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466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
I predict that Mizu will keep Sasuke busy for a little bit until the other kages return to the meeting room and then it will be 4 kages on sasuke. Then Tsuchikage's guy will get hit inadvertantly and it will piss him off to join the fight even with his bad back.
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
My prediction: Mizukage snaps from a unintended pun and talks with innuendo
At least that's what I wrote, to spice her character a bit466: Against all odds (Sasuke Scene) Akatsuchi: Tsuchikage-sama, I think we should distance ourselves from them… Tsuchikage: What do you think I’m doing?! (sound of something cracking) My back, my back! (Akatsuchi grabs him and go to the farthest wall; along with Mifune) Sasuke: (thinking) What a disgrace…(talking) I have no business with you, only Danzou matters to me. Mizukage: But, for now, you have to handle me, pretty boy. Sasuke: Tsh… If you want to fight me, so be it, but remember, I’ll be the master of your destiny. Mizukage: (thinking) The husband* of my destiny?! (talking) Now, I’ll kill you. Choujuurou: (thinking) What’s happening to her? She seems totally different… Mizukage: Youton: Tsutsumi no Seireen! ** (a veil of mist takes over the Summit’s room) Tsuchikage: (thinking) Damn this woman, now that I wanted to see this match… Sasuke: (thinking) If she thinks that this pitiful mist will stop me, she must be out of her mind (starts to walk towards the Mizukage; still thinking) Even if I can’t see her, my Sharingan still detects the origin of the mist by its chakra. (casts Amaterasu; a dark figure twitches; talking) You’re not worthy of my time, I’ll end your pitiful life. (Amaterasu vanishes; he draws his Katana and strikes the Mizukage; his katana starts to melt; thinking) What? (Mizukage starts to degenerate, revealing it was a clone) Mizukage: (her voice comes from all directions) Now who’s the pitiful one?! Sweetie, you might have the looks but you lack the experience… care if I give you some personal lessons? Sasuke: (thinking) She molded her chakra to pass unnoticed in the mist, while she left her clone for me to detect… not bad. Karin: Sasuke, HELP ME!!! Sasuke: (thinking) She caught Karin… Mizukage: Youton: Iki no Ryuu. *** (a giant sludge approaches Sasuke, but he ducks; the sound of dissolving is heard on the background) Sasuke: You need to do better than that… Mizukage: Don’t worry, naughty boy, I’ll make it even sweeter for you… Youton: Kiri no Naka de Kaibatsu.**** (the mist starts to grab Sasuke; Sasuke uses Chidori Nagashi, but with little effect; he’s paralyzed) Youton: Yuge Shibuki! *****(a small sludge approaches, but this time hits him in the torso, dissolving part of his clothes and leaving scars on his chest) What a shame, you have such a beautiful body… Sasuke: AAAAAAAARGHH!!! Mizukage: Oh my, screaming already? I hope they’re screams of pleasure… care to repeat? Youton: Yuge Shibuki! (more currents hit Sasuke) Sasuke: (thinking) She leaves me no choice… *Master and Husband can be written with the same Kanji, 主 (aruji) ** Corrosion Release: Siren’s Veil *** Corrosion Release: Dragon’s Breath **** Corrosion Release: Monster in the Mist ***** Corrosion Release: Hot Water Splash (Kages Scene) (Danzou is running through the open with his guards; Gaara spots him) Gaara: It seems the Hokage is running away. Raikage: That old rat? Now I have bigger fish to fry! Darui, go get that guy. Shii, Kazekage, come with me. Darui & Shii: Yes, Raikage-sama. (Ao is seen going after Danzou) Gaara: Kankurou, Temari, go with them. Kankurou & Temari: Right! Raikage: Let’s go catch that Uchiha! (Sasuke Scene) (Susano’o’s bones start to appear) Mizukage: Oh my, already with the bone? This calls for something special… Youton: Kage no Shin’en!* (the mist releases Sasuke and is replaced by total darkness; Susano’o starts to dissolve) Sasuke: (thinking) Shadows... she doesn't know I thrive on the shadows (Sasuke puts his hands on his throat; still thinking) I can’t breathe… a genjutsu? (a blue light appears, looks like the Mizukage; still thinking) Might be a clone… (uses Chidori Senbon on her) Mizukage: Aaaaaaah!!! (she twitches in pain) Sasuke: (thinking) Got her! (she starts to swim in his direction; still thinking) What the…? (the darkness dissipates, revealing he’s trapped inside a Water Prison Technique that occupies half of the Summit’s room, along with a giant monkfish that has a lure similar to the Mizukage; the Mizukage has one hand in the prison, while Choujuurou is holding Karin with his sword close to her throat) Tsuchikage: (thinking) How the hell she did that? Mizukage: You fell so easily for my monkfish’s trap ... you have to be smarter than that, pretty boy. (the monkfish catches Sasuke in his mouth and closes it) Don’t worry, it doesn’t bite, but loves to swallow… (the monkfish is pierced by a Chidori Sharp Spear; it opens its mouth, letting Sasuke escape) Now, I’ll do you nice and tender… (she puts the other hand on the sphere) Sasuke: (thinking) She’s heating the water to cook me alive… (performs the Snake, Ram, Monkey, Boar, Horse and tiger hand seals) Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu! (a giant fireball appears, consuming the monkfish and evaporating the water; he jumps vertically; some of the fire gets the Tsuchikage’s shoulder) Tsuchikage: (gesticulating like crazy) I’m burning!!! Put it out, PUT IT OUT! (Akatsuchi pats him, putting out the fire) That Uchiha will pay for almost killing me! Akatsuchi: It was just a little flame on your shoulder… Tsuchikage: Shut up! Doton: Ganchuusou! ** (a few pillars of rock sprout from the ground, reaching for Sasuke) Sasuke: (thinking) If you think I’m falling for that, you’re wrong! (uses Chidori Sharp Spear to destroy the pillars) Raikage: (crushing the wall) YOU’RE MINE! (jumps towards Sasuke) YOU’RE GOING DOWN, B*TCH! (hits him, making him crush in to the ground) *Corrosion Release: Shadow of the Abyss ** Earth Release: Rock Pillars Rising (Danzou Scene) (Danzou and his guards are approaching a village) Danzou: Fuu, is that Kirigakure guard still after us? Fuu: I’m afraid so, Danzou-sama. And I sense three more people nearby. Danzou: It must be the Raikage’s and Kazekage’s guards . Well since we can’t get rid of them, let’s stop. Torune: But, Danzou-sama… Danzou: Do as I say. (they stop) If they don’t acknowledge my visions in a civilized way, I don’t have any choice but to force my hand. Ao: So you gave up from fleeing, Hokage?! Now you must return to the Summit to clear matters once and for all! Danzou: I’m afraid I can’t comply with that. (Fuu and Torune assume a battle stance) Ao: I thought so. (assumes battle stance; Darui, Temari and Kankurou are seen from afar) Next Chapter: Resolve
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Nice, Numi.
Sasuke talked a bit too much. When you write, you should mostly write his thoughts, at least in battle. He is usually silent while fighting. All he talked vs Deidara was "Where is Itachi?" and he didn't talk at all vs KB. |
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Better. You can leave this line as if he is saying it:"I have no business with you, only Danzou matters to me." No exclamation though. He is never yelling lest he is fighting Itachi.
Everything else is cool. I hope Kishimoto doesn't take that route though. If Sasuke fights one more Kage without draining his chakra to zero, I'll be pretty pissed. This is like fighting 5 Akatsuki's at the same time, and if that would happen I would pretty much stop reading the manga. Since Akatsuki are the reason I still read this, I can swallow this Kages fiasco. |
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Nice prediction but there was a problem. Why was sasu able to move to make a seal in a water prison. It's not possible Numi. Could u please explain that.
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
He does need to stop.
Kishimoto seems to be going by "Hey, Naruto killed Six Paths of Pain. Let's have Sasuke defeat 5 Kages then!" logic. Which is not valid at all. |
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
I thought I was the only person thinking this. Seriously kishi has to stop him next chapter
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Basically, all around chaos!
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Sasuke is honestly getting on my nerves, hopefully the raikages messes up the fight between mizukage and sasuke, allowing him to escape, and the fact we saw a sword and no shield with susano'o one can assume naruto may have been given that.
The direction danzo is heading my pass naruto's current location, we then might see yamato, kakashi and naruto. Quite possibly they will fight but alot of dialogue will exchanged kunkoro and temari show up. This will pro longue the escape of danzou and sasuke may see naruto. Things then look like their turning ugly as ever, but then Tobi/Madara comes at the peak, the boiling point of the matter to whisp sasuke away. I wouldn't be surprised if karin, sui and juugo are left behind. This leaves naruto to ponder and come to a conclusion on how to come about dealing with sasuke. I'm assuming danzou may escape or possibly the summit will be continued. |
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Re: 466 Prediction/Spoiler Discussion
Good one Numinous. I was planning on having Mizukage talk more like in yours and use more techniques, but I didn't know how I'd get the other Kages into the battle. So I had it like everyone try a little somethin. I had Mifune use Gekko Hayate's technique. I liked that technique when the chuunin examiner tried to fight Gaara's squad teacher.
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