Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers - Page 2

KiddJutsu · 08-14-2012, 06:46 PM

Rikudo - first off its once again a hell of a read. I appreciate how you are making this not only action packed but full of the drama. You completely did in both Guy & Kakashi which I'd have preferred not to see but dammit if I don't like how you have the last chap finishing with them seeing their students for the last time. What that should do is provide serious inspiration but also cause somebody to get a bit erratic and get a smack down too.

You've got a mystery man appearing now which I figure is Madara making his appearance to that battle site. But you could go all Vishnu with it and throw a nice smooth curve ball to throw it all off. A couple things, now that you've introduced some Uzumaki special talents into the picture with Naruto, are you thinking of something from the Namizake side since Kurama apparently knowledge of that clan?
Also, why hasn't Naruto mastered a FTG variation? It would have been something potentially nice to use at this point with the grand daddy monster reborn & Tobi on the offensive? Or I could be jumping ahead of you. Either way, please keep the party going with this. Good stuff......

Rikudounaruto · 08-15-2012, 05:26 AM

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Originally Posted by KiddJutsu

Rikudo - first off its once again a hell of a read. I appreciate how you are making this not only action packed but full of the drama. You completely did in both Guy & Kakashi which I'd have preferred not to see but dammit if I don't like how you have the last chap finishing with them seeing their students for the last time. What that should do is provide serious inspiration but also cause somebody to get a bit erratic and get a smack down too.

You've got a mystery man appearing now which I figure is Madara making his appearance to that battle site. But you could go all Vishnu with it and throw a nice smooth curve ball to throw it all off. A couple things, now that you've introduced some Uzumaki special talents into the picture with Naruto, are you thinking of something from the Namizake side since Kurama apparently knowledge of that clan?
Also, why hasn't Naruto mastered a FTG variation? It would have been something potentially nice to use at this point with the grand daddy monster reborn & Tobi on the offensive? Or I could be jumping ahead of you. Either way, please keep the party going with this. Good stuff......

Thank you very much

I really apprectiate your comment. It is my style to write action with drama, and I like it. Exactly I killed Kakashi and Gai but after They accomplished a lot. For example Kakashi found out Tobi Space Time Ninjutsu weakness, helped Naruto and even forced him to use Rinnengan. Gai destroyed fire Uchiha barrier, forced Tobi to use Rinnengan, which took a lot chakra from Tobi and He gave Naruto oportunity to destroy mask. Besides I wanted masters and eternal rivals to die together being inspiration for their students and all young generation

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Yes Mysterious Man is Madara, Mysterious beacuse there is little people who can recongnize him, but for now he appeared as mysterious man

. Yes I really wanted Naruto to know more about his Uzumaki clan, special talents. I made regeneration and strong life force as Kekkei Genkai, although Senjuu clan has strong life force too. Yes I want Naruto to know more about Namikaze clan too, but it is all mystery. People who want to know what is this mystery just read my continuation. Yes ,you are jumping ahead of me, because soon his dad heritage will be priceless so please read next my prediction.

I don't have much free time but I will try to find some and write continuation but it would be last one;/. Nevertheles be patient and wait.

600 - Tobi identify finally revealed and mysterious man appear - comming soon...

KiddJutsu · 08-15-2012, 06:49 AM

Rikudo - Ill look out for that sir. If all that is included it should be pretty epic no doubt.

The Special One · 08-15-2012, 01:32 PM

Had some time considering next chapter releases next week.

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Another Specialist Prediction

-To the nitty gritty

(Naruto is rushing towards Tobi with fire in his eyes. Naruto turns his head to face Kakashi’s briefly.)

Naruto: “Kakashi sensei!” Do what you did before!”

Kyuubi: “The gloves are off now, Naruto. It’s time we show him what we’re made of!”

(Naruto is closing the distance between himself and Tobi. Naruto stops abruptly, about 30 ft away from Tobi.)

Naruto (in thought): “I hear ya. I’m fed up with his nonsense. I’ll shut him up for good this time.” (Meanwhile, Kakashi is overseeing the area from a cliff, overlooking the battle.)

Kakashi (in thought): “Have to pick my spots carefully.” (The scene switches over to Naruto vs. Tobi. Tobi is seen rushing towards Naruto. Tobi, with both hands on the chain, swings his fan at Naruto’s left side. A chakra arm emerges from Naruto’s left shoulder allowing the chakra hand belonging to that arm to grasp hold of the fan.

Naruto then extends his right arm, which creates a chakra arm that is propelling a Rasengan towards Tobi’s face. Tobi puts up his left hand as the jutsu collides, causing the Rasengan and chakra arm to be absorbed, which heals the minor scratches on Tobi’s damaged shoulder and arm.)

Naruto (in thought): “That’s right, the Rinnegan.” (Tobi lifts up the flap of his mask near the bottom, revealing only his mouth, as it is tilted to the side.)

Tobi: “Katon: Karyuu Endan.” (A large jet of flames is continuously blown at Naruto. Naruto lets go of the fan and runs to his right, however, Tobi, as he is continuing to blow the flames, grasps hold of the chain of his fan, reels it in, and grasps the hilt with both hands. Tobi then fans the flame, causing a tidal wave of flames preparing to overlap Naruto.

Naruto turns to face the flames, grinds his teeth then lets out a blood curdling shout, which generates a huge chakra wave that dissipates the flames; Tobi re-positions his mask. Naruto, using his speed, instantly closes the gap between him and Tobi.)

Tobi (in thought): “He’s very quick.” (Naruto leads in with a jab, but it is blocked by the flat side of the fan, which is cracked from the impact.)

Naruto: “UHAAAAA!” (Naruto then delivers a powerful cross, which shatters the fan. Tobi then uses his right hand to send a small wave out that carries the shrapnel from the fan racing at Naruto. Naruto covers his face with his forearms, as they sustain lacerations.)

Naruto (in thought): “Another one of Pain’s techniques, but the force was much weaker than his… Is his control over the Rinnean more limited than Pain’s?”

(Tobi races at Naruto, prompting Naruto to perform a side kick, however, Tobi just phases right through him. As Naruto turns around, Tobi’s chain loops around Naruto’s neck. Tobi then strengthens the choke by crisscrossing his arms in place, with a hand on each end of the chain. Naruto slumps to his knees, gagging and struggling for breath.)

Naruto: “AAHHHHHH!!!”

Naruto (in thought): “He’ll choke the life out of me. (Naruto reaches for the chain around his neck with his hands, but his body doesn’t work right.) I know this feeling. He’s disrupting my chakra with these strange devices, just like Nagato…”

(Naruto starts foaming at the mouth.)

Tobi: “Once I’m done with you I’ll finish the others and tend to the Mazou. (Tobi yanks Naruto to his face.) Look at you… At the height of your powers I have you gasping for air… This is why Eye of the Moon is necessary… Even if you try your best, odds are, only few can succeed. I want to create a world where everyone can succeed.”

(Meanwhile, Kakashi, on top of a cliff, stands up.)

Kakashi: “Naruto!”

(The scene switches over to Bee and Gai’s location.)

Gai: “I think we should help Naruto out!”

Killer Bee: “Yeah, it’s about that time.”

(The scene switches back to Tobi and Naruto’s location. Naruto stands to his feet.)

Tobi (in thought): “What!” (Naruto slips his right hand between the chain and the front of his neck, causing some slack.)

Naruto: “Controlling us is different from controlling some subdued zombie-pet!” (Naruto shatters the chain.)

Tobi: “So I’ll just have to kill you then! ”(Naruto makes a handseal, and then the ground begins to shake.)

Naruto: “I’M NOT DYING, my will is that of everyone-A flame that can’t be distinguished by the likes of you!”

(Two small chakra arms form on each finger of Naruto’s hands. Mini Rasen Shuriken forms above each finger, for a total of 10 mini Rasen Shuriken, prompting the small chakra arms to retreat. Naruto leaps backwards and sends off a mini Rasen Shuriken. It is heading towards the ground where Tobi stands. Tobi flips away and rushes off as a basketball sized sphere of the destruction roughs up the ground. Naruto gives chase. Naruto manages to quickly close the gap as he’s right on Tobi’s heels.)

Tobi (in thought) “I can’t afford to use my sharingan’s jutsu so casually. I’ll have to use my Rinnegan and Sharingan to outsmart him.”

(Naruto slings off two mini Rasen Shurikens, one near the back of Tobi’s head, the second near Tobi’s legs. Tobi turns his head backwards, spins his body to face Naruto, and jumps in between the gap separating the two Rasen Shuriken, avoiding them effortlessly.)

Naruto (in thought) “Shit he’s too close for the Rasen Shuriken!” (Tobi does a quick jab cross combo to Naruto’s face, followed by an uppercut, then a round kick to the gut, sending Naruto crashing to the ground. Naruto holds up his hands as he slides across the ground to avoid losing the jutsu.

Tobi then proceeds to pick up a rock.)

Tobi: “This is a grudge match…”

(Tobi throws the rock at the downed Naruto. Naruto barely avoids it by moving his head. Chakra arms from Naruto’s torso forces Tobi backwards. Naruto then tosses two mini Rasen Shurikens at the ground, knocking up dust and debris, clouding Tobi’s vision. The scene switches over to a random spot some good distances behind Tobi. The ground breaks apart, as chakra arms appear to be the culprit of the disturbance. Naruto appears from the hole made by the chakra arms.)

Naruto (in thought): “Good, he doesn’t suspect me yet.” (Naruto tosses two of his remaining five mini Rasen Shurikens at Tobi’s location. Naruto then speeds off, rushing ahead of the recently thrown Rasen Shurikens, leaving them in the dust. Tobi hears Naruto as he gets close, prompting Tobi to turn around.)

Tobi: “How you get behind me!?”

Naruto: “Don’t worry about it!”

Naruto (in thought): “Have to have his eyes focused on me so he doesn’t see my jutsu too soon.”

(Naruto leads with his left hand, the hand with no Rasen Shurikens on it, Tobi simply smacks the punch out of the way. Naruto then throws a high round kick, Tobi just ducks it.)

Naruto (in thought): “Now!”

Tobi (in thought): “That noise!” (Naruto cartwheels out of the way, meanwhile the Rasen Shuriken are flying towards Tobi’s feet. Tobi jumps up into the air.)

Naruto (in thought): “He’ll have trouble dodging in midair!” (Naruto tosses a mini Rasen Shuriken near Tobi’s torso; Tobi absorbs it using the Rinnegan’s power. Before Tobi realizes it, another mini Rasen Shuriken is nearing Tobi’s face.)

Tobi (In thought): “The jutsu’s so fast at this range I can’t dodge it. Damn it, I didn’t have enough downtime for me to use that path's power again! I’ll have to use my sharingan.”

(As the mini Rasen Shuriken is passing through the right side of Tobi’s mask, the last mini Rasen Shuriken above Naruto’s finger warps away. Instantly, Tobi’s mask is blown open, causing blood, and debris from his mask to spew forward. Naruto notices that Tobi’s stunned, so he uses this opportunity to charge up a Rasengan, and blitz Tobi’s torso with it as they both slam into the ground. The scene switches over to Kakashi’s location.)

Kakashi: (in thought): “I finally found an opening… Huh, huh…” (Kakashi’s Mangekyou retreats. Meanwhile, Gai and Bee are in a state of amazement from watching the battle unfold favorably. The scene focuses back on Naruto and Tobi’s location. Naruto stands up as his super-powered form dissipates. Tobi, whose back is to us, holds his chest in place.)

Naruto: “Soo, that’s how you look…”

Next Time: “Tobi's Past

IXI ANIMO IXI · 08-15-2012, 02:06 PM

haha truly the special one......best i have ever read

KiddJutsu · 08-15-2012, 04:17 PM

SO - Boom! That sh*t is dynamite! Need more of those type of predictions. And no telling how long it's been since you graced us with a fanfic. Love that read sir....

Rikudounaruto · 08-15-2012, 06:07 PM

600 - Tobi identify finally revealed and mysterious man appear
The first scene shows Madara, who is standing close to Tobi, they are turned back to each other. Blows of winds move Madara hair all cloak while Tobi hair are moving as well. Tobi mask is all shattered, mask is falling down in front of Alliance Shinobi and Naruto. They are all heavy breathing beacuse finally they can know who is enemy. blows of winds around battlefield, earth shaking from Gedo Mazou power as well as raining and ligtinings appearing on sky get even more drama and climax. As Tobi mask completly fall down on ground, Everyone from alliance shinobi have schocked face expression.
Madara: Long time no see brother
Tobi: I didn't expect you there, but I am glad you are here.
Madara: So it was sucess after all
Tobi:?!
Madara: I see, you don't know about it...
Tobi: What do you mean, brother?!
The scene shows Sakura rush to Kakashi and begins to healing him while Ino jump to Gai and begin to healing him. Rest of Rookies come as well and are looking sad.
Sakura: damn it, this black rod impaling in him, decrease my healing.
Ino: same to Me, Sakura.
Kakashi: he...
Gai; uh....
The scene shows everyone looking at Madara, who is about to speak
Madara: Hn, After you gave my eyes you died some time later as blind man. I felt bad about it and it was my fault, so I searched way to ressurect you. I read special tablet stone and then I found out that with Rinnengan you can control life and death, then I searched what is required to get Rinnengan and I discovered it was Senjuu DNA, then I decided to steal Hashirama DNA so I fought with him. It was not only one reason behind it but Hashirama DNA needed for Rinnengan was last trigger to do that. I fought with Hashirama to get his DNA and I succed but lost in this battle.
After that I tried to connect random Uchiha with random Senjuu, after few failures finally it was succes, then I injected Senjuu Hashirama DNA in myself, it didn't work easily as I thought. I suffered a lot, Senjuu Hashirama DNA tried to take over my body so I have to fight for control over body. Finally It stopped and I was totally schocked when I saw my eyes in mirror. They changed to new design, which was eye filled grey color with few circles. Fast I realized that these eyes become Rinnengan. First part of my plan was succed, then I begins to collect sharingan eyes. While that I learned a lot about jutsu, Ninja world and more, even creating Plant Ninja made from White part(senjuu DNA) and black part (Uchiha DNA). I called him Zetsu, which soon provided that he is great spy. He spied everyone while I was working on my plan. I begins to wear mask then I helped one Uchiha man called Itachi kill Uchiha clan, however Itachi was too gentle to kill his parents so I killed them. When I read stone tablet again then I discovered technique called Rinne Tensei, which can ressurect someone. I took your body planted sharingan in both your eyes, then I injected Hashirama DNA in your body. After everything was prepared I used Rinne Tensei but something went wrong and I died... Price for using this technique is chakra, amount of chakra required to ressurect someone is directly proportional to time passed from this person death. This day I died..., What did happen to you after my death?
Random ninja: What?!, this is really Madara Uchiha, and that monster could ressurect someone?!
Other Ninja: frightining, Is he god?!
The scene shows everyone listening Madara and Tobi speaking.
Tobi: After you died. I was well informed by Zetsu, about everything you did: creating mist of village, Uchiha clan massacre, your fight with First Hokage, fight with Second Tsuchikage, Third Tsuchikage, killing first Raikage, killing first Kazekage and many more. I couldn't use fire affinity and other powers because Senjuu Hashirama DNA tried to take over my body so I had to wait until process was finished. I begins to create plan to destroy Konoha, Zetsu informed me about Nagato Uzumaki who has Rinnengan, my brother eyes, which was orginally mine. Zetsu informed me about Uchiha Madara spy in Konoha called Kagami Uchiha and told then I took your name and used it and took mask on. First reason was to make people fear me, second was everyone know that I am dead so it could bring attention if I use my name. Once I met with Kagami Uchiha, I worn same mask as you brother so he belived that I was you, He give me information about village, Senjuu clan, Danzo actions and more. When procces of accpeting Senjuu DNA by my body was finished I begin to work in shadow. I found out about Kagami Uchiha and he has son named Obito. This child begins to changing my thinkings, but soon Danzo Killed Kagami Uchiha and Uchiha Kiti, who was his wife. I ordered Zetsu to spy Obito, so he did. Then third war happened, when I was testing sharingans suddenly Zetsu appeared and tell me about Obito Uchiha and guy called Kakashi try to rescue girl called Rin from Iwa Ninja, I wasn't interested but he mentioned Obito awaken sharingan, so I went with Zetsu watch and check this boy potential.
Kakashi thinking: so He spied us, bastard...
Izuna: However fast I realized he has no talent .When he was crushed under boulder Kakashi took one his sharingan and left with Rin, I killed few Iwa Nin while zetsu appeared from ground and took Obito other sharingan then we escaped from there, when Many Iwa Nin are cooming there. I tested few sharingans some of them has special power but nothing interesting until I tried Obito sharingan. Fast I developed it from two tomoe to three tomoe and soon it changed to Mangenkyu sharingan, then I discovered amazing ability it has, Space time Ninjutsu which could make me invincible. I stopped on this eye and mastered it to maximum potential, this eye let something pas through me without touching or injuring me. This eye let me easy travel around world and finally this eye let me go to other dimension, where time flow was really slow. One minute in other dimesion is equal to one day in this world, Senjuu DNA almost stopped my aging process.
Madara: You got amazing eye, Izuna I am impressed.
Kakashi squeeze teeth: You... bastard... thief...
Gai: Ka...ka...shi...
Madara: Shut up worm, he is my brother so look out what you say!
Izuna: Back to topic. I searched for Ninetails and discovered Mito Uzumaki had it, so I found out more and more about Uzumaki, then I found when seal is the weakest. It is moment when woman born children, so I found location where next jinchurki Kushina Uzumaki was and should born child. There was hell of fight with fourth Hokage , Minato Namikaze. I lost this battle but I retreated but He died as well as Kushina.
Naruto: You fucking bastard!, I will kill you for that!
Madara narrows his eyes on Naruto: So you are Nine tails Jinchurki, and this time real not clone.
your shroud remind me Sage of six paths from drawings on stone tablet. Moreover He is from Uzumaki clan and even ancient Namikaze clan..., interesting
The scene shows Naruto about to rush but Kakashi shout at him to stop. Naruto stop and talk with kakashi
Naruto: Why did you stop me?!
Kakashi: Naruto, do you remember that information is very important, and is even more important while fighting with enemy.
Naruto: I see, so we have to listen and find out weakness of them.
Kakashi: great you are clever boy..., come here pull this black rods off my and Gai body, so we can help
Naruto: Kakashi sesei, I come.
The scene shows Naruto appearing close to Alliance shinobi forces close to Rookies. While Everyone from Alliance Ninja is cheering for Naruto. Rookies of Konoha except Sakura and Ino come to naruto.
Shikamaru: It is bothering to do, but nice to see you ,Naruto!
Naruto: You too Shikimaru. You almost didn't change at all
Shikimiaru: heh
The scene shows Naruto is laughing while Shikamaru has bored expresion on his face
Chouji: Nice to see you, clever Naruto
Naruto:?!, you too, slim Chouji
The scene shows Naruto and Chouji smilling at each other
Kiba: Nice to see Naruto, my rival. Thanks for caring for enemy now I will take care of them baka
Naruto: Nice to see you Kiba, too. But everyone know you are baka not me now
The scene shows everyoneof rookies laughing even Kakashi and Gai.
Shino: Hi, Naruto I am here to help you because you are from Konoha as me
Naruto: Oh..., hi,.yy..., Shino.
Naruto thinking: He is weird...
Ten Ten sad: hi, Naruto we heard that you fought well
Naruto smile to her: Thanks, you got nice fan which fits your pretty face
Ten Ten: Oh, thanks. You are handesome too.
The scene shows Ten Ten is huging Naruto
Neji: you are really amazing, you changed you destiny from looser to become powerfull shinobi is genius indeed
Naruto: Thanks Neji, I hope Hyuuga clan rules change even better.
The scene shows Naruto and Neji are shaking hands.
Ino: Naruto, I have to admit you become handesome and powerfull shinobi
Naruto: Thanks Ino, you become even prettier and skilled kunoichi
The scene shows Ino is hugging Naruto. After that she fast comes back to Gai and heal him
Sakura trying to smile: Nice to see you Naruto I miss you
Naruto cheer her: You too, Sakura I am happy you are right
The scene shows Sakura is huging Naruto tightly, but release him after moment and comes back to heal Kakashi
Lee: Naruto-kun, Nice... to see.. you
Naruto:?!, Lee... <turns to look at Gai> I know it is hard for you when your sensei is dying.
The scene shows Naruto put hand on lee arm to cheer him up. While everyone was greeting with Naruto. Hinata stand backward and watching.
Hinata thinking: He is so handesome, I love him, but can I really do it?
Hinata: Naruto, Nice... to see... you
Naruto: You too Hinata, I missed you so much and I love you...

woody_3162 · 08-15-2012, 06:08 PM

Not getting much time these days guys, but I'll try to post up something whenever I can. Anyways enjoy.

Naruto: 598

Naruto Dashes towards Tobi, a rasengan begins forming in his hand. He strikes straight at Tobi’s mask and phases right through.

Naruto:!!
Tobi: Foolish foolish Naruto, what exactly do you think has changed?
Kakashi:…

Tobi moves a little to one side moving away from naruto whilst keeping everyone within his line of sight.

Tobi: So you now know how my justu works, what of it? For you to exploit that advantage you would have to create the perfect situation of your attacks overlapping with my phasing, do you think it will be that easy now that I know what you’re aiming for.
Kakashi: (how do we create an opening now that he’s watching for it…)

Tobi keeps moving across and now he stands halfway between Gai/kakashi and Naruto

Tobi: and not to forget that Kakahsi has to keep using Kamui for this to work, I wonder Kakashi, how much longer can you keep going?
Kakashi:…

Tobi raises his hands arms out wide to either side, his hands are open, one pointing towards naruto and the other towards kakashi. He turns his head to one side to look at naruto

Tobi: Then again…I could just kill him first! *Shinra Tensei*

Naruto struggles as the full force of the Shinra Tensei hits him, *but even in his current form he is thrown back, the force is that strong that the trees behind have all been torn away at the roots and flung back destroying each other. Tobi turns his head to the left, looking at Kakashi. *Bansho Tenin*
Kakashi is caught up and pulled towards Tobi

Naruto/Gai:!!!
Kakashi: (Sh, the Rinnegann!! I was too focused on his Sharingan, he’s too close *I can’t escape!)

A long knife slips out of Tobi’s sleeve into his hand, he holds it out pointed directly at Kakashi’s oncoming head.
*Flaming Peacock* You see Gai appear just above Tobi and shoot down his Fireballs. Tobi phases letting kakashi fly right through him to the other side where he crashes to the ground. You can see Naruto a little way away in the back ground.

Gai: Your technique is still no match for my speed, I won’t let you have my rival that easily.
Kakashi: Naruto!!
Naruto:?!
Kakashi: Listen to me! He is just another villain like the many you’ve faced before, you do not need our help to defeat him, He is just another Zabuza Momochi!
Gai/Tobi:???
Naruto:…

Naruto puts his hands together and forms a seal. A double handed shuriken almost as large as him appears in his hand.
Tobi: ??!
Naruto throws the Kunai directly at Tobi. Tobi looks at the Shuriken flying towards him, in the background he can see Kakashi holding his hands together looking directly at him.

Tobi: (So that’s there game. Kakashi tried to bluff saying naruto could do this on his own, if I fell for the bait I’d try to phase through it, and as I did that Kakashi would use Kamui to send it to the other dimension effectively cutting me in two)
Nice try Kakashi.

Tobi jumps towards the shuriken and grabs it out of mid-air, as he lands back down holding the shuriken he looks at it in surprise.

Tobi: You’ve condensed a lot of chakra into this Naruto, most likely to increase its cutting power on the off chance i*blocked it instead of phasing through it. *I guess you didn’t want up to mess up your only chance.

Tobi warps the Kunai away into his other dimension.
Tobi: I might have use for that later
Naruto: heheheh, I can’t believe that worked first time around, I thought I’d have to try it at least a few times before you fell for it.
Tobi:??!
Kakashi: Nice one Naruto
Tobi: Are you trying to fool me once again Kakashi?

Kakashi gets up and pats himself down, he seems to be completely at ease now. He begins to casually walk over to Tobi. As Tobi’s attention is focused on Kakashi, naruto gives a meaningful look towards Killer Bee.

Kakashi: You see the first bluff was actually a double bluff.
Gai/Tobi:??
Kakashi: I do believe Naruto can defeat you on his own, especially once I figured out how your technique works, but I wanted you to think that I was bluffing and was actually going to help him.
Tobi: …you obviously did not wish me to just phase through the shuriken he threw, why? I dodged it easily it was that slow…!!!
Kakashi: Yes I think you understand, we didn’t want you avoid it at all , in fact-
Tobi:!!!

Suddenly a pencil is swirling in Raiton chakra right next to Tobi’s eye. You see Killer Bee off to one side still in octopus mode, he has a massive grin on his face and one of his tentacles is stretched out as if he’s thrown it. Tobi Phases not having enough time to dodge or do anything else. The pencil travels through his head and out the other side. Suddenly there’s an explosion in front of Tobi’s face, His mask explodes into little pieces as he is violently thrown back into a tree. He drops to the ground on his hands and knees and you can see blood spilling to the ground from beneath his face.

Tobi: !!! What did you-
Kakashi: Naruto was the prankster of the hidden leaf before he was its hero
Naruto: hehehe
Kakashi: you were just tricked into believing that that was just a shuriken when it really was one of naruto’s clones transformed.
Naruto: You wanted some of my chakra and now you have it. I’ve got one of my friends in there ready to give you a big rasengan welcome anytime you wish to head back.
Tobi: gwah

Tobi splutters coughing up blood, he stands shakily with his right hand covering the side of his face.
Tobi: I will make you pay for this*

Naruto points at Tobi
Naruto: I've made all your time space jutsu useless you nobody, now it's my turn!

Next week: Naruto 599 - desires

Rikudounaruto · 08-15-2012, 06:09 PM

The scene shows Naruto is comming closer to her while speaking to her. When he finished speech suddenly Hinata is runing to him, she then catch him and is huging him tightly, then she release him and kiss him in cheek, Naruto is blushing. While everyone is laughing Hinata is little embarassed but smiles. Suddenly two Madara clones appear from nowhere and pierce Kakashi and Gai with black rods comming from their hands
Naruto:?!
Everyone:?!
The scene shows Naruto, who enter bijuu mode and rush at clones, rest of shinobi rush to attack them too, but they suddenly dissapear. Naruto notice Madara release them. When Tobi speak again everyone eyes are directed on him. While Sakura come fast to heal Kakashi and begins to cry and Ino try to heal Gai and looks at sad lee.
Izuna: After my battle with Fourth Hokage I created orginization, made from the best and the strongest Ninja who was missining. I began to capture Bijuu, I was hidden all time, while Nagato Uzumaki using six paths was fake leader. While my minions capture more and more bijuu I loose members one after one. Finally I got seven Bijuu, thanks to their sacrificing life. I recruited Uchiha Sasuke, younger brother of Uchiha Itachi to Akatsuki after wining his fight with Uchiha Itachi.
Madara: Uchiha Itachi?!, so this younger brother of Itachi is strong indeed.
Naruto: th!...
Izuna: Right, He even developed his eyes to Eternal Mangenkyu sharingan. Soon I declared War against The world using your name to make them fear me and coperate, but it didn't work. After Nagato death by Uzumaki Naruto hand I retrieved rinnengan our eyes and implatend one of them.
Madara: Nine tails jinchurki killed Nagato Uzumaki, he is really dangerous then... but why you implanted one Rinnengan not two?
Izuna: Yes, If I wanted to implant second I could, but I wanted to keep this sharingan for defence power. I couldn't left it, so I took one Rinnengan and one sharingan. After I got Rinnengan back, Kabuto Yakushi who merged with sanin named Orochimaru came and summoned you as well as my fellow comrades from akatsuki to force me to accept Alliance with him. I agreed, we begins war and it last second day now. Rest you know you should know.
Madara: I see, many events happened since my death. Great choice to use sharingan and Rinnengan at the same time, Where is zetsu?!, Is Kabuto alive and where is him?! Can you switch your Rinnengan to lower version...
Izuna: I don't know where is Zetsu, it looks like something happen to him because he would inform me about Kabuto Ending Edo Tensei, about you and Sasuke. Sasuke, i wonder what did happen to him... I don't know where is Kabuto and I wonder is he alive... I can switch Rinnengan to lower forms no problem<switches Rinnegan to three EMS->MS-> sharingan and switches thorught all forms to Rinnengan>, but I didn't have enough time to master Rinnengan, so switching take more time for me and I didn't want to create opening for enemies to attack me. Besides I have only mastered Sharingan 3 tomoe, MS but nothing higher. I wonder How can you be there if Edo Tensei jutsu is finished, what did happen to you when you was ressurected?
Madara: I wonder what could stop zetsu from informing you unless someone killed him, whoever it was pay me for that, Creation of him costed me much. About Kabuto, let's ignore him for now. You didn't have time to master Rinnegan but opposite to me I see Senjuu DNA perfectly merged with your Uchiha DNA. About your last question, don't worry I broke contract with him, so I am master of myself ,who is immortal with infinite chakra. Kabuto told me that you aren't going according to plan, but I see he lied to make me fight with you. Kabuto ressurect via Edo Tensei, and I was stopped by five Kages. I played a little with them, but when I released himself from his control. I just killer Raikage, Hokage and Tsuchikage and left them to help you.
Everyone: Immortal?! infinite chakra?! Supreme Commander is killed?!
Radom Iwa Nin: he killed Tsuchikage-sama?!
Random Kumo Nin: He killed Raikage-sama?!
Rookies: He killed Hokage-sama?!
Sakura is crying: Tsunade-sama...
Kakashi: Wh...at a mons...ter
Gai: Dam...n is it re..ally end of wo..rld?
The scene shows Everyone from Alliance body shaking, while some of them are crying, other are screaming, while Tobi speaks again.
Izuna: Yes perfectly control Senjuu and Uchiha DNA which merged in one. Thanks to that, My chakra use is minimal, chakra drain is minimal as well. Senjuu DNA is recovering my chakra all time, it accelarate recovering to maximum rate. This let me control Six tailed beasts at once and much more and still fighting. That bastard!, Happily you released himself, so he can control you.
Madara looking at Gedo Mazou statue: So I was right, you began to ressurect Jyuubi already, but it is weaker than it should be. I assume you didn't capture Eight tails and Nine Tails
Izuna: yes, I tried but I was outnumbered unfortunetly but with you we can do it.
Madara: Yeah, time to hunt two tailed beasts.
Izuna <turns to see speechlees Aliiance Shinobi>: It is time to finish it.
The scene shows Gai and Kakashi are dying, they try a lot amount of blood in short time. Sakura try her best but can't stop bleeding, while Ino try same but can't stop bleeding too.
Ino:?!, No..., it is bad. He has many vital organs destroyed..., there is no recovery
Lee is sad even more: Gai- sensei...
Gai: Ino, please stop this, I used eight gate so whatever you do I will die. Only prelonging my life until death. Please leave me alone with my teamates.
The scene shows Gai and all his students gathering around him
Gai: You...are...all...there.
Ten ten is really sad: Gai- sensei...
Neji: Gai... sensei...
Lee: Master... Gai...
Gai <turns his head to Ten ten>: Ten Ten, you are... pretty... young... girl. although you... don't... have po...wer... of you..th. You will... be gre...at mis...tress of... weap...ons.
Ten Ten begins to cry: Thank you... sensei
Gai <turns his head to Neji>:Neji, you are... genious... of... Hyuga... clan. I... foug..ht with... you to... acc...ept... power.... of youth, but you nev...er accep...ted my... teaching...
Neji is sad, one tear appear in his eye: You... was... great sen...sei
Gai <turns his head to Lee> : Lee, you... are... the... be...st... stud...ent, my image. You... rem...inds me of...me... when I was y...oung...er. Please... show the...m pow...er of youth and do tra...ining for me and your...self
Lee is crying badly: Gai sensei, please don't say that, don't leave me....
Gai: We we...re gre...at te...am. I ho...pe you... are... satisfied I did my best.
The scene shows Kakashi and Sakura being close with Naruto and Sai. Sakura is trying to heal Kakashi with all might, but it didn't work.
Kakashi: Sak...ura... sto...p this, you can't he...al me, I feel my en...d is clo....se
Sakura: Kakashi Sensei..., no.., I will heal you, please stop speaking
Kakashi<turns his head to Sakura>: Sakura, Please do...n't cry, you gro...wn up in beat...ifu...ll wom...an. You are exce...llent med...ic shi...nobi with fright...ining stre...ngth. You can... suprass Fif...th Hok...age if you... learn... genj....utsu
Sakura: Thank you sensei!
Kakashi: Plea...se com...e he...re, I am rea...lly happy tha...t I was yo...ur sen...sei
The scene shows both Gai and Kakashi speaking more and finally they say. While Izuna and Madara look at them with no expression on face. It begins to raining, which change in rainstorm.
Kakashi/Gai: And last...prote...ct will of... fire
The scene shows final moments Kakashi and Gai dying. After they said last words. blows of winds appear and close their eyes, moving their hairs. Rookies are crying where Madara create 10 clones and challenge all young generation to fight his clones. They are looking at Madara clones with fire in his eyes ,ready to fight

601- Madara clones vs Konoha Rookies

I know too much text, almost wall of text, but this chapter was build up for next. there is much of explanation, drama to inspire young generation to show their powers. I hope you enjoyed reading, sorry for any grama or literal mistakes, I did my best

KiddJutsu · 08-15-2012, 08:13 PM

Rikudo - really doesn't require much. It's fantastic my man. I've read some killer stuff from people on this thread in fanfic mostly but minus some grammar stuff you are really killing it sir. I gotta see you continue this thing. Great stuff....

jericho Uzimaki · 08-16-2012, 01:14 AM

Minato Return's

Flashbacks.

Minato, " i knew you could use the Kyuubi's power to stop him..."

Naruto, " i'm not relying on the fox power anymore. Im gonna be strong on my own!"

Kakashi, " if your body wasn't suppressing the fox you would have four times as much chakra."*

Kurama, " use my power Naruto, you can do it!"

Naruto, " I'm gonna be the most powerful Hokage one day!"

Present time.

Naruto is in Kurama mode then suddenly stops. Everyone is looking as he goes base mode.

Naruto to Kurama, { i appreciate your help, but i still plan on freeing you. I gotta be able to handle guy like this without your help if i'm gonna be Hokage!}*

Kurama to Naruto, {now isn't the time, just train after this war. *Right now you gotta beat him!}

Naruto, " yea i gotta beat him."

Gai, "why is Naruto doing?!"

Kakashi, " I have no idea, but i hope he does."

Bee shouting, "this ain't the time for stage fright, attack with all your might!"

Tobi, " what do you think you can do against me all alone. Without kamui you stand no chance. In that form you are no where near strong enough."

Naruto, "you have no idea what I'm capable of!"

He does multi shadow clone. They all swarm him, it is at least seven.

Tobi, " the results will not change because your angry."

All the clones pass through Tobi with each attack. *Tobi takes out each one.*

Naruto is stilled focused.*

Kakashi, " come on Naruto, if you have a plan do it now!"

Flashback.

Kakashi, " channeling your chakra to different points in your body *has various effects and uses.

We see young team 7, running up the trees in part I, Tsunade punching a rock, and Raikage fully charged stopping Naruto from getting by.

Naruto, "got it."

Tobi starts to charge Naruto, " enough of this. Kakashi, someone else you were supposed to protect*
Dies on your watch!"

Kakashi, " dammit, Naruto get out of there!"

Gai and Kakashi start to rush to interfere. Tobi swings his war fan into rubble causing it to spread out blocking the two Sensei.

He then swings it straight at Naruto.*

Naruto calmly, " let's..."

The fan is right at the bridge of his nose.

Suddenly, Naruto uppercuts Tobi who is several feet away at the end of the chain.

Tobi is shocked and sent flying upward, he is met by Naruto and...

"rasengan!!"

Tobi, {dammit, it is just like then! How, he use no seals, no kunai how?!}

He crashes down into the ground, causing a trench.

Kakashi, " how did he?"

Naruto is suddenly right beside him, "
You taught me how Sensei, its as easy as climbing a tree!"

Kakashi, {he is channeling his chakra to his feet? But he would have to use it to enhance his senses and reflexes at the sane time. Also it would take an extreme amount to cause the much speed!}*

Gai, " looks like Minato Namekaze returns, in his youthful offspring!"

Tobi is getting up, " you share his speed, but what else do u have?"

Naruto smiles, "well , you could say, I'm a natural."

He goes Sage mode, "Sage Arts: tiad stomach summoning!"

The ground surrounding them turns into the stomach lining of a toad.*

Tobi jumps into the air when suddenly...

"water bullet!"

Naruto is seen just above Tobi, spouting a giant bullet of water towards Tobi.

Then we see Naruto an two clones on the ground preparing a rasenshuriken.

Tobi evades both attacks, " all for nothing."

Naruto, "those weren't for you!"

The two attacks collide causing a huge hurricane like chakra storm.
*
Tobi is intangible, {dammit this chakra storm has the same properties as the rasenshuriken, it attacks on a cellular level. I cant affird to let up, but how long is it going to last?!}

Naruto in Sage Mode, " in case you were wondering I am controlling the Hurrasengan storm with my chakra, i can feel everyone around me and i cam tell if your ghosting or solid. Lets see who's chakra last the longest!"

Kakashi, {another technique he created that I cant follow with my sharinghan, you may be ready to foght Sasuke after all, but are you willing to?} "good job Naruto!"

Bee, " lets take out the monster quick, Naruto has got this shit!"

Gai, " he's right lets go Kakashi, Naruto will catch up!"

They all head towards the Gedo Mazou.

Tobi, " stop, stop!"

Naruto is not letting up.

Tobi, " my limit is almost reached if you defeat me you wont find out How to bring your Father back!"

Naruto looks surprised, " your lying, shut up!"

The Hurrasengan storm stops.

Tobi becomes solid and is trapped in the toad stomach lining on the ground.

Naruto appears in front of him with Kurama/Sage Mode eyes, "talk, i swear if you are trying to trick me I will not stop my attacks next time."

Tobi, " no trick, your Father is in the Death God's stomach, there is a way to get him out, it actually was part of my plan to use the past Hokages to accomplish a long lasting peace. But it is out of my abilities to do so."

Naruto, " but I can?" {Dad...}

Kurama, {oh..... Naruto.}

Is this a trick or is Tobi for real?
Is Naruto *gonna help Tobi?!

Next: "The Love of a Son"
*

Rikudounaruto · 08-16-2012, 07:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jericho Uzimaki

Minato Return's

Flashbacks.

Minato, " i knew you could use the Kyuubi's power to stop him..."

Naruto, " i'm not relying on the fox power anymore. Im gonna be strong on my own!"

Kakashi, " if your body wasn't suppressing the fox you would have four times as much chakra."*

Kurama, " use my power Naruto, you can do it!"

Naruto, " I'm gonna be the most powerful Hokage one day!"

Present time.

Naruto is in Kurama mode then suddenly stops. Everyone is looking as he goes base mode.

Naruto to Kurama, { i appreciate your help, but i still plan on freeing you. I gotta be able to handle guy like this without your help if i'm gonna be Hokage!}*

Kurama to Naruto, {now isn't the time, just train after this war. *Right now you gotta beat him!}

Naruto, " yea i gotta beat him."

Gai, "why is Naruto doing?!"

Kakashi, " I have no idea, but i hope he does."

Bee shouting, "this ain't the time for stage fright, attack with all your might!"

Tobi, " what do you think you can do against me all alone. Without kamui you stand no chance. In that form you are no where near strong enough."

Naruto, "you have no idea what I'm capable of!"

He does multi shadow clone. They all swarm him, it is at least seven.

Tobi, " the results will not change because your angry."

All the clones pass through Tobi with each attack. *Tobi takes out each one.*

Naruto is stilled focused.*

Kakashi, " come on Naruto, if you have a plan do it now!"

Flashback.

Kakashi, " channeling your chakra to different points in your body *has various effects and uses.

We see young team 7, running up the trees in part I, Tsunade punching a rock, and Raikage fully charged stopping Naruto from getting by.

Naruto, "got it."

Tobi starts to charge Naruto, " enough of this. Kakashi, someone else you were supposed to protect*
Dies on your watch!"

Kakashi, " dammit, Naruto get out of there!"

Gai and Kakashi start to rush to interfere. Tobi swings his war fan into rubble causing it to spread out blocking the two Sensei.

He then swings it straight at Naruto.*

Naruto calmly, " let's..."

The fan is right at the bridge of his nose.

Suddenly, Naruto uppercuts Tobi who is several feet away at the end of the chain.

Tobi is shocked and sent flying upward, he is met by Naruto and...

"rasengan!!"

Tobi, {dammit, it is just like then! How, he use no seals, no kunai how?!}

He crashes down into the ground, causing a trench.

Kakashi, " how did he?"

Naruto is suddenly right beside him, "
You taught me how Sensei, its as easy as climbing a tree!"

Kakashi, {he is channeling his chakra to his feet? But he would have to use it to enhance his senses and reflexes at the sane time. Also it would take an extreme amount to cause the much speed!}*

Gai, " looks like Minato Namekaze returns, in his youthful offspring!"

Tobi is getting up, " you share his speed, but what else do u have?"

Naruto smiles, "well , you could say, I'm a natural."

He goes Sage mode, "Sage Arts: tiad stomach summoning!"

The ground surrounding them turns into the stomach lining of a toad.*

Tobi jumps into the air when suddenly...

"water bullet!"

Naruto is seen just above Tobi, spouting a giant bullet of water towards Tobi.

Then we see Naruto an two clones on the ground preparing a rasenshuriken.

Tobi evades both attacks, " all for nothing."

Naruto, "those weren't for you!"

The two attacks collide causing a huge hurricane like chakra storm.
*
Tobi is intangible, {dammit this chakra storm has the same properties as the rasenshuriken, it attacks on a cellular level. I cant affird to let up, but how long is it going to last?!}

Naruto in Sage Mode, " in case you were wondering I am controlling the Hurrasengan storm with my chakra, i can feel everyone around me and i cam tell if your ghosting or solid. Lets see who's chakra last the longest!"

Kakashi, {another technique he created that I cant follow with my sharinghan, you may be ready to foght Sasuke after all, but are you willing to?} "good job Naruto!"

Bee, " lets take out the monster quick, Naruto has got this shit!"

Gai, " he's right lets go Kakashi, Naruto will catch up!"

They all head towards the Gedo Mazou.

Tobi, " stop, stop!"

Naruto is not letting up.

Tobi, " my limit is almost reached if you defeat me you wont find out How to bring your Father back!"

Naruto looks surprised, " your lying, shut up!"

The Hurrasengan storm stops.

Tobi becomes solid and is trapped in the toad stomach lining on the ground.

Naruto appears in front of him with Kurama/Sage Mode eyes, "talk, i swear if you are trying to trick me I will not stop my attacks next time."

Tobi, " no trick, your Father is in the Death God's stomach, there is a way to get him out, it actually was part of my plan to use the past Hokages to accomplish a long lasting peace. But it is out of my abilities to do so."

Naruto, " but I can?" {Dad...}

Kurama, {oh..... Naruto.}

Is this a trick or is Tobi for real?
Is Naruto *gonna help Tobi?!

Next: "The Love of a Son"
*

Wow, Epic prediction. Really original idea for prediction. Great action and interractions, however you make Tobi defeated too fast beacuse he still should use Rinnengan to counter Naruto. However if Tobi is obito then your prediction is right and I want him to fast defeated<Obito is weakling>, but if Tobi is ressurected Izuna by Madara via Rinne Tensei with Obito sharingan implanted then I hope he will show more jutsu, great mastery over Rinnengan <"They were mine to begin with"> because they are Izuna eyes and Madara merged. Izuna should be OP.

Eventually Tobi is Kagami Uchiha, but this is little possible. Other characters aren't important for me and almost impossible.

Why Tobi should be Izuna?

- Tobi knowledge about Ninja World, all jutsu and much more
- Madara talking with Kage that Izuna died, is simple to explain. Izuna really died, and Madara took attempt to ressurect Izuna, but he didn't know if it worked. He didn't want to talk about soemthing which wasn't confirmed. Izuna ressurection wasn't confirmed but Izuna death was confirmed fo Madara.
- Strong chakra and power to control Nine tails. Only Madara could do that unless his Brother could do it too, becuase after Madara and Izuna unlocked MS they were equal.
- Izuna knew about everything happened from Zetsu. Izuna knew about Mito Uzumaki so he studied about their abilities and more
- Madara had spy called Kagami Uchiha, who was Obito father. Izuna knew almost everything about Obito from his father or Obito himself as child.
- Zetsu spied Obito Uchiha when he unlocked sharingan and went with Kakashi to rescue Rin
- Madara injected Senjuu Hashirama DNA in Izuna dead body, or maybe it was Tobirama Senjuu DNA after his death it woul explain Tobi can't use Mokuton.
- Madara, who had small time for Senjuu DNA to merge with his Uchiha DNA so he had only Hashirama Head on his chest, before he died too early. Opposite to Madara ressurected Izuna lived much longer so His Senjuu DNA perfectly merged with his Uchiha DNA allowing him to use perfect Izanagi. While Madara probably couldn't use Izanagi, at least not perfect.
- Madara was hidden for long time while process of injecting Senjuu DNA in his body lasted. It explained why Izuna was hidden and didn't take action for long time while Senjuu DNA in his body lasted.
- Danzo confirmed that Senjuu cells are hard to control, so it took much of time to do it
-When Obito was crushed and after Kakashi took Obito sharingan and left with Rin. Zetsu took obito other sharingan and gave it Izuna
- Izuna collected many sharingans becuase his eyes with Madara changed in Rinnengan was in Nagato. Izuna tried and tested all sharingans until he got Obito sharingan. He was master of sharingan and once developed sharingan to MS, so he fast transformed Obito sharingan to MS and probably even perfected it.
-Madara didn't give Rinnengan to Izuna, because he wanted to give him first Senjuu DNA, and process of merging Senjuu DNA with Uchiha DNA took much time, so he gave it to Nagato Uzumaki. maybe Uchiha and Uzumaki child. Zetsu got order to spy Nagato Uzumaki and inform about it Izuna.
-Izuna fought with Fourth Hokage as equal and could control Kyuubi at the same time. Minato Namikaze even thought him as Madara so Izuna is best candidate as Madara little brother. When Fourth Hokahe hit Izuna in arm, there was Senjuu DNA same as Zetsu goo, which didn't merge perfectly with Uchiha DNA yet.
- Izuna had reason to revenge for Madara death. He had grudge against Uchiha clan, as they abandoned Madara. Izuna had grudge against Konoha for Madara death. Izuna watched all crimes and evil happening in this world so he decided to do something with that. Zetsu told him about Moon eye plan, which Madara planned to do.
-Izuna as Tobi inspired Yahiko to create Akatsuki organization, so He did it. After Yahiko death, Izuna as Tobi appeared before Nagato who begin to recruit Akatsuki members.

Rikudounaruto · 08-16-2012, 07:16 AM

- Izuna was hidden again until Senjuu DNA merged completly with Uchiha DNA. When process was completed Akatsuki had one place free after Sasori Death, so Zetsu introduced Tobi<Izuna> in organization.
- Izuna took great interest in Sasuke Uchiha, as He was Uchiha memeber as well as younger brother which was in shadow of Itachi, his older brother. Izuna felt bad for Sasuke to be in shadow of older brother.
-Izuna even fooled Itachi because he has chakra similliar to him. He has all knowledge as Madara from Zetsu.
- Izuna as Tobi traveled with Deidara to hunt three tailed beast, sanbi. While Tobi was catched by three tailed beast, He was in ghost mode so he survived Deidara bomb.
-Tobi as Izuna survived all Deidara attacks, and he could survive even more. He behave silly to fool everyone to hide his really personality. He was great actor no doubt.
- After Diedara death He finally revealed himself as true leader before readers but took name of Uchiha Madara. However Nagato was still leader for Akatsuki memebers. Only Nagato, Konan, Itachi and Kisame<probably> knew about him being real leader.
- After Nagato death, He was busy prepearing for War while Meeting of 5 Kages was happening. After declaring fourth great war Tobi as Izuna was busy created Zetsu army from bijuu chakra.
- He wanted Sasuke to get stronger so send him on 5 kage meeting. He understands his feelings.
- He wanted Danzo to be dead becuase Danzo killed Kagami Uchiha, his teammate who was spy for Izuna, I mean Tobi.
-Thanks to Hashirama living clone Tobi as Izuna, who is perfectly compatible with Senjuu DNA so can regenerate his body or make his body younger somehow.
-He retrived Rinnengan both eyes, which was created from his<Izuna> orginally eyes ,from Nagato corpse. In Tobi vs Konan fight he used Izanagi which let him avoid death. It supports my theory that he mastered Izanagi.
-He saw Hashirama Senjuu in Naruto because as Izuna he met Hashirama for sure in battle.
- In short time He was able to use Rinnegan, probably Rinnengan paths as well because it was his eyes orginally.
- Izuna knew Madara personally so he could fool everyone beahivng as him.
- Izuna planned to get Rinnengan, master using these eyes and then ressurect his brother but Kabuto appeared before and broke his plan by ressurecting Uchiha Madara, his brother with Edo Tensei.
-Izuna wasn't afraid that Madara wanted to kill him or something. First reason he didn't want to fight him, second reason was he was afraid Kabuto will control Madara and force him to fight Tobi as Izuna.
- While telling Sasuke about everything he gripped his clothes when he mentioned about Izuna<himself> giving willingly brother eyes and die after.
He wasn't mad for Madara but he was sentimantal about his death and past.
- When He met Naruto and Killer bee, he told that he is nobody and don't want to anybody. He was forgotten by Ninja World, so he was nobody. He only care about Moon eye plan to be realised, because his brother Madara sacrificed many things to do it, besides Izuna himself watched corrupted Ninja World, so he decided it was only way to create peace.
-Izuna as Tobi know everything about Obito, which I explained in Kagami <obito father> as spy. He know about Kakashi regrets and personal actions thanks to Zetsu who spied Kakashi all time, maybe for Izuna to get other Obito eye as well.
- Izuna was ressurected with no eyes via Rinne Tensei, so that why he collected these sharingans.
- I think Tobi was using Obito Sharingan almost all time. Tobi as Izuna has minimal drain using sharingan. Kakashi can use kamui only when he has Mangenkyou sharingan activated, so Tobi probably use Space time Ninjutsu only when he has Mangenkyou sharingan. Izuna mastered MS so he can use efficently as Obito would never use probably. He has Senjuu DNA in himself and even perfectly merged so he can use Space time Ninjutsu as much as he can, because Senjuu cells are healling Mangenkyou sharingan bad side effects.
- Tobi as Izuna chakra amount is easy to epxlain. He has probably great amount of chakra but below Naruto own , Kisame and Nagato, but Senjuu cells accelerate procces of chakra restoring, so He looks like has infinite chakra. Besides mastery of sharingan and great mastery over Senjuu and Uchiha techniques, DNA let him for minimal chakra using.

Summary: I know that this is great wall of text and in random order, and wrong thread probably, but please don't remove my post. I hate Obito being Tobi idea, there is so much plot holes, inaccuracies that it isn't even funny. Please Kishi make him Izuna, I hope I covered all plot holes, facts with Tobi being Izuna.

If this is wrong thread for discussion just please move this post.

If you want to know even more please read my prediction with number 600. I hope I convinced you people and Kishi himself<lol> to Tobi being Izuna.

If you have any questions or doubts, just please wirite about them and I try to explain them.

Tob being Izuna would be epic. If you agree with all my theory and facts just please thanks this post or write about it. Sorry for my english or any grammar mistakes

chisengan · 08-16-2012, 05:35 PM

does anyone know the release date, it being of is a bit annoying, and meh for a prediction something stupid will happen

KiddJutsu · 08-16-2012, 07:09 PM

Jericho - back like you never left ala Ludacris. This is vintage work by you man. Love you story telling of how Tobi was brought about. I guess you and Vishnu wanna take us through a history lesson on these characters inceptions. Hopefully this is the first of more on this storyline? And Uzu Samarai anyone???

Rikudo - you are right that there is another thread for this but your recent activity of killer predictions gets you a hall pass. So let's get that next 600-610 edition sir....

08-14-2012, 06:46 PM	#16
KiddJutsu Sannin Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 253 Thanks: 449 Thanked 199 Times in 145 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Rikudo - first off its once again a hell of a read. I appreciate how you are making this not only action packed but full of the drama. You completely did in both Guy & Kakashi which I'd have preferred not to see but dammit if I don't like how you have the last chap finishing with them seeing their students for the last time. What that should do is provide serious inspiration but also cause somebody to get a bit erratic and get a smack down too. You've got a mystery man appearing now which I figure is Madara making his appearance to that battle site. But you could go all Vishnu with it and throw a nice smooth curve ball to throw it all off. A couple things, now that you've introduced some Uzumaki special talents into the picture with Naruto, are you thinking of something from the Namizake side since Kurama apparently knowledge of that clan? Also, why hasn't Naruto mastered a FTG variation? It would have been something potentially nice to use at this point with the grand daddy monster reborn & Tobi on the offensive? Or I could be jumping ahead of you. Either way, please keep the party going with this. Good stuff...... __________________ Two fingas like a playa!!

08-15-2012, 06:49 AM	#18
KiddJutsu Sannin Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 253 Thanks: 449 Thanked 199 Times in 145 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Rikudo - Ill look out for that sir. If all that is included it should be pretty epic no doubt. __________________ Two fingas like a playa!!

08-15-2012, 02:06 PM	#20
IXI ANIMO IXI Genin Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 78 Thanks: 239 Thanked 50 Times in 30 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers haha truly the special one......best i have ever read __________________

08-15-2012, 04:17 PM	#21
KiddJutsu Sannin Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 253 Thanks: 449 Thanked 199 Times in 145 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers SO - Boom! That sh*t is dynamite! Need more of those type of predictions. And no telling how long it's been since you graced us with a fanfic. Love that read sir.... __________________ Two fingas like a playa!!

08-15-2012, 06:07 PM	#22
Rikudounaruto Genin Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 145 Thanks: 82 Thanked 411 Times in 103 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers 600 - Tobi identify finally revealed and mysterious man appear The first scene shows Madara, who is standing close to Tobi, they are turned back to each other. Blows of winds move Madara hair all cloak while Tobi hair are moving as well. Tobi mask is all shattered, mask is falling down in front of Alliance Shinobi and Naruto. They are all heavy breathing beacuse finally they can know who is enemy. blows of winds around battlefield, earth shaking from Gedo Mazou power as well as raining and ligtinings appearing on sky get even more drama and climax. As Tobi mask completly fall down on ground, Everyone from alliance shinobi have schocked face expression. Madara: Long time no see brother Tobi: I didn't expect you there, but I am glad you are here. Madara: So it was sucess after all Tobi:?! Madara: I see, you don't know about it... Tobi: What do you mean, brother?! The scene shows Sakura rush to Kakashi and begins to healing him while Ino jump to Gai and begin to healing him. Rest of Rookies come as well and are looking sad. Sakura: damn it, this black rod impaling in him, decrease my healing. Ino: same to Me, Sakura. Kakashi: he... Gai; uh.... The scene shows everyone looking at Madara, who is about to speak Madara: Hn, After you gave my eyes you died some time later as blind man. I felt bad about it and it was my fault, so I searched way to ressurect you. I read special tablet stone and then I found out that with Rinnengan you can control life and death, then I searched what is required to get Rinnengan and I discovered it was Senjuu DNA, then I decided to steal Hashirama DNA so I fought with him. It was not only one reason behind it but Hashirama DNA needed for Rinnengan was last trigger to do that. I fought with Hashirama to get his DNA and I succed but lost in this battle. After that I tried to connect random Uchiha with random Senjuu, after few failures finally it was succes, then I injected Senjuu Hashirama DNA in myself, it didn't work easily as I thought. I suffered a lot, Senjuu Hashirama DNA tried to take over my body so I have to fight for control over body. Finally It stopped and I was totally schocked when I saw my eyes in mirror. They changed to new design, which was eye filled grey color with few circles. Fast I realized that these eyes become Rinnengan. First part of my plan was succed, then I begins to collect sharingan eyes. While that I learned a lot about jutsu, Ninja world and more, even creating Plant Ninja made from White part(senjuu DNA) and black part (Uchiha DNA). I called him Zetsu, which soon provided that he is great spy. He spied everyone while I was working on my plan. I begins to wear mask then I helped one Uchiha man called Itachi kill Uchiha clan, however Itachi was too gentle to kill his parents so I killed them. When I read stone tablet again then I discovered technique called Rinne Tensei, which can ressurect someone. I took your body planted sharingan in both your eyes, then I injected Hashirama DNA in your body. After everything was prepared I used Rinne Tensei but something went wrong and I died... Price for using this technique is chakra, amount of chakra required to ressurect someone is directly proportional to time passed from this person death. This day I died..., What did happen to you after my death? Random ninja: What?!, this is really Madara Uchiha, and that monster could ressurect someone?! Other Ninja: frightining, Is he god?! The scene shows everyone listening Madara and Tobi speaking. Tobi: After you died. I was well informed by Zetsu, about everything you did: creating mist of village, Uchiha clan massacre, your fight with First Hokage, fight with Second Tsuchikage, Third Tsuchikage, killing first Raikage, killing first Kazekage and many more. I couldn't use fire affinity and other powers because Senjuu Hashirama DNA tried to take over my body so I had to wait until process was finished. I begins to create plan to destroy Konoha, Zetsu informed me about Nagato Uzumaki who has Rinnengan, my brother eyes, which was orginally mine. Zetsu informed me about Uchiha Madara spy in Konoha called Kagami Uchiha and told then I took your name and used it and took mask on. First reason was to make people fear me, second was everyone know that I am dead so it could bring attention if I use my name. Once I met with Kagami Uchiha, I worn same mask as you brother so he belived that I was you, He give me information about village, Senjuu clan, Danzo actions and more. When procces of accpeting Senjuu DNA by my body was finished I begin to work in shadow. I found out about Kagami Uchiha and he has son named Obito. This child begins to changing my thinkings, but soon Danzo Killed Kagami Uchiha and Uchiha Kiti, who was his wife. I ordered Zetsu to spy Obito, so he did. Then third war happened, when I was testing sharingans suddenly Zetsu appeared and tell me about Obito Uchiha and guy called Kakashi try to rescue girl called Rin from Iwa Ninja, I wasn't interested but he mentioned Obito awaken sharingan, so I went with Zetsu watch and check this boy potential. Kakashi thinking: so He spied us, bastard... Izuna: However fast I realized he has no talent .When he was crushed under boulder Kakashi took one his sharingan and left with Rin, I killed few Iwa Nin while zetsu appeared from ground and took Obito other sharingan then we escaped from there, when Many Iwa Nin are cooming there. I tested few sharingans some of them has special power but nothing interesting until I tried Obito sharingan. Fast I developed it from two tomoe to three tomoe and soon it changed to Mangenkyu sharingan, then I discovered amazing ability it has, Space time Ninjutsu which could make me invincible. I stopped on this eye and mastered it to maximum potential, this eye let something pas through me without touching or injuring me. This eye let me easy travel around world and finally this eye let me go to other dimension, where time flow was really slow. One minute in other dimesion is equal to one day in this world, Senjuu DNA almost stopped my aging process. Madara: You got amazing eye, Izuna I am impressed. Kakashi squeeze teeth: You... bastard... thief... Gai: Ka...ka...shi... Madara: Shut up worm, he is my brother so look out what you say! Izuna: Back to topic. I searched for Ninetails and discovered Mito Uzumaki had it, so I found out more and more about Uzumaki, then I found when seal is the weakest. It is moment when woman born children, so I found location where next jinchurki Kushina Uzumaki was and should born child. There was hell of fight with fourth Hokage , Minato Namikaze. I lost this battle but I retreated but He died as well as Kushina. Naruto: You fucking bastard!, I will kill you for that! Madara narrows his eyes on Naruto: So you are Nine tails Jinchurki, and this time real not clone. your shroud remind me Sage of six paths from drawings on stone tablet. Moreover He is from Uzumaki clan and even ancient Namikaze clan..., interesting The scene shows Naruto about to rush but Kakashi shout at him to stop. Naruto stop and talk with kakashi Naruto: Why did you stop me?! Kakashi: Naruto, do you remember that information is very important, and is even more important while fighting with enemy. Naruto: I see, so we have to listen and find out weakness of them. Kakashi: great you are clever boy..., come here pull this black rods off my and Gai body, so we can help Naruto: Kakashi sesei, I come. The scene shows Naruto appearing close to Alliance shinobi forces close to Rookies. While Everyone from Alliance Ninja is cheering for Naruto. Rookies of Konoha except Sakura and Ino come to naruto. Shikamaru: It is bothering to do, but nice to see you ,Naruto! Naruto: You too Shikimaru. You almost didn't change at all Shikimiaru: heh The scene shows Naruto is laughing while Shikamaru has bored expresion on his face Chouji: Nice to see you, clever Naruto Naruto:?!, you too, slim Chouji The scene shows Naruto and Chouji smilling at each other Kiba: Nice to see Naruto, my rival. Thanks for caring for enemy now I will take care of them baka Naruto: Nice to see you Kiba, too. But everyone know you are baka not me now The scene shows everyoneof rookies laughing even Kakashi and Gai. Shino: Hi, Naruto I am here to help you because you are from Konoha as me Naruto: Oh..., hi,.yy..., Shino. Naruto thinking: He is weird... Ten Ten sad: hi, Naruto we heard that you fought well Naruto smile to her: Thanks, you got nice fan which fits your pretty face Ten Ten: Oh, thanks. You are handesome too. The scene shows Ten Ten is huging Naruto Neji: you are really amazing, you changed you destiny from looser to become powerfull shinobi is genius indeed Naruto: Thanks Neji, I hope Hyuuga clan rules change even better. The scene shows Naruto and Neji are shaking hands. Ino: Naruto, I have to admit you become handesome and powerfull shinobi Naruto: Thanks Ino, you become even prettier and skilled kunoichi The scene shows Ino is hugging Naruto. After that she fast comes back to Gai and heal him Sakura trying to smile: Nice to see you Naruto I miss you Naruto cheer her: You too, Sakura I am happy you are right The scene shows Sakura is huging Naruto tightly, but release him after moment and comes back to heal Kakashi Lee: Naruto-kun, Nice... to see.. you Naruto:?!, Lee... <turns to look at Gai> I know it is hard for you when your sensei is dying. The scene shows Naruto put hand on lee arm to cheer him up. While everyone was greeting with Naruto. Hinata stand backward and watching. Hinata thinking: He is so handesome, I love him, but can I really do it? Hinata: Naruto, Nice... to see... you Naruto: You too Hinata, I missed you so much and I love you... Last edited by Rikudounaruto; 08-15-2012 at 06:33 PM.

08-15-2012, 06:08 PM	#23
woody_3162 Chuunin Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: united kingdom Posts: 450 Thanks: 439 Thanked 416 Times in 137 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Not getting much time these days guys, but I'll try to post up something whenever I can. Anyways enjoy. Naruto: 598 Naruto Dashes towards Tobi, a rasengan begins forming in his hand. He strikes straight at Tobi’s mask and phases right through. Naruto:!! Tobi: Foolish foolish Naruto, what exactly do you think has changed? Kakashi:… Tobi moves a little to one side moving away from naruto whilst keeping everyone within his line of sight. Tobi: So you now know how my justu works, what of it? For you to exploit that advantage you would have to create the perfect situation of your attacks overlapping with my phasing, do you think it will be that easy now that I know what you’re aiming for. Kakashi: (how do we create an opening now that he’s watching for it…) Tobi keeps moving across and now he stands halfway between Gai/kakashi and Naruto Tobi: and not to forget that Kakahsi has to keep using Kamui for this to work, I wonder Kakashi, how much longer can you keep going? Kakashi:… Tobi raises his hands arms out wide to either side, his hands are open, one pointing towards naruto and the other towards kakashi. He turns his head to one side to look at naruto Tobi: Then again…I could just kill him first! Shinra Tensei Naruto struggles as the full force of the Shinra Tensei hits him, but even in his current form he is thrown back, the force is that strong that the trees behind have all been torn away at the roots and flung back destroying each other. Tobi turns his head to the left, looking at Kakashi. Bansho Tenin* Kakashi is caught up and pulled towards Tobi Naruto/Gai:!!! Kakashi: (Sh, the Rinnegann!! I was too focused on his Sharingan, he’s too close I can’t escape!) A long knife slips out of Tobi’s sleeve into his hand, he holds it out pointed directly at Kakashi’s oncoming head. Flaming Peacock* You see Gai appear just above Tobi and shoot down his Fireballs. Tobi phases letting kakashi fly right through him to the other side where he crashes to the ground. You can see Naruto a little way away in the back ground. Gai: Your technique is still no match for my speed, I won’t let you have my rival that easily. Kakashi: Naruto!! Naruto:?! Kakashi: Listen to me! He is just another villain like the many you’ve faced before, you do not need our help to defeat him, He is just another Zabuza Momochi! Gai/Tobi:??? Naruto:… Naruto puts his hands together and forms a seal. A double handed shuriken almost as large as him appears in his hand. Tobi: ??! Naruto throws the Kunai directly at Tobi. Tobi looks at the Shuriken flying towards him, in the background he can see Kakashi holding his hands together looking directly at him. Tobi: (So that’s there game. Kakashi tried to bluff saying naruto could do this on his own, if I fell for the bait I’d try to phase through it, and as I did that Kakashi would use Kamui to send it to the other dimension effectively cutting me in two) Nice try Kakashi. Tobi jumps towards the shuriken and grabs it out of mid-air, as he lands back down holding the shuriken he looks at it in surprise. Tobi: You’ve condensed a lot of chakra into this Naruto, most likely to increase its cutting power on the off chance iblocked it instead of phasing through it. I guess you didn’t want up to mess up your only chance. Tobi warps the Kunai away into his other dimension. Tobi: I might have use for that later Naruto: heheheh, I can’t believe that worked first time around, I thought I’d have to try it at least a few times before you fell for it. Tobi:??! Kakashi: Nice one Naruto Tobi: Are you trying to fool me once again Kakashi? Kakashi gets up and pats himself down, he seems to be completely at ease now. He begins to casually walk over to Tobi. As Tobi’s attention is focused on Kakashi, naruto gives a meaningful look towards Killer Bee. Kakashi: You see the first bluff was actually a double bluff. Gai/Tobi:?? Kakashi: I do believe Naruto can defeat you on his own, especially once I figured out how your technique works, but I wanted you to think that I was bluffing and was actually going to help him. Tobi: …you obviously did not wish me to just phase through the shuriken he threw, why? I dodged it easily it was that slow…!!! Kakashi: Yes I think you understand, we didn’t want you avoid it at all , in fact- Tobi:!!! Suddenly a pencil is swirling in Raiton chakra right next to Tobi’s eye. You see Killer Bee off to one side still in octopus mode, he has a massive grin on his face and one of his tentacles is stretched out as if he’s thrown it. Tobi Phases not having enough time to dodge or do anything else. The pencil travels through his head and out the other side. Suddenly there’s an explosion in front of Tobi’s face, His mask explodes into little pieces as he is violently thrown back into a tree. He drops to the ground on his hands and knees and you can see blood spilling to the ground from beneath his face. Tobi: !!! What did you- Kakashi: Naruto was the prankster of the hidden leaf before he was its hero Naruto: hehehe Kakashi: you were just tricked into believing that that was just a shuriken when it really was one of naruto’s clones transformed. Naruto: You wanted some of my chakra and now you have it. I’ve got one of my friends in there ready to give you a big rasengan welcome anytime you wish to head back. Tobi: gwah Tobi splutters coughing up blood, he stands shakily with his right hand covering the side of his face. Tobi: I will make you pay for this* Naruto points at Tobi Naruto: I've made all your time space jutsu useless you nobody, now it's my turn! Next week: Naruto 599 - desires Last edited by woody_3162; 08-15-2012 at 06:09 PM.

08-15-2012, 06:09 PM	#24
Rikudounaruto Genin Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 145 Thanks: 82 Thanked 411 Times in 103 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers The scene shows Naruto is comming closer to her while speaking to her. When he finished speech suddenly Hinata is runing to him, she then catch him and is huging him tightly, then she release him and kiss him in cheek, Naruto is blushing. While everyone is laughing Hinata is little embarassed but smiles. Suddenly two Madara clones appear from nowhere and pierce Kakashi and Gai with black rods comming from their hands Naruto:?! Everyone:?! The scene shows Naruto, who enter bijuu mode and rush at clones, rest of shinobi rush to attack them too, but they suddenly dissapear. Naruto notice Madara release them. When Tobi speak again everyone eyes are directed on him. While Sakura come fast to heal Kakashi and begins to cry and Ino try to heal Gai and looks at sad lee. Izuna: After my battle with Fourth Hokage I created orginization, made from the best and the strongest Ninja who was missining. I began to capture Bijuu, I was hidden all time, while Nagato Uzumaki using six paths was fake leader. While my minions capture more and more bijuu I loose members one after one. Finally I got seven Bijuu, thanks to their sacrificing life. I recruited Uchiha Sasuke, younger brother of Uchiha Itachi to Akatsuki after wining his fight with Uchiha Itachi. Madara: Uchiha Itachi?!, so this younger brother of Itachi is strong indeed. Naruto: th!... Izuna: Right, He even developed his eyes to Eternal Mangenkyu sharingan. Soon I declared War against The world using your name to make them fear me and coperate, but it didn't work. After Nagato death by Uzumaki Naruto hand I retrieved rinnengan our eyes and implatend one of them. Madara: Nine tails jinchurki killed Nagato Uzumaki, he is really dangerous then... but why you implanted one Rinnengan not two? Izuna: Yes, If I wanted to implant second I could, but I wanted to keep this sharingan for defence power. I couldn't left it, so I took one Rinnengan and one sharingan. After I got Rinnengan back, Kabuto Yakushi who merged with sanin named Orochimaru came and summoned you as well as my fellow comrades from akatsuki to force me to accept Alliance with him. I agreed, we begins war and it last second day now. Rest you know you should know. Madara: I see, many events happened since my death. Great choice to use sharingan and Rinnengan at the same time, Where is zetsu?!, Is Kabuto alive and where is him?! Can you switch your Rinnengan to lower version... Izuna: I don't know where is Zetsu, it looks like something happen to him because he would inform me about Kabuto Ending Edo Tensei, about you and Sasuke. Sasuke, i wonder what did happen to him... I don't know where is Kabuto and I wonder is he alive... I can switch Rinnengan to lower forms no problem<switches Rinnegan to three EMS->MS-> sharingan and switches thorught all forms to Rinnengan>, but I didn't have enough time to master Rinnengan, so switching take more time for me and I didn't want to create opening for enemies to attack me. Besides I have only mastered Sharingan 3 tomoe, MS but nothing higher. I wonder How can you be there if Edo Tensei jutsu is finished, what did happen to you when you was ressurected? Madara: I wonder what could stop zetsu from informing you unless someone killed him, whoever it was pay me for that, Creation of him costed me much. About Kabuto, let's ignore him for now. You didn't have time to master Rinnegan but opposite to me I see Senjuu DNA perfectly merged with your Uchiha DNA. About your last question, don't worry I broke contract with him, so I am master of myself ,who is immortal with infinite chakra. Kabuto told me that you aren't going according to plan, but I see he lied to make me fight with you. Kabuto ressurect via Edo Tensei, and I was stopped by five Kages. I played a little with them, but when I released himself from his control. I just killer Raikage, Hokage and Tsuchikage and left them to help you. Everyone: Immortal?! infinite chakra?! Supreme Commander is killed?! Radom Iwa Nin: he killed Tsuchikage-sama?! Random Kumo Nin: He killed Raikage-sama?! Rookies: He killed Hokage-sama?! Sakura is crying: Tsunade-sama... Kakashi: Wh...at a mons...ter Gai: Dam...n is it re..ally end of wo..rld? The scene shows Everyone from Alliance body shaking, while some of them are crying, other are screaming, while Tobi speaks again. Izuna: Yes perfectly control Senjuu and Uchiha DNA which merged in one. Thanks to that, My chakra use is minimal, chakra drain is minimal as well. Senjuu DNA is recovering my chakra all time, it accelarate recovering to maximum rate. This let me control Six tailed beasts at once and much more and still fighting. That bastard!, Happily you released himself, so he can control you. Madara looking at Gedo Mazou statue: So I was right, you began to ressurect Jyuubi already, but it is weaker than it should be. I assume you didn't capture Eight tails and Nine Tails Izuna: yes, I tried but I was outnumbered unfortunetly but with you we can do it. Madara: Yeah, time to hunt two tailed beasts. Izuna <turns to see speechlees Aliiance Shinobi>: It is time to finish it. The scene shows Gai and Kakashi are dying, they try a lot amount of blood in short time. Sakura try her best but can't stop bleeding, while Ino try same but can't stop bleeding too. Ino:?!, No..., it is bad. He has many vital organs destroyed..., there is no recovery Lee is sad even more: Gai- sensei... Gai: Ino, please stop this, I used eight gate so whatever you do I will die. Only prelonging my life until death. Please leave me alone with my teamates. The scene shows Gai and all his students gathering around him Gai: You...are...all...there. Ten ten is really sad: Gai- sensei... Neji: Gai... sensei... Lee: Master... Gai... Gai <turns his head to Ten ten>: Ten Ten, you are... pretty... young... girl. although you... don't... have po...wer... of you..th. You will... be gre...at mis...tress of... weap...ons. Ten Ten begins to cry: Thank you... sensei Gai <turns his head to Neji>:Neji, you are... genious... of... Hyuga... clan. I... foug..ht with... you to... acc...ept... power.... of youth, but you nev...er accep...ted my... teaching... Neji is sad, one tear appear in his eye: You... was... great sen...sei Gai <turns his head to Lee> : Lee, you... are... the... be...st... stud...ent, my image. You... rem...inds me of...me... when I was y...oung...er. Please... show the...m pow...er of youth and do tra...ining for me and your...self Lee is crying badly: Gai sensei, please don't say that, don't leave me.... Gai: We we...re gre...at te...am. I ho...pe you... are... satisfied I did my best. The scene shows Kakashi and Sakura being close with Naruto and Sai. Sakura is trying to heal Kakashi with all might, but it didn't work. Kakashi: Sak...ura... sto...p this, you can't he...al me, I feel my en...d is clo....se Sakura: Kakashi Sensei..., no.., I will heal you, please stop speaking Kakashi<turns his head to Sakura>: Sakura, Please do...n't cry, you gro...wn up in beat...ifu...ll wom...an. You are exce...llent med...ic shi...nobi with fright...ining stre...ngth. You can... suprass Fif...th Hok...age if you... learn... genj....utsu Sakura: Thank you sensei! Kakashi: Plea...se com...e he...re, I am rea...lly happy tha...t I was yo...ur sen...sei The scene shows both Gai and Kakashi speaking more and finally they say. While Izuna and Madara look at them with no expression on face. It begins to raining, which change in rainstorm. Kakashi/Gai: And last...prote...ct will of... fire The scene shows final moments Kakashi and Gai dying. After they said last words. blows of winds appear and close their eyes, moving their hairs. Rookies are crying where Madara create 10 clones and challenge all young generation to fight his clones. They are looking at Madara clones with fire in his eyes ,ready to fight 601- Madara clones vs Konoha Rookies I know too much text, almost wall of text, but this chapter was build up for next. there is much of explanation, drama to inspire young generation to show their powers. I hope you enjoyed reading, sorry for any grama or literal mistakes, I did my best Last edited by Rikudounaruto; 08-15-2012 at 06:34 PM.

08-15-2012, 08:13 PM	#25
KiddJutsu Sannin Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 253 Thanks: 449 Thanked 199 Times in 145 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Rikudo - really doesn't require much. It's fantastic my man. I've read some killer stuff from people on this thread in fanfic mostly but minus some grammar stuff you are really killing it sir. I gotta see you continue this thing. Great stuff.... __________________ Two fingas like a playa!!

08-16-2012, 01:14 AM	#26
jericho Uzimaki ANBU Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Fayetteville, NC Posts: 1,608 Thanks: 1,839 Thanked 1,549 Times in 500 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Minato Return's Flashbacks. Minato, " i knew you could use the Kyuubi's power to stop him..." Naruto, " i'm not relying on the fox power anymore. Im gonna be strong on my own!" Kakashi, " if your body wasn't suppressing the fox you would have four times as much chakra."* Kurama, " use my power Naruto, you can do it!" Naruto, " I'm gonna be the most powerful Hokage one day!" Present time. Naruto is in Kurama mode then suddenly stops. Everyone is looking as he goes base mode. Naruto to Kurama, { i appreciate your help, but i still plan on freeing you. I gotta be able to handle guy like this without your help if i'm gonna be Hokage!}* Kurama to Naruto, {now isn't the time, just train after this war. Right now you gotta beat him!} Naruto, " yea i gotta beat him." Gai, "why is Naruto doing?!" Kakashi, " I have no idea, but i hope he does." Bee shouting, "this ain't the time for stage fright, attack with all your might!" Tobi, " what do you think you can do against me all alone. Without kamui you stand no chance. In that form you are no where near strong enough." Naruto, "you have no idea what I'm capable of!" He does multi shadow clone. They all swarm him, it is at least seven. Tobi, " the results will not change because your angry." All the clones pass through Tobi with each attack. Tobi takes out each one.* Naruto is stilled focused.* Kakashi, " come on Naruto, if you have a plan do it now!" Flashback. Kakashi, " channeling your chakra to different points in your body has various effects and uses. We see young team 7, running up the trees in part I, Tsunade punching a rock, and Raikage fully charged stopping Naruto from getting by. Naruto, "got it." Tobi starts to charge Naruto, " enough of this. Kakashi, someone else you were supposed to protect Dies on your watch!" Kakashi, " dammit, Naruto get out of there!" Gai and Kakashi start to rush to interfere. Tobi swings his war fan into rubble causing it to spread out blocking the two Sensei. He then swings it straight at Naruto.* Naruto calmly, " let's..." The fan is right at the bridge of his nose. Suddenly, Naruto uppercuts Tobi who is several feet away at the end of the chain. Tobi is shocked and sent flying upward, he is met by Naruto and... "rasengan!!" Tobi, {dammit, it is just like then! How, he use no seals, no kunai how?!} He crashes down into the ground, causing a trench. Kakashi, " how did he?" Naruto is suddenly right beside him, " You taught me how Sensei, its as easy as climbing a tree!" Kakashi, {he is channeling his chakra to his feet? But he would have to use it to enhance his senses and reflexes at the sane time. Also it would take an extreme amount to cause the much speed!}* Gai, " looks like Minato Namekaze returns, in his youthful offspring!" Tobi is getting up, " you share his speed, but what else do u have?" Naruto smiles, "well , you could say, I'm a natural." He goes Sage mode, "Sage Arts: tiad stomach summoning!" The ground surrounding them turns into the stomach lining of a toad.* Tobi jumps into the air when suddenly... "water bullet!" Naruto is seen just above Tobi, spouting a giant bullet of water towards Tobi. Then we see Naruto an two clones on the ground preparing a rasenshuriken. Tobi evades both attacks, " all for nothing." Naruto, "those weren't for you!" The two attacks collide causing a huge hurricane like chakra storm. * Tobi is intangible, {dammit this chakra storm has the same properties as the rasenshuriken, it attacks on a cellular level. I cant affird to let up, but how long is it going to last?!} Naruto in Sage Mode, " in case you were wondering I am controlling the Hurrasengan storm with my chakra, i can feel everyone around me and i cam tell if your ghosting or solid. Lets see who's chakra last the longest!" Kakashi, {another technique he created that I cant follow with my sharinghan, you may be ready to foght Sasuke after all, but are you willing to?} "good job Naruto!" Bee, " lets take out the monster quick, Naruto has got this shit!" Gai, " he's right lets go Kakashi, Naruto will catch up!" They all head towards the Gedo Mazou. Tobi, " stop, stop!" Naruto is not letting up. Tobi, " my limit is almost reached if you defeat me you wont find out How to bring your Father back!" Naruto looks surprised, " your lying, shut up!" The Hurrasengan storm stops. Tobi becomes solid and is trapped in the toad stomach lining on the ground. Naruto appears in front of him with Kurama/Sage Mode eyes, "talk, i swear if you are trying to trick me I will not stop my attacks next time." Tobi, " no trick, your Father is in the Death God's stomach, there is a way to get him out, it actually was part of my plan to use the past Hokages to accomplish a long lasting peace. But it is out of my abilities to do so." Naruto, " but I can?" {Dad...} Kurama, {oh..... Naruto.} Is this a trick or is Tobi for real? Is Naruto gonna help Tobi?! Next: "The Love of a Son" __________________ Gamble Joshua the Rogue Transformers:Generations For NaruHina fans First Orange knuckle head ninja The Question

08-16-2012, 07:16 AM	#28
Rikudounaruto Genin Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 145 Thanks: 82 Thanked 411 Times in 103 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers - Izuna was hidden again until Senjuu DNA merged completly with Uchiha DNA. When process was completed Akatsuki had one place free after Sasori Death, so Zetsu introduced Tobi<Izuna> in organization. - Izuna took great interest in Sasuke Uchiha, as He was Uchiha memeber as well as younger brother which was in shadow of Itachi, his older brother. Izuna felt bad for Sasuke to be in shadow of older brother. -Izuna even fooled Itachi because he has chakra similliar to him. He has all knowledge as Madara from Zetsu. - Izuna as Tobi traveled with Deidara to hunt three tailed beast, sanbi. While Tobi was catched by three tailed beast, He was in ghost mode so he survived Deidara bomb. -Tobi as Izuna survived all Deidara attacks, and he could survive even more. He behave silly to fool everyone to hide his really personality. He was great actor no doubt. - After Diedara death He finally revealed himself as true leader before readers but took name of Uchiha Madara. However Nagato was still leader for Akatsuki memebers. Only Nagato, Konan, Itachi and Kisame<probably> knew about him being real leader. - After Nagato death, He was busy prepearing for War while Meeting of 5 Kages was happening. After declaring fourth great war Tobi as Izuna was busy created Zetsu army from bijuu chakra. - He wanted Sasuke to get stronger so send him on 5 kage meeting. He understands his feelings. - He wanted Danzo to be dead becuase Danzo killed Kagami Uchiha, his teammate who was spy for Izuna, I mean Tobi. -Thanks to Hashirama living clone Tobi as Izuna, who is perfectly compatible with Senjuu DNA so can regenerate his body or make his body younger somehow. -He retrived Rinnengan both eyes, which was created from his<Izuna> orginally eyes ,from Nagato corpse. In Tobi vs Konan fight he used Izanagi which let him avoid death. It supports my theory that he mastered Izanagi. -He saw Hashirama Senjuu in Naruto because as Izuna he met Hashirama for sure in battle. - In short time He was able to use Rinnegan, probably Rinnengan paths as well because it was his eyes orginally. - Izuna knew Madara personally so he could fool everyone beahivng as him. - Izuna planned to get Rinnengan, master using these eyes and then ressurect his brother but Kabuto appeared before and broke his plan by ressurecting Uchiha Madara, his brother with Edo Tensei. -Izuna wasn't afraid that Madara wanted to kill him or something. First reason he didn't want to fight him, second reason was he was afraid Kabuto will control Madara and force him to fight Tobi as Izuna. - While telling Sasuke about everything he gripped his clothes when he mentioned about Izuna<himself> giving willingly brother eyes and die after. He wasn't mad for Madara but he was sentimantal about his death and past. - When He met Naruto and Killer bee, he told that he is nobody and don't want to anybody. He was forgotten by Ninja World, so he was nobody. He only care about Moon eye plan to be realised, because his brother Madara sacrificed many things to do it, besides Izuna himself watched corrupted Ninja World, so he decided it was only way to create peace. -Izuna as Tobi know everything about Obito, which I explained in Kagami <obito father> as spy. He know about Kakashi regrets and personal actions thanks to Zetsu who spied Kakashi all time, maybe for Izuna to get other Obito eye as well. - Izuna was ressurected with no eyes via Rinne Tensei, so that why he collected these sharingans. - I think Tobi was using Obito Sharingan almost all time. Tobi as Izuna has minimal drain using sharingan. Kakashi can use kamui only when he has Mangenkyou sharingan activated, so Tobi probably use Space time Ninjutsu only when he has Mangenkyou sharingan. Izuna mastered MS so he can use efficently as Obito would never use probably. He has Senjuu DNA in himself and even perfectly merged so he can use Space time Ninjutsu as much as he can, because Senjuu cells are healling Mangenkyou sharingan bad side effects. - Tobi as Izuna chakra amount is easy to epxlain. He has probably great amount of chakra but below Naruto own , Kisame and Nagato, but Senjuu cells accelerate procces of chakra restoring, so He looks like has infinite chakra. Besides mastery of sharingan and great mastery over Senjuu and Uchiha techniques, DNA let him for minimal chakra using. Summary: I know that this is great wall of text and in random order, and wrong thread probably, but please don't remove my post. I hate Obito being Tobi idea, there is so much plot holes, inaccuracies that it isn't even funny. Please Kishi make him Izuna, I hope I covered all plot holes, facts with Tobi being Izuna. If this is wrong thread for discussion just please move this post. If you want to know even more please read my prediction with number 600. I hope I convinced you people and Kishi himself<lol> to Tobi being Izuna. If you have any questions or doubts, just please wirite about them and I try to explain them. Tob being Izuna would be epic. If you agree with all my theory and facts just please thanks this post or write about it. Sorry for my english or any grammar mistakes Last edited by Rikudounaruto; 08-16-2012 at 08:40 AM.

08-16-2012, 05:35 PM	#29
chisengan travelling -nin Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: ☺_- evil eye Age: 23 Posts: 382 Thanks: 54 Thanked 52 Times in 30 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers does anyone know the release date, it being of is a bit annoying, and meh for a prediction something stupid will happen __________________ I've been spending way to much time on /b/ -_-

08-16-2012, 07:09 PM	#30
KiddJutsu Sannin Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Texas Posts: 253 Thanks: 449 Thanked 199 Times in 145 Posts	Re: Naruto 598 Predictions/Spoilers Jericho - back like you never left ala Ludacris. This is vintage work by you man. Love you story telling of how Tobi was brought about. I guess you and Vishnu wanna take us through a history lesson on these characters inceptions. Hopefully this is the first of more on this storyline? And Uzu Samarai anyone??? Rikudo - you are right that there is another thread for this but your recent activity of killer predictions gets you a hall pass. So let's get that next 600-610 edition sir.... __________________ Two fingas like a playa!! Last edited by KiddJutsu; 08-16-2012 at 07:11 PM.

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