh Hokage huh. She glanced at the face before and looked upon another face. More gloomy and spiky haired. He had only been Hokage for a short time but he was handsome. She blushed a little at the thought. She was not normally one to think such thoughts. Her wandering mind was interrupted by a boom and a green flash! The meteor had shifted color and was rapidly speeding up, descending! She stood up and made a hand sign. "Byakugan!" she exclaimed and her inherited eyes kicked in. She focused her eyes on the meteor and was immediately blinded by the green flames. She couldn't see past the flames! They were some sort of chakra it seemed. With her eyes she could follow the path it took in it's decent though. Noticing where it went down behind the tree's far away she took out her map and checked. It would probably be just outside the fire countries borders. Putting down her map she didn't think twice about speeding towards the crash-site. This adventure was something she was not going to miss! And as the lights started to reappear in the surrounding houses she quickened her pace towards the edge of the village. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-22-2010 at 08:07 AM.

01-20-2010, 11:37 AM	#3
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. In the meantime some distance away Sasuke slowly awoke from a dream. He was almost back at the fire counties borders and had set up camp for the night. He could clearly remember the dream. It was about his brother Itachi. In the dream he had been living with his brother at a house by a lake somewhere away from Konoha. The weirdest part was Itachi and Sasuke had both been older. In short Itachi had been alive. Sasuke concealed his face in his palm. "just a dream".... Suddenly he twitched and removed his hand from his face. His Manekyu Sharingan was activated?! "What!?" Why was the Sharingan activated like this when he just woke? Confused he got to his feet and looked around. With the Manekyu Sharingan he could see quite clear in the dark forest that surrounded him and besides, the stars and moon was out to lighten the sky. He looked up and was shocked to see that he missed the quite obvious object flying across the sky. "A meteor?" he whispered. Thinking closer on the subject it was no surprise at all. The meteor didn't make any sound, in fact, everything was in total silence. He began sweating and with all his senses on high alert he scanned the surroundings and realized nothing around him was moving. Nothing at all, no creatures, no insects. Something weird was going on, this much was clear. Sasuke turned his gaze to the meteor and fixed the sharingan on it. He could see it clearly as it was surrounded by some kind of chakra. He could even predict it's chakra projectory and thus he knew it was going to fly for some time still. Focusing closer on the meteor as to see what was behind the chakra he found himself yawning and feeling as falling to sleep. Right before he involuntarily would doze of it suddenly seemed to react to his gaze and with a blinding flash and boom it turned green. Blinded Sasuke tried to look up again just to find that the meteor had changed path. It was falling fast and it was falling towards the location where he stood. "It reacted to my Sharingan?" Sasuke thought as he gathered his equipment. "I must get out of here quick!". Sasuke began running sideways to check the meteors path, still going towards the boarders but not straight. He could see the meteor moving as he himself moved wich could only mean it was really close. Furhermore it was getting bigger by the second as it closed in on the location. Focusing chacra in his feet and legs he sped up to highest speed and with a flash he was jumping from tree to tree. After some minues, looking up and evaluating that he was out of harms way he slowed down but still kept going as to make sure he was out of the blast radius when that thing hit the ground. After yet another couple of minutes Sasuke could feel the heat from the meteor's chakra. it was burning and appeared quite physical to Sasuke's surprise. The heat-wave soared overhead and past Sasuke as the meteor made it's final decent. Sasuke jumped down behind some trees to take a final cover, he brazed himself for the impact. The impact never came. The night tuned dark again and in a moment all of the surroundings was bursting with sound once more, animals and insects. "What in the world is going on here?" thought Sasuke. "I better check it out". In Konoha Village Naruto woke up from what seemed to be a long sleep. His eyes focused to regain vision in the darkness, it was still night. He slowly sat up as to not wake the woman lying next to him. He looked down on her and smiled. After all these years he was still fascinated by just looking at her. Her blue hair and calm face as she slept. The moon and stars from outside shone into the bedroom aluminizing her figure. He smiled at the vision."To think Hinata, we almost didn't get to be together" he thought and stroked a line of hair from her cheek. Hinata stirred in her sleep and woke slowly smiling at Naruto when she saw him. "You can't sleep honey?" She sai d and he crawled down so that they where face to face. "I don't know why, I just woke and I feel completely rested" he whispered to Hinata. "Oh do you now?" Hinata smiled and kissed him. They lay like that kissing for a moment when all of a sudden a boom was heard from outside. "What the!?" was Naruto's reply as he jumped out of bed getting dressed. "That sounded like an explosion!". After dressing he looked out the window but the village was mostly silent and dark, which was weird. Only a few windows was lit. His eyes went left and right and he caught glimpse of someone running away at high speed. Whoever it was they were already some ways of. A thought struck him. "Nila!" he exclaimed. At the word Hinata sat up quickly and looked straight at him. "What?" she ordered in a somewhat upset voice. "Is Nila out again? At this hour?" Hinata got dressed and joined him at the window. Naruto kissed Hinata again. " I'm sure it wasn't her. How could she have passed the detectors I put up in the stairs and windows?" he explained. "She is smart Naruto, she wouldn't fall for those just as she haven't fallen for your other traps. Maybe she found another route." Hinata said. Naruto scratched the back of his head and smiled goofily at the remark. "Yes, she always did outsmart me. She must have gotten that from her mother" Naruto smiled again. Hinata looked at him with a smile. Go Naruto, check to see if your daughter have escaped again. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-22-2010 at 08:09 AM.

01-20-2010, 11:38 AM	#4
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Confusion and pursuit Nila was running like the wind. She laughed at the thought, wind chakra should enable you to do just that. She guessed that fire/lightning should be faster though. Her mind contemplated this as she kept jumping and moving towards the crash site. Strangely enough there had not been an noticeable explosion or crash from the meteor that she could have seen or heard. She thought about it for a moment. Something was very strange about that meteor. First of all there were the fact that chakra normally couldn't be seen with the naked eye. Second this chakra was green...and then there was the silent it brought. Maybe it had some sort of barrier that removed the sound? Nilas mind wandered again and just as she jumped into a clearing her foot was caught in a snag and she fell. In an instant she thought about using wind to soften her blow but there was no time to react, she crashed in the ground and her foot still stuck in the snag twisted painfully. She cursed her clumsiness for a second. then she looked at her foot. Nothing to bad but she wouldn't be able to move as fast anymore. As she got to her feet she felt a stinging pain in her leg. Once again she cursed her self and then started to walk fast. As the foot got used to the strain she soon sped up into somewhat of a easy sprint. Trying her best to keep the pace she soon arrived near the boarder. Once she got close she slowed down. She didn't know exactly where the meteor had fallen. She stopped and looked around. She heard animals and the sounds of the night, just as normal. The forest also looked fine, and nothing indicated impact. It was weird, there should be some sign of the impact. She couldn't have been so wrong as to where the meteor had struck? Starting to walk again she got a bad feeling. Whatever the meteor was it was becoming more and more apparent that she didn't understand it. Nila didn't like to not understand things. She would obsess over things for long times until she had at least a basic understanding of how they worked. This was the very core for her capacity with chakra-based Ninjutsu and a big reason for her results in school. Her mind was curious, or so people kept telling her. She was quite proud of the fact that she was a good "problem solver" as she thought of it. That though defined her and was something that she often depended on in uncertain situations. This was definitely one of those. Nila shook her head dispersing all the thoughts. She was going to have to be focused for this, she thought as she moved closer and closer to her fateful meeting. Sasuke was moving with a precision that would make any normal ninja seem clumsy by comparison. He moved fast and his sharingan was activated to pick anything unusual. The fact that there had been no impact alerted him on many levels. Whatever that "meteor" was it had activated his sharingan. It was in al certainty something powerful, something dangerous. He wondered if Karin had ben able to feel the chakra from the meteor if she had still been around. His trail of thought was soon interrupted as he picked up on a movement on the ground about a hundred meters in front. He landed on a branch and observed. Below, a ninja was moving at a slow pace towards the meteor area. The ninja had blue long hair, a woman. She was young and seemed to be scanning the area ahead. She didn't notice him, which was understandable, he thought and focused on her with his sharingan. There was something familiar with the ninja on the ground, but he had never met her before, that he was sure of. She had quite a large amount of chakra reserve. Did she have anything to do with the meteor? She seemed to be looking for something. Probably for where the stone had landed. Sasuke paused for a second and thought about the situation. Of course there would be more Ninjas that had seen the Meteor that would come looking for it. It was actually weird there were no more ninjas this close to the crash site. He quickly snapped out of the thought as his eyes reacted to a detail on the young ninjas clothing. A Konoha emblem! The girl was carrying a headband of Konoha on the right side of her gear. It was partly concealed by one of her smaller packs hanging from a belt-constraption over her shoulders. "Konoha haa?" He thought. That meant trouble for him. For so long he had concealed himself, not going back to that place. Sasuke's thought went to Naruto and it hit him. The likeness he had felt before, it was Naruto! Sasuke smiled, a somewhat vicious smile. This had become quite interesting. The branch twisted as the force of his chakra pressed down when he jumped into the air, following the young ninja towards the meteor. Nila felt a tremble in the earth as she moved closer to what seemed to have to be the crash-site, even if there was no signs so far. The tremble wasn't an earthquake but rather more of an stir or unrest in the earth. Nila couldn't explain it better that that. She had never felt anything like it. Just as she recovered her stance from the first shock another one came. This one didn't shake the earth but rather her senses. She felt it move up her leg and into her body. Feeling woozy she experienced something unexpected, her senses where heightened by the force. She could hear all sounds around her and see the smallest detail, extremely clear. She felt a presence behind her, hiding. She could hear it. Then as quick as she had gained it, the heightened state faded again and she exclaimed. For some reason time seemed to had stood still. Stopping she braced herself for another shock, breathing slowly trying to force her senses to focus. Did she hear anything just then or had it been her imagination? At any rate she felt like someone was watching her. What did it all mean? the force, the stalking presence? The first rule of Ninja was to conceal themselves at any sign of danger, to assert the situation before acting. This was in many ways in contrast to her fathers more robust way of doing things. "Follow your feelings Nila" - was something he had told her over and over. To trust the gutsy way. But that of course was something her mother hadn't recommended. She always tried to instill more of a calm sense into Nila, or so it seemed. Nila shook her head again, "Focus!". I need to get away from the ground, she thought, the force came from there. And I need to hide as to avoid anyone around that might not be friendly. And with that she jumped. Sasuke didn't move a muscle. The girl had stopped so suddenly he hadn't gotten the chance to properly hide his presence. He was pretty sure she had noticed him. Now she seemed to be totally still, she was probably scanning the area. Maybe she was a sensory type of Ninja? All of a sudden she jumped towards the side and some tree's standing at that side. She was making her move, he thought. She had quite the speed and had it not been for the fact that his sharingan was activated her little surprise dodge would have worked. As it were he could follow her chakra trail into the trees. He smiled. Naruto indeed, but more refined. There was no immediate rush to move forward. He could stay concealed, waiting for her to move. Sasuke made a series of hand-seals. "Shizen ma-ji no jutsu" he thought as the seals completed and immediately he became transparent. A nice little jutsu that was almost undetectable and that made him blend into the environment body and spirit. The only thing he could not hide was his life force. This had caused him quite a lot of trouble back in the days with Naruto. The girl seemed to sit still on one of the branches. With his sharingan he watched her chakra emit from the hiding place. It seemed unrestful, she was afraid. Nila's heart pounded. She was listening intensely. She felt for the first time since leaving the village that she might have made a mistake. The meteor, or whatever it was must have attracted more ninjas. Why did she not think of that before she left? She had never faced another Ninja out-side the village and the jouunin exams. She had felt the presence quite clearly at that time, but maybe it was only due to the effect of the force she had felt? Maybe there was no Ninja watching her. But who else had emitted the chakra serge, or the force that shook the ground? She thought back to her learnings under Master Shikamaru about chakra types and strategies. Earth type, not strong against wind but also not weak against it. If there was a fight the outcome would probably come down to techniques. As long as the person stayed hidden there was not much Nila could do. She had never been able to master the shadow clone technique her father was so famous for. She had to the most been able to hold one clone, and not for to long. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-22-2010 at 08:10 AM.

01-20-2010, 11:39 AM	#5
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Some time had passed and the girl hadn't moved at all. Her chakra was beginning to stabilize, she was getting more calm and sure of herself. Sasuke breathed slowly, time was on his side and he had no interest in confronting the girl yet, he was merely following her for now. The meteor had to have something to do with this shinobi and he was determined to find out what. What other reason would a Konoha Ninja be doing here? He felt like he had come across something huge. For some reason the girl had some relationship to Naruto and whatever that cluts did it usually ended in something interesting. He smiled at the thought. Obviously deciding the immediate threat was over, the girl slowly began to move forwards again. She was still concealed like a shinoby should but she still moved with some speed. Sasuke exhaled and silently followed her, making sure she couldn't detect him. He kept some distance but her chakra trail was easy enough to follow. Suddenly she turned quite strongly. "Trying to avoid followers by changing directions" he thought as he easily followed after. She also seemed to speed up and Sasuke had to let some of his defenses down to keep up, she was much faster than he had originally thought. After what seemed to be quite awhile she slowed down and Sasuke resumed his fail-safe silence mode. The forest around them started to end and tree's to land on became scarce. He adjusted and took to the ground. He could move faster on the ground but was more exposed. Suddenly the girl's chakra stopped all together. With the sharingan he saw ahead that she was standing still at what seemed to be a clearing by a river. He closed in and hid behind a tree to observe. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-22-2010 at 08:12 AM.

01-20-2010, 11:40 AM	#6
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Lost into dream. The clearing was bigger than it initially seemed and Nila knew she was in the right place. She could feel something pulsating from up ahead, and soon she could see it. The green fire was still burning and the light it gave of was shining in a pulsating matter. The meteor was not a big as she initially thought, or had it become smaller? She could feel energy emitting from the fires and she stopped some meters away from the stone. Looking at the meteor and the flames her head felt heavy and she noticed that even here there was no sound around. Not even the flames made any sound at all. For some reason, somehow it was very alluring, the green flames. She took a sep forward without knowing why and yawned as drowsiness filled her body. She felt as in trance as another step was made, and then another. Every step closer to the meteor and more unaware of her surroundings, the green light felt so comfortable in her mind. She drifted of into a dream. Sasuke had been patient but something was wrong with this situation. The girl had not moved at all for some time. Just standing there and staring as if she had fallen asleep. He made a snap decision. He had to confront her. Maybe she was waiting for something but whatever it was she had clearly reached her destination. He threw the shifting dark-blue and silver-grey cloak over his back and pulled the hood up. The cloak made him shift in and out of the environment and made it hard for people to focus on the details of his appearance. The hood concealed his face, better to be sure she couldn't describe him later. Deeming that his concealment was suffice he jumped out from the trees and into the clearing right behind the young Kunoichi. She still didn't move. Maybe she hadn't noticed him? He took a somewhat casual stance but still keeping his defenses intact. He was not worried about this Kunoichi, but one thing he had learned about Ninjas and about Naruto in particular was that he should never underestimate surprises or opponents until he had a full understanding of them. He had learned this the hard way and was still paying for those mistakes. Anyway, he had become an expert in asserting situations and taking mesures to always have the upper hand. He approached the girl slowly. "Oy! Konoha Shinobi!" He stopped and observed. "What are you doing out here?" She still didn't move. " Are you here for that strange meteor?" No reply. There was definitely something wrong, the girl was unresponsive. He took some steps sideways to get a better look, and activated the sharingan. The face of the girl was somewhat concealed as she seemed to be looking downwards towards the ground. He watched her chakra, it was very calm. And then he realized! She was sleeping, she was standing up and sleeping! "Naruto indeed!" he thought. Annoyed by the situation he approached her. "Oy!!" he called a little louder. Still no response. She seemed to be heavily asleep. He scanned her appearance. She was wearing a dark cloak probably used for sneaking in the night. Over her shoulders bas a belt contraption that followed her back and chest. It was used for hanging bags, Kuenei and the sorts. By her side was the headband of Konoha. She seemed to be carrying a book or two in her light backpack and the rest of her gear was also seemingly made to be light but full of places to put small stuff. He noticed a flute sticking out from one of the pockets. He couldn't define any particular fighting style in her gear except the kuenei but she seemed to be a jack of many traits with the various objects. There was definitely something suspiciously familiar about the girl. She looked alot like Naruto, but her hair was darker with a blue nyance. But the thing that stood out the most was her eyes. Sasuke recognized the Byakugan immediately but it was still different from the one he remembered from Konoha. A mutation maybe? "A daughter" he thought. "Maybe, she seems to be the right age for that." However it was she didn't seem to wake up. Maybe if he shook her? He stepped forward and put his hand on her shoulder. "Nila.." Just like that she woke up and felt fully awake, as shaken from a weird dream. She was still standing in front of the meteor and the flames was still burning but she was alot closer now. She had no memory of how she had approached the stone. Had she fallen asleep? What was going on here!? She looked at the flames and the stone and realized something she missed before! The stone was not touching the ground! It was hovering just around half a meter above the ground. She took a step back and suddenly the stone began to move. It transcended slowly towards the ground. Nila took another step backwards. As the stone touched the ground she could feel the force surging outward from it trembling the earth and her senses. It stirred her chakra and she became dizzy. Somewhere she could feel a touch on her shoulder just as the shadow clone was released. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 01-22-2010 at 08:12 AM.

02-17-2010, 09:48 AM	#7
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Chapter: The destined fight This time Sasuke had his sharingan on the clones. Roaring at him with another Rasengan Naruto used two clones as usual, that made it a total of three Narutos running at Sasuke. He felt other clones moving around him but nowhere was the familiar feel of the Rasengan present. He only needed to dodge this one. Sasuke prepared to jump to the side in a new flash move. This move involved stunning the target with a Sharingan infused Illusion just for a second. Sasuke was sure that there was no point trying to capture Naruto in an Illusion. That method hadn't worked on Naruto for a long time. But stunning his senses for a second was a valid strategy. After sidestepping Naruto, Sasuke should be able to outmaneuver him and bring him down. Fire bonds should be sufficient. The trick was to disable him fast, before he could call for the Kyuubi's help. Naruto was stubborn and vastly superior in healing and lasting capabilities, but Sasuke was technically better as long as he ended the fight fast. Or so he hoped. There had never been a fight with Naruto in which he hadn't improved beyond Sasukes expectations. This was going to be difficult indeed. Sasuke focused on Naruto with his Sharingan and noticed something he missed at first glance. Naruto's chakra was very strong compared to normal. There was no time to reflect anymore at this as Naruto closed and Sasuke felt the chakra from Rasengan start to pull the wind around him. The sound of the swirling energies was all he could hear and he prepared to sidestep. Naruto was focusing straight at him and his gaze was as piercing as ever. All of a sudden Naruto's clones jumped up into the air as if wanting to block a jump. Lowering his eyes instantly again to face the original Naruto on the ground Sasuke was chocked to see that Naruto had split in three!! As if foreseeing Sasuke's sidestep these new Narutos spred sideways, each carrying a Rasengan of their own. Naruto had hidden them behind!! That was why his chakra seemed stronger, Sasuke thought in panic!! There was no time, a second away! "Susanoo!!" Sasuke formed the words as his Manekyu activated and shielded him from the blow of two Rasengans. The third Naruto seemed to blur and the a second after it crashed into Susanoo's back with Rasengan! The force of the three Rasengans pressed against Susanno's defenses and the force turned Sasuke's senses upside down. He could feel Susanno almost giving way to the strength in the blow. There was a high screeching sound as the Rasen shuriken formed overhead where the two clones had jumped up into the air. The Susanoo would not last! "Amaterasu!!" Sasuke screamed the words as the clones roared down at him. They disappeared in a "poof" as the black flames hit them! The Rasen Shuriken spun out of control and slashed Susanoo's top part continuing and hitting the ground just some meters of. The impact activated the expanding eruption and the ground exploded. Swiping the ground the Susanoo's sword took out the frontal clones at the same time as the Rasen shuriken shock-wave hit both Sasuke and Naruto throwing them to the side. In the air Sasuke felt the damaging-strain on Susanoo forcing it to be released. Almost loosing consciousness from the impact his Sharingan was slowly fading from him also. He landed hard on the ground next to Naruto. The air pushed out of his lungs he coughed and struggled to breathe. Sasuke slowly regained his consciousness and looked to his side where Naruto was also struggling to get up. "Naruto!...." Sasuke's breath blew some dirt away. "Shut up!" Naruto's voice roared in Sasukes head. The intensity of Naruto's voice, the anger, was something Sasuke had never heard before. His inside froze as fear gripped him for the first time in so many years. It was all wrong. Why where they even here? The chaos he experienced in that moment shattered his calm. He was panicking. Only few times had he lost control over his posture in all of his life, and being who he was he didn't like it. He felt a rage towards Naruto and the whole situation. Taking control of himself and his surroundings he decided that fighting was not the answer right now. They were both in this situation together. He got to his legs before Naruto, staggering a little he turned to his old teammate. "Naruto! stop this!!" he exhaled while trying to find balance. Naruto also turned to him and Sasuke saw that he was no longer in Sannin mode but still in rage. "Let's calm down!" he tried. Naruto stood up straight and his face turned mild. He seemed to calm down. Sasuke also took a more lenient stance. All of a sudden the ground at Sasuke's feet sprouted arms that latched to Sasuke's legs. Up came clones hidden in the earth. "When!?" Sasuke swore as two clones from above came crashing down towards him again with a huge Rasengan! Sasuke looked at the Naruto in-front of him in fear. This Naruto had a dead-serious face. "This is for Nila you bastard!" he whispered. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 02-19-2010 at 08:00 AM.

02-17-2010, 09:49 AM	#8
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Naruto could see the fear in Sasuke as the Rasengan closed in. The whole event lasted only a couple of seconds but for some reason it seemed longer. It all seemed to be moving in slow-motion. If it had been at any other time or any other person Naruto would have stayed his hand. But Sasuke was responsible for Nila's death in some way! There was no forgiveness! Naruto felt cold inside, there was nothing left now, Nila had been his life! In the last second Sasuke turned his eyes towards Naruto, as their eyes met Sasuke smiled! The explosion shook the earth again and burrowed deep inside creating a crater. Naruto had felt Sasuke's clone disperse the second Rasengan had hit it. Somehow Sasuke had fooled him with a lightning clone. As his own clone disappeared he could feel the lightning-based jutsu that had stunned his clone the last second before release. He focused to feel the surrounding energies. Where was Sasuke?! From his own hiding place among some clones at the side he didn't feel anything. He needed Sannin-mode for this. "Naruto!" Sasuke's voice caught his attention, he turned towards the tree. Up in the tree he spotted Sasuke, almost invisible against the branch. Naruto made another hand-seal. "Stop!" Sasuke's voice echoed. over the now silent field. Somehow the world had turned to include only him and Naruto. The capabilities of them both left no time for anything other than extreme focus. Naruto didn't seem to slow down much. He was already gathering Nature chakra at the same time as clones surrounded Sasuke and some Rasengans started to form. Sasuke's thought raced. He needed to stop the fighting. There was a war going on around them, they needed to figure out what was going on. Nila! he thought. The remembrance hit him. This is what Naruto said. Naruto thought he had killed the girl. "Naruto! Stop! I did not kill Nila.." he tasted the name. "I did not kill the Konoha Ninja! I swear it" Sasuke's raised his voice. "I did not kill her, you hear me Naruto?!" Sasuke's voice was dfferen't somehow. Naruto heard his voice, but he didn't want to hear the words. He was hurting to bad. "Nila..." he whispered. "I don't want to hear your excuses!!" he roared and charged straight at Sasuke with a newly formed Rasen Shuriken. This one would not miss. He just wanted to end it. All the clones jumped up and made the hand-seal of "air-Barrier!!" Surrounding Sasuke a thick field of air quickly pressed inward enclosing Sasuke. "Now!" Naruto thought as he released some of the Kyuubi's chakra into the ground and up into the tree connecting to Sasukes feet. Again Sasuke was completely secured in spot. As before Naruto closed his eyes and reached out in thought to the mark the kyuubi chakra left on it's victims. In a flash he connected to Sasuke with his Rasen shuriken. The teleportation was so fast that Sasuke probably had no time to react. The explosion knocked him back again and he hit the ground hard once more. For a second he passed out. The explosion obliterated the tree and Sasuke with it. Lying for some minutes just breathing Naruto felt utterly spent. "Wasn't it you who preached about how we must let go of anger and hatred?!" Sasuke's voice was somewhat criticizing. Naruto slowly turned around and faced Sasuke who was standing somewhat kneeled behind him. He was in bad shape."It seems your Lightning clones takes a lot of chakra" Naruto panted. He was also very tired. "Your not attacking me anymore? And why in the world did you attack that clone if you knew it wasn't real?!" "Because I needed you to reveal yourself" Naruto's voice came from behind Sasuke!. He tried to turn around but felt that he was trapped in yet another jutsu. At his feet he saw with his sharingan traces of Kyuubi chakra that mixed with Naruto's normal chakra formed a seal that locked his senses. the seal pressed out of the ground and surrounded him. He was trapped! Damn! Another new jutsu, Naruto never stopped to surprise! "Don't even think about trying anything. Inside that seal I can track any movement you try to make!" Naruto's voice was cold. "Naruto, I told you. I did not Kill her! I don't even think she is dead!" Sasuke's voice revealed panic. Naruto felt his senses sharpen at this remark. "Don't try to lie your way out of this Sasuke. This time you have gone to far." Naruto started to walk around Sasuke. "I can tell when your lie. In this field there is no escaping the truth!" Naruto stopped right in front of Sasuke and faced him. Sasuke looked Naruto straight into the eyes. "I swear Naruto. The Ninja was unconscious on the green meteor when I found her. I don't understand it but somehow It got a hold of me too and I ended up here..." Sasuke's mind raced again trying to figure out the truth. Naruto observed carefully how Sasuke seemed to struggle. "I don't think she is dead. I ended up here.. and She might as well have. Wherever this is..." Sasuke whispered the last part and looked around. Naruto could feel that Sasuke thought he was telling the truth. "That might be the case Sasuke, but I should still catch you and bring you back, for all that you did." Naruto still felt angry. "Maybe, but look at where we are Naruto... We need to figure out what is going on first... Haven't you noticed?!" Sasuke pointed with his gaze to the sides around them. Naruto looked around. All over was bodies and a huge open field. He could feel two huge masses of people at the opposing sides of each-other far of. "What the!?" he whispered. "That is two armies that is closing in." Sasuke's voice was calm. "Some scouts are already around. They almost hit me with some arrows before you came here." he paused. "We both seems to be in this together, whatever it is..." Naruto did nothing for some seconds. He just stood there watching the fields. It looked like he was searching for something. All of a sudden Sasuke felt the barrier release and he fell to his knees. Standing up he looked at Naruto again. He hadn't moved at all. He was like a statue. Suddenly he moved. He turned his head towards Sasuke with a complexing look. "Do you have any idea where we are?" he asked. Sasuke was surprised at his everyday calm tone of voice. "No," he simply replied. "If they shot at you before....why have they stopped now?" Naruto turned to gaze at the field again. Sasuke felt a chill run through his spine. The silence was for-boding and Naruto seemed to be a perfect mirror of it. Next chapter: The victims of War. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. Last edited by ShiverX; 03-23-2010 at 10:59 AM.

05-22-2010, 10:36 PM	#9
JEWbii Genin Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: too scared of the nuts on this forum to fill this out Posts: 128 Thanks: 6 Thanked 65 Times in 25 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. can a mod please drop the sticky on this??? its been tree months since the last entry.

05-28-2010, 02:58 AM	#10
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. And for that I am sorry. I will try to post something soon. Life you know ;D It has a habit of getting in the way of a creative state of mind. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road.

07-08-2010, 08:50 AM	#11
ruck1b Academy Student Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 15 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Yo shiver..you got to finish this man. So far the story is great.

07-08-2010, 11:48 AM	#12
Sensei-Q ✪✪✪✪✪ Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Mijdrecht, Utrecht, Netherlands. Posts: 4,279 Thanks: 5,180 Thanked 2,904 Times in 1,711 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Oh this is great. Great indeed. __________________ "Science has made us gods even before we are worthy of being men." Jean Rostand

07-09-2010, 07:46 AM	#13
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Im working on another part, so it will be up in a couple of days I hope. (going on vacation soon so I can write ;D) __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road.

07-20-2010, 07:39 PM	#14
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. The victims of War. The horse came galloping at high speed along the road. Not having any time to hide, Nila was still in the tree and Ryo only moved to the side. As the horse approached Ryo it stopped. As the dust settled Nila could see a brown haired young man on top of the horse. He was dressed in a green leather-armor vest and at his side he had a sword in a travel-belt. He looked like a soldier. His green eyes was strict as he glared at Ryo. "Where have you been?", the mans voice had a rather deep voice that implied authority. "I could ask you the same question." Ryo's face was also serious. Nila could feel the tension. Then Ryo's face changed from serious to more of a goofy look, in that regard he reminded Nila of her father. "I just came from the mountain, I've been fishing for your return!" Ryo seemed really excited. The man still looked somewhat angry but his face softened somehow. "You know what I have said about going alone to the mountains? It's not safe! What if something would happen to you when I'm not here? I could never..." he was interrupted by Ryo. "I know! I know! But I knew you would come home today and I wanted to surprise you! I wasn't going to stay this late but something happened!" Ryo was still smiling and the man's face changed even more at this remark. He became more alert, looking behind Ryo. "Are you alright? What happened?" Ryo smiled again. "Yes, I'm fine. I met someone, someone I think you'll like!" At this remark, Nila responded. "Hello! I'm Nila!" The man was utterly surprised by Nila's voice, he had not seen her in the tree. At this height she was just a little above his head. In surprise he almost fell from the horse. Taking control at the last second he maneuvered the horse towards the other side of the road, whilst pulling out his sword. "Who in the..?!" The man readied himself for combat. "Stop!" Ryo's voice sounded upset. Nila did nothing but sit squatted on the tree-branch waiting calmly. The man looked down at Ryo and lowered his sword. "Is this the person?" he asked. Ryo nodded and looked happy again. "This is Nila. We met in the mountains. Don't worry, she is a wanderer but not a bandit." Ryo looked up at Nila. " Nila, this is my friend that I was talking about, Raiku." He made a gesture at the man on the horse. "He is a guard here in the town." Ryo turned to Raiku. "This is Nila...em" he hesitated. " Nila Uzumaki Hatake, em I believe was her full name." Nila watched Raiku closely but he didn't seem to recognize the name. She thought, another one without a family name? Raiku pointed at her. "What are you doing in the tree?" Ryo answered his question before Nila could. "Oh nothing Raiku, she was just showing me a trick." Raiku didn't look satisfied with the answer and he looked rather suspiciously at Nila. "Forgive me, but I am as Ryo said a townsguard. It is my job to be careful." Raiku paused. "My name is Raiku." he made a subtle bow in the saddle. "Again, I'm sorry but I don't recognize your name or appearance. Could you please tell me who you are and why you met Ryo here in the mountains?" Nila looked at him in silence for some seconds. " My name is Nila Uzumaki Hatake. I came from a country far away. It seems neither you or Ryo here has ever heard of it. It's called the country of fire and I live in a village named Konoha. I will be honest with you Raiku.." Nila tasted the name. " I don't know where this land is situated in comparison to Konoha, so I don't know if it's south, north, west or east?" She thought about the meaning of this. " I don't even know what the name of this country is?" Raiku was also silent for a moment. "It's true I've never heard of this country of fire. Maybe it's one of the old countries that disappeared in the fall of the Allied lands so many years ago? There was many countries that ceased to exist at the time. Even this country was a part of that great nation. What the name of this area was has long since been lost. We still have local names, but this is no longer a country with a name or borders. No one rules here. Did perhaps your parents or caretakers tell you about this Konoha?" Nila looked at Raiku with disbelief, "a country without a name? Or not a country at all?" she whispered to herself. Where in the world was she? How had she come to this place? "Well, no.. I actually came from that place. I was there as late as yesterday. I think.." She paused and thoughts raced through her head. Had a lot of time passed since she fell asleep? " I was raised there and lived happily there up till now?" Nila was confused and felt fatigue. Raiku dismounted the horse and looked up again. " Then how is it you came to meet Ryo here in the mountains, and how could you have traveled so far as from a country we don't know about in just a day?" Even Ryo seemed puzzled by this. Nila made a signal that she was going to jump down and Raiku nodded. Nila jumped carefully down to the ground as not to hurt her tired body. "Now there's a question I can't answer" Nila looked at Ryo as well. " As Ryo can tell you I kind of woke up in the mountains, in a somewhat unusual way. I actually fell onto Ryo. I have no idea how I came to be in that place. The last thing I remember was falling asleep outside my village at this strange stone that had dropped from the sky." Nila frowned at the how her story sounded. Raiku also didn't look to happy with that explanation but he let go of the sword and seemed to relax. "Well, I'm sure that either way your telling the truth or have a reason for keeping it from us you don't seem to be a dishonest person. I don't know what it is, but you seem trustworthy enough, and I'm usually a good judge of character. If you wanted to hurt Ryo you could have done so by now. And you don't seem to be a demon, even if your appearance is different." At this remark Nila smiled. "How do you know I'm not a demon?" she laughed at the thought. "I mean, look at my eyes and my hair-color? I guess this is what your referring to?" Ryo looked annoyed by Raiku's questions. "Yes, this is indeed what I mean. But it's not the first time I've seen different appearances. I have often traveled protecting our caravan, and in the fights with monsters of the lands that i've experienced I have learned to sense a demon's special presence. And it's normally pretty obvious that your not dealing with a human. I don't get that feeling from you." He paused. "In fact, I get a feeling I can trust you." he smiled at Nila and a whole new character was revealed with this new emotion. He seemed to be a very warm person. Even Ryo's face changed to a more carefree one. Nila returned the smile. "Well, that's good then. These eyes are a family trait. I assure you I am no demon." Raiko started to walk towards town and the two followed him. "As your background, let's talk more about that once we get inside the walls and have something warm to eat." They all agreed and kept walking towards the gate, Ryo bombarding Raiku with questions about his trip. __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road.

07-20-2010, 07:40 PM	#15
ShiverX Wind User Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 386 Thanks: 46 Thanked 215 Times in 60 Posts	Re: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Naruto was still "feeling" the armies as he had explained it. Sasuke also scouted the surroundings and at the same time glared at Naruto. Naruto was sitting in a meditation pose, gathering natural energies at the same time no doubt. He looked older than when they met so many ears ago. Somehow he looked to be a lot more wise. Sasuke shook his head. A fool is always a fool. He smiled at the many memories they shared. "So, what are you sensing?" he asked, tired of waiting in silence. Naruto didn't move, but answered. " There is indeed at least two huge armies... They are moving slowly towards us again. Before they seemed to have stopped." "Two armies?" Sasuke mumbled. " Can you see who they are? What kind of Ninjas are there?" Naruto didn't answer but sat in silence. Then he opened his eyes, turned his head towards Sasuke with a peculiar look. "That's the weird part. I don't recognize anyone. There is also very, very little chakra moulding going on. It seems that these armies are not Ninjas. They don't use Ninjutsu." Naruto looked back towards the horizon. He was puzzled. "But, what armies this size today does not contain Ninjas?" Sasukes voice was low but Naruto still heard the question. "I don't know Sasuke... but it seems they noticed us, or their scouts that you encountered before has reported back about us." Naruto stood up. "We are surrounded. We might as well wait for them to reach this point. I don't think it will take long." Sasuke looked annoyed. " I guess.." He gazed at the horizon, "we should at least have a game plan for if they get hostile?" Naruto nodded, " Yes. I don't think they will if we play our cards right, it seems they are scared. Anyhow if there is no Ninjas in the armies we should have no problem escaping this scene. I always have my clones for distraction." He looked at Sasuke, "What do you have?" Sasuke shrug his shoulders, "Anything a fool can do shouldn't be a problem for me" he whispered. Naruto looked out again and his face was concerned. "There is a lot of dead bodies around here though. And I mean, really a lot of them. Some almost entirely decayed. This fight must have lasted for a very long time. I've never heard of any countries that are waged war on this scale. And I get reports from most parts of the known world as Hookage.." He was quiet for a moment. "Where ever we were transported it must have been far, far away from the land of fire." he paused again. "Or something has erupted in countries without our knowledge.. but how could it? So many dead people.." Sasuke felt bad to his stomach.. "I don't know Naruto..maybe it was some kind of teleportation-jutsu?" Sasuke shrugged his shoulders. Naruto thought about this. "Well however we got here or wherever we are, I must find Nila. She is not close to this place, I can't sense her at all." Naruto paused. "But as we don't have any means of getting out of here without knowing where this is..." Sasuke nodded. "Yes, let's try to find out where we are first. I.." He hesitated. "I will help you find this Nila." He looked at Naruto again. He indeed looked a lot older. "I'm sorry Naruto, could you tell me, is this Nila....your daughter?" Naruto met Sasuke's eyes with a newfound intensity. "Yes, she is my daughter, now could you tell me something Sasuke?" Sasuke didn't answer but Naruto asked anyway. "Where have you been all these years?" Sasuke had thought of this question many times. What he would answer and how he could explain. Now, faced with the questions, he was at a loss for words. He lowered his gaze. " To much has happened Naruto.... I'm sorry, we will have to talk about that another time...." Naruto didn't avert his gaze from Sasuke. "I know we don't have much time and this is all confusing. But please start to explain it to me anyway." Naruto's voice demanded a reply. Sasuke looked up again. "Why? Naruto? What good will come of it....Ha?!" Sasuke raised his voice. "I don't have the words you seek." his voice went silent. Naruto looked at him as his defiant expression settled down. "Words are the first step to understanding Sasuke. You may never believe me when I say that's all I want. And I do not demand the same of you. But that's at least a start." Naruto looked again to the horizon. "We thought you were dead Sasuke... To find you alive again after all these years... It feels like we can at least correct some of the wrongs of the war.. " He looked back at Sasuke. "And seeing as we are both stuck together for the time being.. Some understanding wouldn't hurt. We still have some time." Sasuke sat down on the ground. " I give up Naruto. I never meant to stay away forever. In fact, I was heading back to the village, "somewhat". A lot of things have happened I guess. I don't even know where to start.." Sasuke looked at Naruto. "It's the same for you i figure.. When did you even get a daughter? I guess even clumpsy people can be fathers...And hookage at that....pfff" Naruto smiled and sat down himself. "Well, that's an long story, but it starts before we last met." Naruto got a more serious look. "Speaking of that, what happened after that meeting? I know of some of your actions after our fight, but after Madara 's fall, you disappeared?" Sasuke sighed. The time had come after all. He looked up towards the sky. "You really are a fool Naruto." He smiled. "But I'll tell you anyway." __________________ Game over naruto! - Hell no! I still have lives left! Like a shadow, like a wind.. See my latest 509-510 prediction: Or Fan-fictional ending: - Reminiscing in the rain - Also see my: Uzumaki Hatake Nila Saga, a Naruto Epilogue. Or why not take a look at my Naruto fanfictional ending, peace at the end of a road. 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