The Genius FC - Page 52

AnticitizenOne · 09-12-2007, 09:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharingan Lord

I know it's a joke, but please, this FC does not revolve around you and your characters. Your characters weren't the only ones ignored, alright. I'm commenting them because they drew drawings.

If you knew it was a joke, then why did you turn it into a serious situation by reprimanding me for thinking this FC "revolves around me". Right now you sound like a parent giving a lecture to a five-year-old child, and that's not a respectful way to talk, especially in your case where you're contradicting yourself by saying you knew it was a joke then reprimanding me for making the joke itself. You also had no reason, even based solely on information from YOUR OWN POST, to write that. Please refrain from treating people like me as your inferiors, they don't take kindly to it, most moreso than I.

UchihaTaijiya · 09-12-2007, 09:59 PM

Yo, if anyone wants to change their list because of the new characters introduced, feel free to just PM me, k?

And I know that B|ack F|re Keeper plans to submit a character soon as well.

Oh and if any of you newer members want to join in on the fanfic, just say so and I'll PM you some details and what not. <3

And I'm about to add the newest characters to the first page ~

Shrike:

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Originally Posted by Sharingan Lord

Wow...I forgot to mention it, but UT brought it up. Kendraxx is hot, :lol:.
And UT, Senrei's outfit is awesome. Senrei herself is pretty.

Seriously, what's the topic?

Kendraxx is like, damn fine. lol
I kinda just drew that outfit without much thought though, I'm not sure if I want her running around in a skirt. xD Probably something less bright too. lol But I also like it. It can be some of her casual clothes or something.

I don't know. xD Mikey needs to get his butt back in here ~ xD

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Originally Posted by AnticitizenOne

I love how my character is once again ignored completely

. Shrike made a good character, that's for sure, I loved the drawings especially of the shrike it was awesome. So he's basically a man who's been posessed with a demon called the Shrike, and to do that he lost pretty much all he had in attempting to save Hidan's village from the people attacking it.

I'm not ignoring yours! I read over it but I've got my first Spanish test tomorrow and I need to study, but I wanted to respond to everyone real quick. <3 I promise I'll check yours (and the other character) soon.
(Have I overlooked any of your other characters? o.o )

Yeah, Kendraxx is awesome. Another of my personal favorites ~

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I have a request, since I've given the physical description of my character, if someone here who has the extreme art talent (yes I'm talking to you UT, Shrike, Mikey, and anybody else who might be coming here. Could you please make a drawing of the second character I described? I'd really appreciate it, and credit you in my signature.

Ooooh, shit. I don't know, I'm not very good with male anatomy. I doubt I could do him justice and you might have to re-phrase some of the description because I don't want to draw something and have you go: "Wtf UT, did you even read what I wrote? Crazy woman. Redo it! Nao!" xD lol

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Originally Posted by Shrike

Now give me hugs

Rawr ~
*tackles*
lol

and your sig kicks ass, btw. :3 Its teh smex. xD

Kaine · 09-13-2007, 08:33 AM

Woaaaa just finished my 2 day marathon-manga-reading.
I finished Midory Days(or Midori no hibi as it may be known by some)!!80 chapters in 2 days....Woa I totally got burned but since my girl broke up with me I had some free time...Anyway it was a-w-e-s-o-m-e go and read it NOW especially UT(you will love it)
Since I will logg out now to breath some fresh air I won't say in details about the characters posted.
Anti another great character.Man I enjoy your characters a lot.Looking forward for UT or Shrike to draw him(I draw too but I am toooo lazy)
Rudeboynin, good character but too godly for my tastes anyway it was a good character I enjoyed reading about him
Cya later guys I am going to lay on a bench in the park....

B|ack F|re Keeper · 09-13-2007, 10:57 AM

heres my character ^^

Name: Dantelus Spardante
Sex: Male
Age: 13
Origin: Konoha
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: grey

Personality

Mental Strengths: quiet and misterious
Mental Weaknesses: rescuer and gentleman
Favorite Quote: "call me monster, but dont call me murderer"
Hobbies: Practicing his unknown techniques and hunting the bad guys
Goal/Ambition: Find the murderer
Greatest Strength: Deviran Supreme
Biggest Weakness: he always focus the eyes of the enemy......he doesnt matter the opponet´s strength and he´s easly get angry.

Power

Capabilities: The elements fire, earth (sand too), water (ice too) and wind no jutsu, regenerates himseft even that wound is bigger, can cure the patient, super strength, he can run faster than other jounins and his Bloodline is totally different.
Weaknesses: he sometimes run from the past without facing it
Special Power: Demonic Chakra ( with Demonic Chakra, he can defeat a giant beast)
Speed: 16*
Stamina: 15*
Intelligence: 19*
Chakra: 20*
Luck: 6*

Story:

Dantelus was 5 years and was happy in Konoha, with his parents and with his 3 brother in a normal life. In a night of Full Moon, Dantelus couldnt sleep because a nightmare, that his parents were dead in the hands of the murderer with a Samurai sword. His brothers were outside afraid about something bad could happen, Dantelus was walking on the door to tell his parents about his bad dream...he watched his parents being killed by the murderer, it was the same dream that Dantelus dreamed about it. He cried a lot about his parents but he was quiet and the murderer heard something on the door, Carlos, one of Dantelus brothers, grabbed him and took away in the house faster that he could. When the brothers were united, Carlos summoned a dragon to get Dantelus out of the house.........Dantelus wanted fight too but it was to dangerous for him. Dantelus arrived one of the Konoha´s village when the 3rd Hokage was, when dragon dissapeared Dantelus cried in the alley about his parents all night. A new day has arrived, Dantelus was walking through the village to see if someone could adopt him but it was useless, the people ignored him looking his face and called him monster with no intentions. On the noon, Dantelus found a bunch of kids picking a little puppy. "That puppy doesnt deserve to be punished by those kids..." Dantelus said from him self, watching the puppy suffer, he approached and told them to not pick that puppy. One of the kids laughed and beated him too hard and said " ur not the boss to execute an order, u monster!!". Dantelus remembered the murderer saying to his parents that they have nothing on their life, in the meanwhile, Dantelus unleashed his fury that his chakra appeared on his body in front of those kids and they were afraid. He told the last words " DONT.....PICK......THAT.....DOOOOOOOG", the 3rd Hokage heard something and he went there to stop that nounsence. When the things were calm, The 3rd hokage told him to go in his house because to report about the unknown chakra. 8 years passed and Dantelus was 13, he was ready to go in the academy students to learn and he knew the students would mock him badly about being monster but he doesnt care because he has one goal, revenge for his parents on the murderer. The 3rd Hokage was surprised to see that Dantelus is the only one who can handle a demonic power because he has a demonic blood flowing in his veins, one thing that Dantelus wants to do is saving people and hunt the bad guy and preserve his father´s honor. No one (except the 3rd hokage) knows about the Dantelus´miserable and sad life and who knows, maybe one day he´ll be remember as a legend.

well......i did my best that i could ^^

AnticitizenOne · 09-13-2007, 03:14 PM

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Originally Posted by UchihaTaijiya

Ooooh, shit. I don't know, I'm not very good with male anatomy. I doubt I could do him justice and you might have to re-phrase some of the description because I don't want to draw something and have you go: "Wtf UT, did you even read what I wrote? Crazy woman. Redo it! Nao!" xD lol

Anything you're not clear of you could ask me by a PM. I'm not really going to stress out if I don't get a picture of him, I'd just like it. Also, I would not say that, even if it was a joke I thought I'd make that clear. I'm usually respectful to people who return the favor to me.

Sharingan Lord · 09-13-2007, 05:03 PM

@BFK: Niiiiice! But he seems a tad godly, though. By the numerical stat ratings.

@Kaine: ...what?! Midori days?

I wonder where Mikey has been, lately.

While no one's at it, another genius match-up: Kimimaro, Kabuto, Oro vs. Minato.

I think...well, I dunno.

Trey · 09-13-2007, 06:03 PM

Hold the phone, why is BFK's character so beasty? That guy'll cough and we all would die with those stats he has.

doujitsuspecialist1 · 09-13-2007, 06:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Sharingan Lord

@BFK: Niiiiice! But he seems a tad godly, though. By the numerical stat ratings.

@Kaine: ...what?! Midori days?

I wonder where Mikey has been, lately.

While no one's at it, another genius match-up: Kimimaro, Kabuto, Oro vs. Minato.

I think...well, I dunno.

All of them would die before they even get too make a hand sign

B|ack F|re Keeper · 09-14-2007, 06:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sharingan Lord

@BFK: Niiiiice! But he seems a tad godly, though. By the numerical stat ratings.

@Kaine: ...what?! Midori days?

I wonder where Mikey has been, lately.

While no one's at it, another genius match-up: Kimimaro, Kabuto, Oro vs. Minato.

I think...well, I dunno.

thanks ^^

its my first time that i write about my new character ^^ in spite of created looooong time ago xD

Sharingan Lord · 09-14-2007, 03:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Trey

Hold the phone, why is BFK's character so beasty? That guy'll cough and we all would die with those stats he has.

I know. Maybe he just didn't know there was a scale of ten. *shrugs*

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Originally Posted by doujitsuspecialist1

All of them would die before they even get too make a hand sign

:lol: - VERY true. But Orochimaru might live a second longer, :lol:.

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Originally Posted by B|ack F|re Keeper

its my first time that i write about my new character ^^ in spite of created looooong time ago xD

Ahhh. That explains it.

B|ack F|re Keeper · 09-15-2007, 08:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Trey

Hold the phone, why is BFK's character so beasty? That guy'll cough and we all would die with those stats he has.

i dont know man........if my characters´state is more than 10 so what.....he´s just more than human.......he wouldnt get a disease.......a cough maybe, but no one would die about a little cough

Kaine · 09-17-2007, 09:38 AM

Damn nobody has posted here for a long time.
I shall keep this fc away from the tunnel.It shall be awoken again!
Anyway good character BFK but you should make the stats at a scale of 1-10.A little DMC(devil may cry) in his name lol...And his was somewhat godly I have to admit(his jutsu and at such a young age..)
Anyway good job!

B|ack F|re Keeper · 09-17-2007, 09:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kaine

Damn nobody has posted here for a long time.
I shall keep this fc away from the tunnel.It shall be awoken again!
Anyway good character BFK but you should make the stats at a scale of 1-10.A little DMC(devil may cry) in his name lol...And his was somewhat godly I have to admit(his jutsu and at such a young age..)
Anyway good job!

MAN.......HOW, HOW DID U FIND THAT DANTELUS...........ur good to find it........i admite, i created this character for long time, and sorry if i overcome the scale coz hes not the only one that has demonic blood and besides, i love to mix DMC with some Anime

this is Dantelus..........i drew it 3 months ago

Sharingan Lord · 09-17-2007, 05:06 PM

NICE! He looks older than 13, IMO, but still good!

-.- no new topic...nuthin' to talk about...

B|ack F|re Keeper · 09-17-2007, 05:12 PM

ya........but when he faces the enemy.......they confuse about the age.........Dantelus could be soo godly but hes not one of Them.

09-13-2007, 08:33 AM	#768
Kaine Ch-Check It Out Join Date: May 2007 Location: in my castle Age: 25 Posts: 675 Thanks: 0 Thanked 50 Times in 44 Posts	Re: The Genius FC Woaaaa just finished my 2 day marathon-manga-reading. I finished Midory Days(or Midori no hibi as it may be known by some)!!80 chapters in 2 days....Woa I totally got burned but since my girl broke up with me I had some free time...Anyway it was a-w-e-s-o-m-e go and read it NOW especially UT(you will love it) Since I will logg out now to breath some fresh air I won't say in details about the characters posted. Anti another great character.Man I enjoy your characters a lot.Looking forward for UT or Shrike to draw him(I draw too but I am toooo lazy) Rudeboynin, good character but too godly for my tastes anyway it was a good character I enjoyed reading about him Cya later guys I am going to lay on a bench in the park.... __________________ DE FUCK YOU GUYS DE FUCK!

09-13-2007, 10:57 AM	#769
B\|ack F\|re Keeper Genin Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: right on the alley´s Fort Knox of Bush..........in Hell Age: 23 Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: The Genius FC heres my character ^^ Name: Dantelus Spardante Sex: Male Age: 13 Origin: Konoha Hair Color: White Eye Color: grey Personality Mental Strengths: quiet and misterious Mental Weaknesses: rescuer and gentleman Favorite Quote: "call me monster, but dont call me murderer" Hobbies: Practicing his unknown techniques and hunting the bad guys Goal/Ambition: Find the murderer Greatest Strength: Deviran Supreme Biggest Weakness: he always focus the eyes of the enemy......he doesnt matter the opponet´s strength and he´s easly get angry. Power Capabilities: The elements fire, earth (sand too), water (ice too) and wind no jutsu, regenerates himseft even that wound is bigger, can cure the patient, super strength, he can run faster than other jounins and his Bloodline is totally different. Weaknesses: he sometimes run from the past without facing it Special Power: Demonic Chakra ( with Demonic Chakra, he can defeat a giant beast) Speed: 16* Stamina: 15* Intelligence: 19* Chakra: 20* Luck: 6* Story: Dantelus was 5 years and was happy in Konoha, with his parents and with his 3 brother in a normal life. In a night of Full Moon, Dantelus couldnt sleep because a nightmare, that his parents were dead in the hands of the murderer with a Samurai sword. His brothers were outside afraid about something bad could happen, Dantelus was walking on the door to tell his parents about his bad dream...he watched his parents being killed by the murderer, it was the same dream that Dantelus dreamed about it. He cried a lot about his parents but he was quiet and the murderer heard something on the door, Carlos, one of Dantelus brothers, grabbed him and took away in the house faster that he could. When the brothers were united, Carlos summoned a dragon to get Dantelus out of the house.........Dantelus wanted fight too but it was to dangerous for him. Dantelus arrived one of the Konoha´s village when the 3rd Hokage was, when dragon dissapeared Dantelus cried in the alley about his parents all night. A new day has arrived, Dantelus was walking through the village to see if someone could adopt him but it was useless, the people ignored him looking his face and called him monster with no intentions. On the noon, Dantelus found a bunch of kids picking a little puppy. "That puppy doesnt deserve to be punished by those kids..." Dantelus said from him self, watching the puppy suffer, he approached and told them to not pick that puppy. One of the kids laughed and beated him too hard and said " ur not the boss to execute an order, u monster!!". Dantelus remembered the murderer saying to his parents that they have nothing on their life, in the meanwhile, Dantelus unleashed his fury that his chakra appeared on his body in front of those kids and they were afraid. He told the last words " DONT.....PICK......THAT.....DOOOOOOOG", the 3rd Hokage heard something and he went there to stop that nounsence. When the things were calm, The 3rd hokage told him to go in his house because to report about the unknown chakra. 8 years passed and Dantelus was 13, he was ready to go in the academy students to learn and he knew the students would mock him badly about being monster but he doesnt care because he has one goal, revenge for his parents on the murderer. The 3rd Hokage was surprised to see that Dantelus is the only one who can handle a demonic power because he has a demonic blood flowing in his veins, one thing that Dantelus wants to do is saving people and hunt the bad guy and preserve his father´s honor. No one (except the 3rd hokage) knows about the Dantelus´miserable and sad life and who knows, maybe one day he´ll be remember as a legend. well......i did my best that i could ^^ __________________ Even a bully fears the *darkness* when the weaks justify the strong, pure and *malicious* *darkness* that i lost my voice of bravery Made by LordKraven A destiny to remain for those who survived. Wich a Demon kept the curse within, for Eternity and for those who owned Last edited by B\|ack F\|re Keeper; 09-13-2007 at 12:22 PM.

09-13-2007, 05:03 PM	#771
Sharingan Lord I'm done. Byeeee. Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,802 Thanks: 36 Thanked 25 Times in 19 Posts	Re: The Genius FC @BFK: Niiiiice! But he seems a tad godly, though. By the numerical stat ratings. @Kaine: ...what?! Midori days? I wonder where Mikey has been, lately. While no one's at it, another genius match-up: Kimimaro, Kabuto, Oro vs. Minato. I think...well, I dunno.

09-13-2007, 06:03 PM	#772
Trey Legendary Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2,251 Thanks: 139 Thanked 538 Times in 300 Posts	Re: The Genius FC Hold the phone, why is BFK's character so beasty? That guy'll cough and we all would die with those stats he has.

09-17-2007, 09:38 AM	#777
Kaine Ch-Check It Out Join Date: May 2007 Location: in my castle Age: 25 Posts: 675 Thanks: 0 Thanked 50 Times in 44 Posts	Re: The Genius FC Damn nobody has posted here for a long time. I shall keep this fc away from the tunnel.It shall be awoken again! Anyway good character BFK but you should make the stats at a scale of 1-10.A little DMC(devil may cry) in his name lol...And his was somewhat godly I have to admit(his jutsu and at such a young age..) Anyway good job! __________________ DE FUCK YOU GUYS DE FUCK!

09-17-2007, 05:06 PM	#779
Sharingan Lord I'm done. Byeeee. Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,802 Thanks: 36 Thanked 25 Times in 19 Posts	Re: The Genius FC NICE! He looks older than 13, IMO, but still good! -.- no new topic...nuthin' to talk about...

09-17-2007, 05:12 PM	#780
B\|ack F\|re Keeper Genin Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: right on the alley´s Fort Knox of Bush..........in Hell Age: 23 Posts: 259 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: The Genius FC ya........but when he faces the enemy.......they confuse about the age.........Dantelus could be soo godly but hes not one of Them. __________________ Even a bully fears the *darkness* when the weaks justify the strong, pure and *malicious* *darkness* that i lost my voice of bravery Made by LordKraven A destiny to remain for those who survived. Wich a Demon kept the curse within, for Eternity and for those who owned

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