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Old 02-17-2007, 08:43 PM   #16
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pretty good. You just need a little more focus in character development and where you attention is suppose to be.
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Old 02-18-2007, 08:57 AM   #17
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it was pretty good.... dont rush ur self.... perfection takes time.... keep it up!
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Old 02-18-2007, 09:54 AM   #18
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that was really good. i actually felt obliged to read the whole thing. and i hate reading long stories. lol that was cool. can't wait to read more.
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Old 02-18-2007, 11:49 AM   #19
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your NL life seems so much more exciting ^^, great story, im sure if u refine it this thing could sell...much better than a lot of crap floatin' around these days
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Old 02-18-2007, 01:51 PM   #20
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Wow really interesting XD

Keep goin Lily ^_^
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Old 02-18-2007, 05:13 PM   #21
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like...wow lily o.o
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Old 02-19-2007, 10:35 AM   #22
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excellent chapter i would say.... this chapter is full of mystery and a teaser somehow that makes me want more to read.... good job!
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:18 AM   #23
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Yay, here comes chapter 5
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:47 AM   #24
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Told ya

I liked it and I didn't think the whole Lily/Rose thing was confusing. Keep it up and I can't wait to read the rest, even though I pretty much know what all happens...seeing as how as I was there when it actually happened >.>
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Old 02-20-2007, 12:52 AM   #25
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again nice chapter....

ehmmm.... too many adjectives >.<... thats all i could say...

atleast i knew someone included in ur story already >.>
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Old 02-20-2007, 05:14 PM   #26
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Wow, very nice chapters, well done, only a few mistakes here and there but barely noticeable. I say you've done a fine job on these updates of yours.
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Old 02-21-2007, 12:15 AM   #27
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very nice chapter..... it gets exciting every chapter... good job


i hav to comment on the "to" that it should be "too", i alwys notice that ever since i 1st read this fanfic....
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Old 02-21-2007, 02:30 AM   #28
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I liked it, and not just cause I was in it...but you did describe my personality perfectly, then again if there was anyone who could do that, it'd be you.

I love reading these chapters and hope you keep up the good work, but dont work yourself too hard. I know ya put these things out almost at one per day, so what I meant is take a day or so break every now and then.
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Old 02-22-2007, 11:36 AM   #29
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*shifty eyes* you see nothing, NOTHING YOU HEAR ME?! <.< >.>
uhmm o_o' ok.....

i'll be w8ing for it lily =]
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Old 03-03-2007, 02:05 PM   #30
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Many lulz are in this "story".

As far as actual story writing and literary talent goes, the "NL Anime" is severely lacking. Most of your sentences are awkward and they do not always flow together.

I did Lul many times when reading this. The name alone made me believe that you made an attempt to animate as forum, which is lul worthy by it self. The fact that you make them seem as towns, have it center around you AND greatly twist the personalities of the people in your story is fuckin' eh. I thought it was one of the stupidest things I have ever read, and remember, I read my own posts.

I do kind of like how you incorporate some of the oldies into this, and many of the events closely mirror actual things that have happened on NL.
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