Lily229

*points to their above conversation* sometimes, reading between the lines helps. I don't know, perhaps it's just me but just from what you've been saying to me during this "wonderful" conversation it seems like you just auto hated it. Relaxed girlfriend, I apologize for misinterupting your words, force of habit you can say ^^.

*cracks knuckles* Well, HE doesn't have to be in it, SHIKA FROM MY STORY will be staring in this one ^^. As I told him, his net name, Shikamaru, is up for grabs. Who says Shika's shika anyway? could be Nara_Shikamaru I'm talking about (that was his name before i changed it of course so who knows?)

anyways, i have school in the morning. Please stop the arguing here -.-; PM me if you want to continue this. As for me, I'm going to bed

and for NLA fans:

I promise! I'll get working on it tomorrow after school.....hopefully >.<;;;;;. If anything else, I'll definetely get Pure Sin up (ACK FINALLY!!). Hope to make it just as good ^^. *cheezy anime peace sign* anyways, signing off.
Mooch, I hope you read Pure Sin if anything else. ^^

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For the love of God sstop the fighting ladies, I dont wanna bring out the pimp hand but I will!

ANYWAY I finally caught up reading the story an I am pleased, the whole Sakura thing an her part in the story was just funny cause she seemed like she was a cute little girl back then(cant say that so much now ROFL)
Also hearing/learning about the oldies like Nelson an ph3 is nice aswell, Great Job Lily

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*Sakura*

believe it or not, i was the sweetest person on earth before i met lily

she made me evil -.-; even horus said that xD

Shikamaru

obviously its not nara_shikamaru you're talking about, he cant be quite like me. plus he never did any of the actions you may or may not include

But yeah i dont care, i just hope you get what im saying when i tells ya it aint right to includes them peoples in yur story if they aint okays wit it. So now run along and do your fanfic

[Daisuke]

Solution: Add a disclaimer like the one at the start of southpark. It's a story, get over it.

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Lily229

ok, finally got the fucking chapter finished and just grammar checking it right now @.@ i might change somethings but not sure >.>;;

ANYWAYS

the real reason why I'm posting is for all you annoy...i mean haters out there who don't want to be in my story. Well ok, let me explain a simple fact to you to stop all the damn "It's against my rights! I'LL SUE!" crap that's going on. Daisuke suggested I put up a disclaimer that I don't own anyone or whatever in my fanfic and that all characters are BASED off of the real people but are, in fact, fictional. Tell me, when was the last time you shot lazer beams from your eyes? Hmmm? This is a fanFICTION people, just like if you were to go to fanfic.net or whatever and see tons upon tons of naruto based stories. Are any of them true? Nope, just something made from derranged fan people with no lives (ouch i just insulted myself >.<). And as for this whole "It's my identity" crap....it's your net identity peoples. Do you realize how many people are named Shikamaru or whatever because of Naruto? Going by that logic, then I'm entitled to a hell of a large sum because I went to forum the other day and Lily229 was already taken and I was fucking pissed. o.O; SOMEONE STOLE MY NET IDENTITY! *bitches**whines*

now lets all deal and enjoy the story ^^.

@Shika

yeah i get what you're saying, but I don't think you get what I'm saying. Besides, I already got the story plotted out in my head.

OH YEAH!!!

Once (if ever >.< at this rate) I'm done with NLA, I plan on making 3 NLA run off stories that are just completely from my imagination. Don't worry it won't take away from the storyline basics and yada yada. But like, I already have the ending planned out but then I plan on backtracking and going back to a little bit after the planned time skip and work on a few stories that weren't in there. Sound fun? ^^. I especially like the first one. I plan on including every member in the 1st and 3rd, but the second ones all about the Mods. Can't wait! Anyways, give me about 10 minutes and I'll have chapter 11 posted SORRY FOR THE WAIT!!! Sakura, I have a feeling you'll like this one ^^.

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OnE473

This was a great chapter, i liked it alot it added more to the story and developed lily's character more.

Plus i got to see me =P

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wow simple wow, had plenty of Sakura in that chatper, seen some other charictors i kno, was all over the place kinna hard for me to keep up, with, cuz i havent read most of the earlyer chaters......so im pritty much at a loss storyline wais, but lily is the best later

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Shino

This chapter was good. I've already told you my views on the Sakatsu character. I never knew Sakura was so sweet and innocent before...I just figured she was pure evil from the start >.>

I know things in your real life are getting busy and taking up more time and stuff, so take your time with writing the next chapter....but not too long >.>

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Aruko

Holy shit, you're a live!


*goes off to read chapter AND agrees on the little rant Lily gave about the fiction shit*

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Lily229

haha I love you Aruko *hugs* You always were my favorite but don't tell Shino that ^.O

Anyways, since I wrote Pure Sin today I'm going to work on NLA this weekend....THAT'S MY ONLY CONCERN!!! >.<;;; lol. Hope you all liked the chapter ^^

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*Sakura*

lol yay a chapter full of me in it!

xD yay bunny but with an ugly name ;_; i'll try drawing him <3 looking forward to reading your next chapter lily!

shino- BELIEVE IT! =/

Lily229

It was all I could think of T.T Betweem NLA character development, manga drawings, doodles and pure sin I was like "oh fuck it, she found it in a fucking tree -.-;" xD

He's all cute and cuddily when he's normal bunny size but don't forget the deranged looking rabbit when he gets bigger xD.

oh and key brought something up last night. Where you all confused at the end where lily wakes up and says what a weird dream? cause it wasn't suppose to be a dream @.@;

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*Sakura*

i'll draw 2 then, the cute version and the evil version xD
& yeah i was confused, i forgot to tell you about that >_<

Lily229

shit....-.-; well let me explain

See, Sakura did get kidnapped but Lily wakes up saying what a weird dream because she hears Sakura's screams in her sleep. I guess I didn't describe it well @.@ now you get it?

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