So many disasters came upon Konoha in the last months after Naruto left for his Sage training and he still have to return. What will he say if he arrives and finds out that during Pains attack so much of the Village were destroyed and so many people died and how will he react if he hears about the dead of his Sensei Kakashi. But while he finally finished his training with his own unique way and walks home Madara prepares to land the final blow by enveloping Hidden Leaf, Hidden Mist and Hidden Rock in a new Shinobi World war, only to get the Kyuubi for his own evil deeds.
There also is someone walking another path to Konoha along with Team Hawk and that one is completely disguised. Who is this mummified one? What will Sasuke do when he sees Konoha already is pretty destroyed?
While Team Hawk head for Konoha a disgust one is about to join them.
Karin notice that they are followed by a suspicious person since quit a while and with a threatening “hey you over there” she speaks to this Person.
“You already followed us the whole way, is this some kind of observation or are you one of Akatsukies spy’s to look where we’re moving? Or may you even work for the Hidden Leaf or the Hidden Cloud?”
Sasuke gets angry over Karin yelling out so much information at once and with that a strong breeze blows in her direction.
“Shut the fuck up Karin, whoever this is don’t belongs to any of the villages this would be to obvious. This is just a traveler who also walks in direction of Konoha.”
Suigetsu also lectures Karin for shouting all this out while they continue their steps.
“How could a Kunoichi be that dumb? Why not shout all over the world what we’re planning if you even mention something about secret things like that we hijacked this annoying wannabe rapper or that we spoof Akatsuki and that.”
For Karin, this was a hard punch in her face and she angry responded to this offense.
“Don’t lecture me water head, I know this I just wanted to be careful.”
This doesn’t hit Suigetsu and he reacts with less care.
“Don’t blabber around you just tried again to impress Sasuke.”
This respond heathens Karin up even more and she shouted back.
“NO I DIDN’T and you know that.”
‘Karin throws a bomb to Suigetsu but Suigetsu just became watery and the bomb got through him and hit a tree’
Juugo just sighs.
Calmly Sasuke stop them from fighting with a small sentence.
“Both of you now be quiet, I don’t want to draw so much attention”
Juugo agreed with him and then the stopped.
“Right or didn’t you notice that the people were looking for what just exploded.”
The smoke of the explosion vanishes and reveals a big crater and a group of people watching.
Suigetsu and the group stopped a second and then he showed that he is offended and defend himself.
“Who cares besides she started it, I just pointed her faults to her. If she goes agro over that she should reconsider of being a Kunoichi cuz something like that could kill you on the field.”
This let Karin speechless and they continued to walk. They accelerated a little to get away from the crowed and then get back to there normal speed but the masked person had no problem following them ((Masked Guy still following them giggled; „Seems like they aren’t that dusky like they first appeared, well at least not the others but the last survivor of the Uchiha Massacre around 10 years ago still remains mysterious and dark, Uchiha Sasuke….”) which made them wonder a little. Then Karin apologized to Sasuke.
“OK, alright Sasuke, I'm really sorry please forgive me I will never do this again.”
Sasuke seemingly is not interested in what she said and still silent continued walking. Karin thought about this as silent approval and brightens up. Then she asked the masked one who he is.
“You didn't introduced yourself yet and it seems we will still travel quit some time if you also going to Konoha. It would be nice to learn about your name ‘Karin blushes a little again’ and you already know our names.”
Suigetsu lectured her again which doesn’t make her very happy.
“Yeah thanks to you and it would be better if he wouldn't.”
Then Karin glares at Suigetsu and Sasuke at Karin with a look saying "Behold or you will regret this" and this worked.
Who is this guy, will he say his name and if, will it be his real one? See at the next part.
This is my first attempt to go public and get feedback about it. I ask you to read at least chapters 1-5 till you give me feedback cause I vary a little how I write though I mainly focus onto dialog.
It's only human to contradict yourself.
The best secret is a secret no one knows and no one cares for.
As I wander in the Darkness, I feel Strong
As I wander in the Darkness, I see Power
As I wander in the Darkness, I take the Might
As I wander in the Darkness, I loose my Sight
As I wander in the Darkness, I fuse with it
As I wandered in the Darkness, I became it
And all what is left is only deeper Darkness.