Numinous

No comments on Weaver?

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Narut0360

KiddJutsu thanks again for your comments and suggestions….

• When you said that Naruto, “hasn't even brought out the big combinations either.” You have know Idea what is too come…. I have TWO MAJOR battles that I have planned, but im not sure when the story will get to them exactly…

• & the Uzumaki’s will play a role in the upcoming chapter

• I do like your suggestion to have an Uzumaki fighting style and I have thought about doing that myself….However at this time period in the story it will not happen.

• & your idea for “The Sage toads could have a killer combo move with Naruto like Ma & Pa frogs with J-man.” I like it a lot! I have not thought about it, since all of Naruto’s battles so far have not been a huge challenge that Naruto would even need help…. However if you have any ideas on the move you can send me a private message and I might consider using it….

• & as for my next installment, I will have to take a little break…. But hopefully sometime next week I will have one up….

Thank you again for your comments and suggestions, it is a big help

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Check out my Fanfiction from the very Beginning on page "37" in Naruto Fan Fiction Thread and it continues on pages "37,47,49,57,61,62,63,70,71,72,90,92,93, 94,96,98"

Thank You and Enjoy

Vishnu

Without any more delays, my new fanfic it's here. I know that i lost from a long time ago the connections with the real manga, but hell...if you read it and like it, why not?
Tell me your thoughts as usually.


Chapter one: The Creation

The scene shows an old man, with a long white beard and blue eyes. He is standing in a giant garden and looks at the Sun. Suddenly behind him, another man lands. A young man, dressed entirely in black, carring a sword at his back. The newcomer has black hair, he is quite tall for his age, but his eyes are the most vibrant thing about him. Red eyes, with a spiralling black pattern.

The Creator: It's time, isn't it?
Unknown young man: I'm afraid so.
The Creator: Does my Seventh Seraphim knows what it's happening here?
Unknown young man: No. Vishnu is not aware of my actions. You knew that this day will come afterall.
The Creator: And i expected it with joy. You cannot understand yet, what it means to have my age. But you will understand. You are far more cursed than i was. You must stand at the side of every new God that it is to come, and slay them one after another. That was your destiny. That's why you existed outside my Divine Plan.
Unknown young man: And i accepted my fate.*
The Creator's voice: I've commited many mistakes my son. I wasn't the perfect being that i supposed to be. Afterall not even the human beings are perfect. They are shaped after my image, so why should they achieve perfection? Anyway...i have made mistakes. And my mistakes tend to be bigger than the regular ones. Because my mistakes affects the flow of the Universe.
Unknown young man: I will hear your confession.
The Creator: Now that you are the God of Death for centuries...and you have already experienced the pain of losing everyone dear to you...the pain of not being able to die...the pain to see everyone around you getting older and older...and you..being immortal...i can finally tell you the last great story. Nobody knows this story. Nobody has seen it as i did. Nobody knows all the sides...but me.You may have heard fragments of this story during your initial encounters with the Angels...but you never heard the entire tale. So, i will give you the chance...to judge yourself...what really happend...why we are who we are.*
Unknown young man: The truth...actually i'm tired of lies. It would be a nice change of scenery to hear the truth for once.
The Creator: Well then...shall I start telling you the final grand story...Sasuke?




He*spoke in the darkness: *“Let there be light!” *And right away there was light, scattering the darkness and showing the infinite space.*

And then, he thought about making some other beings. Beings that are just like him. But that don't share his entire vision of the world. And so, from God's personality the Angels were born. And there was a group that stood up. A group that God saw doing incredible things. He saw their future. He decided their destiny. God called them to face them. He was hiding his presence from their sight.
God talking with the angels: You...will be called Kubera...and you Brahma. And you will be Shiva. You will be Yama, and you will be Nirriti. You will be Livontes. You will be Quintrix You...will be Michael. You will be Raphael. You will be Gabriel. Your name will be Lucifer. And you...will be Vishnu. One day, the fate of the world will be decided by one of you.*
Shiva: Father, why can't we see you?
God: My sight is only for the chosen one to carry my will. And he will see me at the proper moment.
Michael: So...What do we have to do, Father?
God: Live!!

Thousands of years have passed. The panel shows the Heavens. A giant garden. Two boys are running around. Suddenly they both get tired of running, and sit down on the grass. The first boy, has about 17-18 years old, black hair, brown eyes and caucasian traits. The second one, has blond hair and asian traits.

Livontes:Hey Vishnu...what do you think that Father wanted to say?
Vishnu: What do you mean, Livontes?
Livontes: I mean that at a certain point in the future...one of us...will hold the keys to the world.
Vishnu laughs: I doubt that it would be either of us.*
Livontes: Why wouldn't we be the ones to rule the world?
Vishnu: First of all, i think that our Father was talking about deciding something for the world, not rulling it. Second of all, you forgot about Michael, Shiva and Brahma. They are much older than us and far more skilled with their abilities. Right now i can barely create a mere lightning bolt, and you can make only one dark beam at a time. We are weaker than them. Shiva is already training at mastering the chaos element, Brahma commands the Sun and Michael is a beast. Even Yama is trying to level up his powers. We are the weakest beings that our Father made, and i am content with this situation.
Livontes: I cannot belive you. You sound just like a weakling. We must improve brother!
Vishnu: Clearly we are not the ones that our Father was talking about.
Livontes: How do you know that, Vishnu? We have equal chances. All of us.
Vishnu: Lucifer is Father's favorite for example. Do you think that you stand a chance against him?
Livontes smiling with confidence: I don't know, but i will try to stand at the top!

The scene it's switched several years ahead. Vishnu and Livontes are still training. Hard.
Suddenly near them, a tall man, with black hair and green eyes lands.

Vishnu: Brother Michael.
Michael: Hello brats. What are you doing here?
Livontes: You could try to show a little more respect towards us, Michael.
Michael laughs: And why should i do it?*
Livontes with hatred in his eyes: Because one day we will grow and we will make you to be afraid of us!
Vishnu: Livontes! Shut up! I'm sorry Michael...he didn't mean to say such things...
Livontes: I did! I will make you kneel one day before me, Michael!
Almost instantly Livontes is kneeled before Michael. The boy is crying out of rage, and he cannot control his body.
Michael smiles: Come again, Livontes? What were you just saying?
Vishnu: Michael...release him...we are just kids compared to your power.
Michael: Exactly. That's why you should not even dare to speak before me! And you are not the one to tell me what to do Vishnu! So, you'd better kneel yourself, or should I make you too?
Vishnu grins, and he is vissibly angered by Michael's behaviour.
Vishnu: I think that you crossed a line here, Michael. Our Father made all of us equall. It's not fair for you to bully us.
Suddeny Michael appears exactly in front of Vishnu and gives him a powerful punch exactly in chest, throwing him several meters away. Vishnu crashes into the ground and slowly gets up. From his mouth, blood is coming out.
Vishnu: Michael...stop this...you don't need to be violent.
Michael: Who do you think you are bug?!? I'm far more superior than any of you!*
Suddenly he appears again in front of Vishnu and releases another blow. Dust is raised quickly and the ground surrounding them gets cracked. As the dust clears up, the scene shows Vishnu who managed to catch Michael's punch, with his right hand.
Michael shocked: What the...!?!
Vishnu: I said stop this Michael.
Michael instantly makes a couple of steps back and slowly creates a Light element sword.
Vishnu shocked: Light element!
Michael: I will teach you some manners brat!
He rushes towards Vishnu at a very high speed.
Vishnu thinking: I cannot dodge that attack...and i have nothing for defence...
Just when Michael is about to hit Vishnu directly, a man lands near them and catches Michael's hand. A blonde man with blue eyes.
Michael shocked: Brother!
Lucifer with a smile: What are you doing Michael? You were about to kill Vishnu.
Michael calms himself down and throws Vishnu a menacing glare.
Lucifer: You didn't want to kill him, right?
Michael: Maybe i was aiming for a shot. But i don't understand why you protected him.
Lucifer: What do you mean? He is our brother afterall.*
Michael: So what?
Lucifer: Hmpf...you seem to disconsider our race, Michael. Aren't we supposed to be all at the same level?
Michael: Don't tell me that you consider at the same level with these punks.
Lucifer: Actually i do. They are my brothers. I will protect them.
Michael: Do as you like. Afterall...you will not be always around.*
Lucifer: I don't understand this grugde of yours, brother.
Michael smiles strange, turns around and leaves the scene. Lucifer is left alone with Vishnu and Livontes. He quickly helps Livontes up.
Lucifer: Are you ok?
Livontes: Yeah...that bastard...Michael...he will pay one day!
Lucifer: I'm sure that he will. But until that moment comes, you must train to became more powerful, if you hope to stand a chance against him.
Vishnu: We are training. Day after day.
Lucifer: Not exactly, Vishnu. What you are doing is not training.
Vishnu: What do you mean? I am training!
Lucifer: No you don't. Currently you are just wasting time, Vishnu.
Vishnu: I don't understand.
Lucifer: Right now, you trained only to polish your current skills. But you didn't train to develop new skills. Hmm....you need some help...
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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

Livontes: You will help us?!?
Lucifer: Yeah, i will. Bur first things first. You must have a dream...an objective. That's the only way that will allow you to push your limits. So please, think of something!
Livontes: I just want to be a hero...to have everyone respect me and my power.
Lucifer: It's a decent dream. What about you Vishnu?
Vishnu: I....i...just want to...see Him.
Lucifer a bit confused: You want to see Father?
Vishnu: I know that it's arrogant of me...because nobody has ever seen him yet...but i want to meet him.
Lucifer smiles with compassion.
Lucifer: I will help you accomplish that dream of yours, Vishnu. Now, let me tell you a story...
Vishnu: A story?
Lucifer: There is a legend...that independent of us, another six angels exists. As you know the Archangel rank it's the highest rank for us.*
Vishnu: I know. And my uncle Kubera and Brahma are currently Archangels. But i don't understand what's with the six angels.
Lucifer: Patience. The story says, that there is even a higher rank, beyond the one of an Archangel.*
Vishnu shocked: A higher rank?
Lucifer with a serious voice: The Seraphims. The Guardians of God. The story tells that six angels with the rank of Seraphim exists, and they protect the aspects of God's reign. But there is also an "inside" legend contained in the story. That after a great battle that it is to come, a new Seraphim will rise. The Seventh Seraphim...and he will rule the six others, and he will be the guardian of our Father's throne. The legend says that only God himself has more control over the reality, besides the Seventh Seraphim.
Vishnu with his eyes widen: Really? You are not makimg fun of me?
Lucifer: Really.*
Livontes: And why do you tell him this stuff, Lucifer?
Lucifer: I'm telling both of you this stuff...because i have a feeling that one of you will became the Seventh Seraphim some day!

The scene shows a black universe. Suddenly a majestic voice is heard.

The Creator: Let there be Earth!
From nothingness, a small blue sphere appears. The sphere starts growing at a very fast rate, until the Creator speaks again.
The Creator: Enough. Now...let the life evolve!
The panel shows all the Angels in the Heaven as they watch shocked how a new world is born. Michael's eyes are greedy. Livontes's eyes are determined. Lucifer's eyes are sad. Vishnu's eyes are filled with promise.

The panel it's switched. It shows Vishnu and Livontes. They are both dressed completely in black, and standing with four other people in a line. Vishnu has a sword at his back and white cloth on his right hand, with a strange seal applied on it. *Suddenly a man dressed in red lands in front of them.
Yama: My name is Yama Dharma. First, you will all introduce yourselves, then we will proceed with the details of this gathering.
A tall boy with black hair: My name is Quintrix.
A boy with long blonde hair: I am Kalkin.
A boy with silver hair: My name is Nirriti.
The girl: I am Aphrodite.
Vishnu: My name is Vishnu.
Livontes: I'm Livontes.
Yama: Nice to meet all of you. Now...let me tell you why we have gathered today here. You have been all chosen for your exceptional tallents. In the past years, each of you trained with an Archangel. Vishnu and Livontes were trained by the new appointed Archangel Lucifer. Quintrix and Nirriti were trained by Michael. Aphrodite was trained by Gabriel. And Nirriti was trained by Brahma. I have spoken with your tutors and you were each reccomended for this mission. As you all know, several centuries ago, our Father created the Earth...and he has spoken: " Let the life evolve! " . The Archangel order received orders from our Father. It seems that he is planning to create a new being to inhabit the Earth. But, for him to be able to do that, we must make sure that no harm will ever come to that being. And what's the only harm present on Earth?
Quintrix: Dragons, Demons and Fire Golems.
Yama: Exactky. Our mission is to go to Earth and make sure that these species will vanish, for the sake of the new creation that it is to come. I have chosen you, to accompany me in this assingment because i wanted all of you to gather experience on the battlefield.
Quintrix: I'm sorry, Yama...but why do we need to gather experience?
Yama: It's simple. At a certain point in the future, our Father saw that the new beings that he is creating, will make a war. A war between worlds. And we will be involved. I think that you want to be prepared.
Quintrix: I understand.
Yama: Good. Now, if you don't mind, Raphael opened a portal for us. We will travel to Earth right now, and start the cleaning process.
Suddenly around them, a circle of light is formed. In an instant, they all vanish from Heaven.

The scene shows Earth. It's a virgin land, untained with human presence. Yet. The panel shows Yama's group who landed in a forest.

Yama: Good. Now...we will split our division in pairs. I will go alone. Kalkin, you will go with Nirriti. Quintrix you will make team with Livontes. And Vishnu will go with Aphrodite. Hunt down any creature that you find and kill it. Don't waste time. We will meet exactly in this spot in a week. Now...Go!
They all scatter around the forest, searching for demons, dragons and Fire Golems.
The scene shows Vishnu and Aphrodite. They are dashing at a very high speed.
Vishnu: I'm Vishnu...nice to meet you...
Aphrodite looks at him with superiority, and remains silent.
Vishnu: You could at least introduce yourself.*
She still remains silent.
Vishnu sighs: Great. It seems that we have a wonderful start...
Aphrodite: Listen carefully, boy. I am going to say this once: my power allows me to sense other angel's energy level. Yours, it's below average. So try...to not get in my way. I don't want to kill you by mistake. Are we clear? Because i will not save your weak ass.
Vishnu smiles: First of all...we are around the same age. So you don't have the right to call me boy. Second of all, trust me...i don't need your protection. I can handle myself anything.
Aphrodite: Such arrogance.
Vishnu: I am arrogant because i'm confident in my own power?
Aphrodite: Yes you are! Your energies are nothing compared to those owned by Quintrix or Kalkin. They can handle anything. You? I think that if we meet a demon, you will be the first to run away!
Vishnu keeps smiling: Mark my words, Aphrodite...
For a second she looks in his eyes and spots his determination and real confidence.*
Vishnu with determination: You...will be amazed!

The scene shows Aphrodite and Vishnu resting on the branches of a tree.*

Vishnu: I cannot belive...we have been running all day...and we haven't met a single beast.
Aphrodite: Maybe they are scared to harm a weakling like you.
Vishnu laughs: You keep coming with the insults, are you?
Aphrodite: It comes natural.
Vishnu: May i ask why do you hate me so much? Because in your eyes, i am weak? Or what?
Aphrodite: Exactly. I think that an angel which lacks the power, should stay home, instead of hunting creatures. Admit it, Vishnu...you are not made for this job. I don't know what was in Lucifer's mind when he sent you here. Your friend for example, Livontes, has a tremendous power. Compared with him...you're a mere bug.
Vishnu smiles: A mere bug you say...
Aphrodite: And you know what makes me angry about you?
Vishnu: I'm actually curious.
Aphrodite: The fact that you keep on smiling and laughing when i tell you all of these, like you know better.
Vishnu smiles: Maybe i do.
Aphrodite: Maybe you do? You are weak! You are not a useful angel! You do not deserve to fight with us as a comrade! You put everyone at risk! Why do you think that we haven't met a single creature all day? You are so blind that you didn't even sensed when we passed by a large group of dragons! But i preffered to not encounter them with you behind me!
Vishnu: Were you afraid that i will be a burden, or what?
Aphrodite yells: Exactly! And that's exactly what you are! A burden!
Vishnu looks at her, he smiles and slowly gets up. Suddenly the smile on his face gets bigger.
Aphrodite: What are you smiling for?
Vishnu: You told me that i was blind? You were so angry that you didn't even noticed, that he group that we passed by, followed us. We are surrounded at this very moment. There are five large dragons. In a couple of minutes they will attack.
Aphrodite shocked for an instant: How did you?!?!
Vishnu slowly takes off the cloth on his right hand.
Vishnu: You told me that i am a burden. Listen carefully. You don't stand a chance against five dragons.*
Aphrodite: Not even Yama can defeat five dragons in one battle!
Vishnu: Ah, but there will be no battle.
Aphrodite: What do you mean?!? And what it's with that cloth on your right hand? Why are you taking it off?
Vishnu as he almost took off all the cloth wrapping his hand: This cloth...keeps my power hidden. Uncle Kubera gave it to me. So a sensor like you would detect a power level below average. Now, i am going to take it off. Please take care of it, until i'm done with the dragons.
Aphrodite screams: You are insane! Take care of dragons!?! They will kill you instantly. We have to run!
Vishnu: Too late. They are already here.
Suddenly in front of them, five giant dragons land. The dragons look at them, as Vishnu keeps unwrapping the cloth. The beasts start gathering fire in the mouths.
Aphrodite cries: Vishnu! Let's go now!!!!
Vishnu turns around and looks at her. Suddenly she gets a very confused expression, because the boy has a big smile on his face.
Vishnu: Don't worry. As long as you are with me, no harm will ever come to you!
At that very instant two things happend. The dragons spit their fire towards the two angels, and Vishnu finally took the cloth off his hand.

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Vishnu

The blow was devastating, creating an explosion. On a radius of a couple of miles, the blast destroyed everything in its path.
The panel shows Vishnu that is staying on the same branch, with Aphrodite behind him. They are both unharmed. With his right hand, Vishnu stoped the fire, and with his left hand he projected a light energy shield over Aphrodite.
Aphrodite with eyes widen by the shock thinks: Light...energy?!? The power...of an Archangel!?! And he managed to do it in an instant! This shield...it's thicker than the one that Gabriel can do it! Also...the flames of a dragon are one of the few things that can harm us for real! And he just deflected five blasts! Five! With his bare hand!!! Just...who is he?!?
Vishnu: Are you ok Aphrodite?
Aphrodite: Yeah i'm fine!
Vishnu: Good. It means that i can finally take care of these guys.
Aphrodite: Vishnu wait! You managed to save us! Let's run! Let's save our lives!
Vishnu: Save our lives? Aphrodite, we won't die. I will simply eliminate every single one of them.
Aphrodite screams: You don't understand! Even an Archangel has trouble killing a dragon! And you want to fight five of them?!?
Vishnu scratches his head: Well...yeah, that's the plan! Now...stay behind that shield. I will be back in a couple of seconds!
Aphrodite cries one more time: NOO!! DON'T BE HASTY!!!WAIT!!!
But it's already to late for her screams to reach Vishnu. The young man turned with his back at her. He lost his smile. Only determination and seriosity it's on his face. Vishnu takes out the sword at his back. The hilt it's simple, yellow, with a medium guard shaped as a lightning, and the blade it's completely white.
Aphrodite thinking: What the?!? What's with that sword?!?
Vishnu: Dragons...i don't know if you understand me...but if you do...you better tell your goodbyes.*
A dragon's voice ( a thunder like voice) Petty Angel! How dare you to mock us?!?
Vishnu: Oh, so you speak. Good. Then let me tell you a single thing. I will kill all of you. Instantly. I just wanted to ask you, how do you prefer? Fast? Or slowly?
The dragons roar, ragged by Vishnu's statement. Instantly they all release countless fireballs at him, but the angel simply deflects them all with his bare hand. The dragons are shocked to see this and Vishnu smiles.
Vishnu: My turn...Light release element! Blade creation!
Slowly the white blade gets enveloped in light. Vishnu takes a look at it and grins.
Vishnu: Here i come...
The only thing seen is a white flash. In an instant Vishnu vanished from his initial positin and he reappeard immediatly back. Aphrodite with a shocked look, stares at him, unable to comprehend what happend.
Aphrodite: What happend?!? It seemed that for a second you vanished.
Vishnu: I did. I killed them.
Aphrodite: Impossible!
Vishnu: Look behind me.*
She takes a look and spots a disturbing sight. Five dragon heads are resting on the ground. The slash that decapitated them it's precise. Vishnu deactivates his light blade, and places his sword behind his back.
Aphrodite: Who...what are you...?
Vishnu smiles: The question is not who am i right now. The question is who i will became.
Aphrodite: And who will you became?
Vishnu with determination: The Seventh Seraphim!

The end.


I know that it's a short chapter compared to my latest ones...but first i want to hear an opinion about it. Before, you know, i start writing like a maniac. Again...

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

jekyl_hyde

Ok, so I'm practically fully moved, but only 50% unpacked, not to mention that have to move a full sofa and loveseat up a flight of stairs by myself (overjoyed.... this sucks)... but I had to squeeze this out of my head to be able to think straight. This is the teaser for my new story, which I will probably put on a blog... when I create one.

Prologue
I have seen three generations of the horsemen, including my reign as Conquest. The world’s governments became corrupt, and when only a handful of governments are willing to make a stand, we must take action. Someone has to do the job that no one else wants to do. Someone has to make sure that certain evils are terminated.

The Horsemen were born during WWI. As I’ve stated, there have been three generations of the horsemen thus far, and soon, we will have our fourth and final horseman. It all ends with him, one way or another. I, well I am Conquest. My immediate successor, who took over after I was stricken to a wheel chair after my accident at Normandy, is War. Don’t let the history books fool you. Hitler didn’t die of suicide. War made sure of that. War’s reign as the Horseman was sufficient, with many major conflicts going unnoticed throughout the world. Once War realized his time as the Horseman was up, we then found Famine. Famine has had arguably the toughest job so far, what with today’s social media and technology. It is harder for him to keep our operations under wraps. Not to mention, he is aging as well. But alas, as stated, we believe we have found a promising candidate for Death. There’s only one problem though. He’s pursuing Famine, believing him to be a perpetrator of the heinous crimes that we are fighting against. But soon… soon his eyes and heart will be open to the truth. Let’s just pray that neither he nor Famine kill one another until we can show him the truth….

KiddJutsu

Vishnu!! Back with a vengeance! First off let me say welcome back sir. You have been missed. Now, this story seems to be the prequel to Naruto's story and that of the Sof6-Paths, correct? Also, I was under the impression Aphrodite was of a different but similar lineage than the Angels were being Greek Gods? Also, why did you decide to have God be someone not outside the bounds of death? The previous edition had him living on.
But bottom line, like where this thing is headed. Must have more. Setting the pace one again it seems. Looking forward to the journey on this new story...

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Two fingas like a playa!!

Vishnu

As always, you asked the right questions. And as always, i cannot spoil anything. And, exactly, it's a prequel. But don't think that you won't see some of the old characters interfering. This story will show how Vishnu rose to power, his road towards the highest rank: The Seventh Seraphim. Also, it will present the POV of several other characters like Livontes, Lucifer or Yama. The story will be filled with dialogues between Sasuke and the Creator, and only the final chapter will reveal why is Sasuke there to kill him. Anyway, this fanfic won't be so big as the previous ones. I cannot aproximate right now,but it will be definately a bit shorter. Expect as always many twists. After this story, the real motives behind Lucifer's rebellion will be revealed, the process that Vishnu went through in order to became the leader of the Celest City, how the City was build, the name of the Beyonders, Cain's ( Faust ) betrayal and many others.

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

KiddJutsu

Well as you know I watch for the details to figure out what's worth asking. And I'm a fan to the fullest. You and J_H pretty much set the standard in this thread. But Vishnu, we gotta get you back to Naruto at some point again in the near future especially with the way the manga is trending.

As for this story, can't wait. Knowing you the lab is smoking with new ideas and twists. But the problem with multiple twists is that It's a prequel meaning the end is defined. So give us that killer writing on this and proceed to the next.

Youre gifts are extra special when we have no scope of where the story can go. But for readers of your stuff like me we know what happens mostly on this one.
Fresh with a new creative slant would be your way to go, my opinion only. Either way, I'm pretty much all in. Keep it coming...

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Two fingas like a playa!!

Vishnu

Thank you for the kind words. But let me correct you: even though it's a prequel, not eve you, the regular readers, don't anticipate what it's going to happen. After i'm done, you will see each character in a new light.

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When other men blindly follow the truth remember:
Nothing is true!
When other men are limited by morality and law remember:
Everything is permitted!

Numinous

@ j_h: Interesting concept, just one tiny question though, is the fourth generation from the present days?

Also, c'mon people, I posted original fiction, j_h alludes to starting one and you guys don't comment on it? Shame on you! Kidding.

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KiddJutsu

I read these mostly from my iPhone and getting those blog sites on this is a pain. I'll hop on the computer and check that out with complete analysis on your take. Better late than never lol....

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Two fingas like a playa!!

Numinous

You don't need to go to the blog to read Weaver, it's in this very thread, posts 1073, 1074 and 1075.

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jekyl_hyde

@num
On what little you have posted, I really can't come to a conclusion yet. But what you have posted so far is intriguing. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for Jacob.

And to answer your question, yes. To give you a little background...
Conquest's time was WWI through the majority of WWII. War's time was the end of WWII, the NY and Chicago mob wars, and the Korean War. Famine's time will be Vietnam War through the War in Iraq. Death will take over in present day.

As you have stated, this is going to be a fictitious work, but it will have several factual events as part of the plot as well. There will also be several conspiracy theories that play roles in this work. The way I have it set up in my mind, I'm going to be able to make this story episodic, similar to the Star Wars episodes, with more the one episode focusing on Death.

But first, I'm going to finish my Naruto fanfic for the peeps here.

KiddJutsu

Yessir, first things first. Your story is pretty much too good to be left hanging without conclusion. And J_H, glad the move is getting done for the most part. Longtime coming on your return to the fanfic/prediction game. Rikudo/N360/KYF have filled in the void for yours/Vishnu/Jericho's abscences.

Num - I didn't get a complete picture from your posts on the extent of the story but it does look like a worthwhile read.

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