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That's a huge complement, thank you... However you will have to wait till this weekend, it should be up then...
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I should have one up soon!..... Just wanted to let you guys know i have not forgotten...
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My man, we are ready for that posting. Should be pretty damn good!
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Re: Naruto Fan Fiction Thread!!
Oh boy, when I first started writing, I thought I'd have the prologue done. But I got so caught up in the plot I couldn't help myself but to stretch the hell out of it.
So the musical themes aren't the ones I announced, sorry. But here are the ones I used for this part of the prologue. Temple of Beth's Theme: Nobuo Uematsu's The Secret Library, Daguerreo Sathariel's Theme: Björk's Declare Independence (Voltaic Version) Jacob's Theme: Sefiros' Everything=Nothing Litholeukos' Theme: Orlando di Lasso's Al Dolce Suon |
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Thanks RoyalSage, I was a Little worried if people would like it.... Since action is not my forte, but i feel after it was all done it was good and i got to show how much Naruto has grown mentally and how Sasuke has grown in control which was my main focus.... & KiddJutsu, I'm waiting for your Thoughts so don't hold back lol
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Sounds good KiddJutsu...
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Ok here we go sir. First off, this sh*t continues to be a new fanfic must read. I appreciate how detailed you were with the fighting. Since I'm used to Vishnu, J_H, & Jericho in the forum its a must that you bring it which you did thoroughly. I like the control Sasuke has with his Blaze element. You expanded on it and it looks like somebody besides Naruto will get a vicious ass whooping from that. And you have Naruto seriously acting smooth as silk. He's not flustered, he's dictating the fight on his terms, and most likely hasn't even brought out the big combinations either.
A few areas I'd recommend from my opinion unless you have another direction in mind: -Since Hinata is there with the rest of the Uzumaki, Keepers of History, maybe she can get some crucial knowledge and we can see the Byakugan as something more than some super powered binoculars. -Introduce a special Uzumaki fighting style now that Naruto has his family inserted into the storyline. Kinda like Frog-fu for Sage taijutsu. -The Sage toads could have a killer combo move with Naruto like Ma & Pa frogs with J-man. I'm very excited to see your direction. Its 100% different than anybody elses that's been posted and its wide open to so many things. So when is the next installment sir? I'm psyched for it.
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