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His name was Longinus and gave the name to the Longinus Spear, a mythical holy weapon.
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@vishnu: a question, I thought cain already killed abel, which was described in your last chapter, it felt like you rewrote the last chapter again. I didn't see the link between the last chapter and this. But it was good read.
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Another question, we now know how abel was so pious before he died. How in the world did he become so stubborn and evil (dante). It's like their mentality is swapped, like cain became abel and vice versa. What cain used to think of the world abel ends up thinking that evil in the future and cain ends up being like how abel was as a good person. |
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Weaver Links to Chapter 0: 1st, 2nd and 3rd posts. Musical Themes. Link to the map (read the second, the first is obsolete) Chapter 1
Prologue (Part 2 of 3)
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The Gorgon Sisters' Theme: Camille Saint-Saëns' The Fossils (9th movement of "Le Carnaval des Animaux")
Shiroi Kiba's Theme: Björk's Thunderbolt (Live from Manchester version) Shiroi Kiba vs Jacob Theme: Chris Cornell's You Know My Name Mikmereth Headquarters Theme: Nobuo Uematsu's SeeD Jesus, that fight scene took me forever to do it. I'm not comfortable with narrating action scenes and I'm always second guessing myself when doing them, so I hope you like the sixth version of it. Yes, sixth, you don't imagine how many times I had to edit it out until my perfectionist OCD didn't complain about it. |
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The latest chapter it's up guys. Enjoy and give me your critics, questions and so on.
Chapter seven: The Hunt. The scene shows The Heavens. Several centuries have passed since Abel's death. Vishnu is walking with Aphrodite in the gardens. Aphrodite: Do..you love me? Vishnu stops and looks at her. Vishnu: When i look at you...i feel like everything...everything that it's wonderful...happend to me. I feel that i have need for nothing else. Just you. So...yeah...i love you! Suddenly Livontes's voice is heard. Livontes: Love...so human of you, Vishnu.* Vishnu: What do you want Livontes? Livontes lands near them and goes towards Vishnu. He stops very close to him and whispers in his ear. Livontes: I will give you one last chance to prove your so called friendship. Meet me here, in four hours. We will talk then. Vishnu: Fine. I will meet you in four hours. The panel it's switched. It shows the garden four hours later. Vishnu lands in the middle of a small group. He spots Livontes, Quintrix, Nirriti and another angel, Narasimha. Vishnu: So...why have you called me for, Livontes? Livontes: Vishnu. We will tell you about our plan. As you know...the Earth is filled with humans. Vishnu: Empires have risen and fallen. Of course that i know. Quintrix: We thought that, the Earth might need...leaders. So the humans won't make the same mistakes over and over again. Vishnu: Leaders? What kind of leaders? Nirriti: As in rulers. Vishnu: I see. And what do you want from me? Narasimha: Join us. Together, we will conquer the Earth and establish a monarchy of angels. Vishnu looks at each one of them. Vishnu: There is something that i don't understand here. Why? Livontes: What do you mean why?!? Vishnu: It's a simple question. Why do you want this? Livontes: Because we are tired to be kept here in Heavens. Because we want to break the chains that are holding us here. Because we want to know the power of being free. Vishnu: Actually i think that the answer it's a bit different. You just want the power. That's all. Quintrix: So, what now, Vishnu? Are you with us or not? Vishnu smiles: Of course that i am against this. I will not betray the Heavens and Father. Nirriti: Then your loyalty will cost you. Your life... Quintrix: I told you Livontes that he is not trustworthy! Livontes: I'm sorry everyone. I was wrong. He is just a stranger afterall. The four angels slowly surround Vishnu.* Vishnu: Are you sure that you want to do this? Narasimha: We are four. You are one.* Vishnu smiles: Even so, i am an Archangel.* Livontes: It doesn't matter. You are not much more powerful than me. With the others, we can take you down. Suddenly a red shadow lands behind Vishnu. Yama: He is not alone! Vishnu surprised: Yama! What are you doing here?!? Yama: Watching your back. Vishnu: I don't remember you being a huge fan of mine. Yama smiles: Do you want to argue with me now, or do you want to stop these bastards? Vishnu: I'd go with stoping them. Almost instantly Quintrix and Livontes release two purple beams from their hands. Vishnu dodges one and deflects the other, while he takes out his sword. Yama already appeared in front of Narasimha and engages him in sword fighting. Vishnu dashes and tries to slash Livontes but Quintrix blocks his attack. Livontes uses the momentum and aims for a beheading, but Vishnu suddenly releases from his body a dense white aura. When Livontes's blade connects with the aura, it gets turned into ashes. Livontes: What the...!?! Vishnu pushes back Quintrix and vanishes from their sight. He appears behind Livontes and punches him. The sound of the ribs cracking is heard. Livontes falls on his knees and Vishnu simply punches him in the back of his head. Quintrix turns around and tries to run, but Vishnu points his right hand towards him. Vishnu: Lightning strike! He shots from the tip of his finger a single lightning bolt that impales Quintrix in the shoulder and pins him to the ground. At the same time Yama is using his eyes on Nirriti, weakening him. Narasimha tries to slash him, but the angel blocks the attack. Then he uses his left hand, pushes himself from the ground, jumps above Narasimha and lands behind him. Narashimha tries to impale Yama, but the latter makes acrobatic moves again. He blocks Narasimha's blade, uses it as a ledge for his left foot, jumps just above the angel, makes a spin in the air and lands with his foot right on Narasimha's head. The angel falls down uncouncious. Nirriti tries to use the opportunity to decapitate Yama, but the angel simply breaks Nirriti's sword with his bare hand. And in the next moment he punches him in the chest taking him out. Vishnu: Impressive, Yama. Yama: Same goes for you.* Vishnu: May i ask now? What are you doing here? Yama: Head Archangel, Kubera had his suspicions about these four for a while. I was spying them. When they made you the invitation i was waiting to see how you will respond. It would have became quite difficult to take down the five of you. This place would have became a real battlefield.* Vishnu: Well, their plan sounds insane to me. They actually want to betray the Heavens. I cannot stand that. Yama: It's good to know, because i was ready to kill you. Vishnu smiles: That, if you can handle me. Yama: Don't worry Vishnu...i can handle you...
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The scene it's switched. It shows the Earth. Lucifer's cave. Suddenly Sasuke lands exactly in front of the entrance.
Lucifer: Sasuke...what are you doing here? Sasuke: I'm here Lucifer, because i need you. Lucifer: What for? Sasuke smiles menacing: I need you to make a connection between a couple of people and Hell. The panel it's switched. It shows the Heaven. In a prison there are kept Livontes, Quintrix, Nirriti and Narasimha.* Livontes: Damn it. What now? Quintrix: I assume that we will be judged. And convicted. Nirriti: Probably banished to Earth like Lucifer. Narasimha: Or killed. Livontes: Or, they will release us. Afterall i don't think that everyone sees this just like Vishnu. I think that they also want the power to control thd Earth.* Quintrix: And if they don't? Livontes: Then we shall die. Suddenly an unknown voice is heard. Unknown: Or maybe, you can defeat the Archangel order and seize the Earth yourselves. Livontes: Who are you?!? Lucifers steps into the light. Livontes shocked: Ma...Master!?! Lucifer: Hello Livontes. Livontes: What are you doing here?!? Lucifer: I'm here to offer you power. I am here to allow you to control the power. Livontes: What power!?! Lucifer: The antagonist of the Light release. The Demonic release. Quintrix confused: Demonic release??! Lucifer smiles: A power that comes straight from Hell! The scene it's switched. It shows Archangel council room. In the center are in chains, the four traitors. Michael: You are all charged with treason! Against Father and against the Heavens! What do you have to say for yourselves? Livontes: Well, Michael. Let me start then with exposing our point of view. Currently, the Heavens are reigned by you, the Archangels. And the Archangels are led by the Head. Right now, the Earth it's corrupted. With Adam and Eve's death, the human kind went to an involutive stage. They just discovered the fire and the wheel. They need guidance. They need protection. They need...gods. Gabriel: Gods...that's a nice term. But i'm afraid that it won't happen. Our Father wanted the man to be free, and free he shall be. Kubera: Wait a moment, Gabriel. It actually makes sense, what Livontes is proposing. Vishnu: You're kidding me. Kubera: No I am not. I'm serious. Why shouldn't we rule over the Earth? Vishnu: Because it would be a betrayal.* Kubera: And who would we betray, Vishnu? Vishnu: Our Father. He never told us to seize power. Kubera: Then if he is silent about this, we can take it ourselves. Brahma: Careful there, Kubera. I'm with Vishnu on this one. We don't have to betray our beliefs. Kubera: Beliefs! We have no such thing! We are the dominating force! We should take control! We should guide them! Vishnu: You mean reign over them. I'm sorry, Kubera. I am not with you. If you chose to do this, i will fight against you. Brahma: Me too. Michael: I support Vishnu and Brahma. Shiva: I'm with them too. Gabriel: Same here. Raphael: Their logic is flawless. I stand with my brothers. I will not join you Kubera. Kubera: Actually, you have no power, my dears. I am the Head Archangel. I will decide for everyone. Brahma stands up: Actually, Kubera...you cannot do that. If the whole order opposes this idea, your powers are in vain. Kubera stands up and slowly charges his energies. Kubera: Brahma...are you going to fight against me? Brahma: Yes i will. I will not allow you to do this. Kubera: Then you will die! Vishnu stands up too. Vishnu: It means that you will have to kill us both, because i'm with Brahma. The rest of the Archangels: Me too! Vishnu: Actually Kubera...i think that you should resign your position. You are not fit anymore for being the Head. Kubera shouts: What?!? Brahma smiles: Exactly. Good idea. Kubera please exit the room. You are not welcomed here anymore. Kubera suddenly releases a this grey ray towards Brahma. In an instant, Gabriel protects his fellow angel with a light shield. Michael jumps and tries to slash Kubera but the latter dodges the attack. Just when he dodged, four lightnings hits him directly in his arms and legs, pinning him to a wall. Vishnu is shown with the electricity streaming around his hand. Raphael uses the momentum and punches Kubera through the wall. As the Archangel gets up, Brahma releases a stream of flames at him. Kubera deflects them and appears exactly in front of Brahma trying to slash his chest. Shiva manages to block the attack and Vishnu is shown concentrating his energies in his palm. Gabriel spots him and screams: *Shit! Cover your eyes, everyone!!! At the same moment he projects a shields over everyone, except Kubera. Vishnu shouts: Light release! Blazing nebula! He releases from his palm a sphere that vanishes instantly and appears in front of Kubera. The sphere explodes destroying everything. The blast it's giant. The building was destroyed completely. Vishnu: That should do it... Kubera is heard: If you think that you can stop me with something like this... And suddenly he stops talking. A red shadow appears behind him. Yama is holding his knife at Kubera's throat. Yama: It's over.* Kubera: Light release! Divine expulsion! He dissappears in a ray of light. At the same time, the four prisoners vanish with him. Vishnu: Dammit. He escaped us. Michael: It doesn't matter. He cannot defeat us all. Gabriel: Yeah, but there is only one place where he can go. Raphael: Earth... Brahma: And the Earth it's populated with humans. Shiva: They could also ally themselves with Lucifer. Brahma: It's unlikely. Lucifer hates the man kind. He doesn't wish to rule over it, he wants to destroy it. Yama: So, what do you think that they will do? Brahma: I don't know Yama. He was your teacher. You should tell us. Vishnu: Hey, leave him alone Brahma. He is not guilty. He tried to stop Kubera. He is in the same position that i was when Lucifer left. Gabriel: Yeah, Vishnu is right. Leave him alone. Brahma: We must do something anyway. Shiva: Well, we could form a search party and sent it to search for them. Vishnu: That's a good idea. But first...i propose Brahma as our new Head. Do you agree? All of them: We agree. Brahma: Thank you my brothers. It's a great honor. I accept it. Vishnu: You're welcome. Brahma: Good...now...Shiva is right. We will form a search party, led by Vishnu. Gabriel and four other angels with go with you. You will search the Earth for Kubera and stop him.* Vishnu: Got it. Then it will be me, Gabriel, Yama, Kalkin, Agni and Aphrodite. Brahma: Perfect. It's a good choice that you have made. In the meantime, Michael, you will organize the Heavens. We must be prepared for an imminent attack. Raphael and Shiva will help you.* Michael: Got it. Brahma: Then...go...and good luck!
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The scene shows a giant portal opened in the gardens.
Vishnu is shown. His outfit got several modifications. He is not wearing a black jumpsuit, with blue steel armguards. The same blue steel is used to protect his shoulders and knees. He wears blue boots and has strapped at his back his hawk head sword. Across his black jumpsuit, blue light trays are implemented. His eyes are determined.* Suddenly in front of him lands five angels. Vishnu: Gabriel, Aphrodite, Yama, Kalkin and Agni. Welcome.* Gabriel looks at him and smiles: Nice outfit. Vishnu: Thanks. Well, let me brief you first. Our mission is simple. Search and assassinate Kubera, Livontes, Quintrix, Nirriti and Narasimha. Our priority is Kubera though. We will move as a single unit, without split-ups. I think that i have made a good choice by selecting you guys into my team. First of all: our defensive specialist: the Archangel Gabriel. Our healer: Aphrodite. Agni is our short range fighter. Kalkin is our long range fighter. Yama is our tracking specialist. And i am the main offensive. We will search our targets one by one. The best approach would be by trying to eliminate them in a silent way. But, if we get to a full-scale battle, these are your roles. Gabriel: you will handle Quintrix. Kalkin you will fight with Narasimha. Agni you will fight Nirriti. I shall fight Livontes. And Yama, you will fight Kubera since he was your teacher. Yama: There is a problem. I was never able to defeat him. And your Archangel order barely held him. Vishnu: I don't think that either Livontes our Quintrix will be much trouble for me and Gabriel. We shall be able to help you shortly. You just have to stall him enough.* Yama: That i can do. Vishnu: Good. Now, our formation. We will advance in a cross shaped formation. I will be the first. Behind me will be Aphrodite. Her back will be watched by Agni. At her left will be Kalkin. And at her right, Yama. The formation will be closed by Gabriel from behind. That way, our healer shall be protected from each side, the offensive will be handled by me if we encounter something from the front side, the rears are covered and the back is protected by Gabriel's shields. Yama thinking: Impressive. He already planned an entire formation that will work flawlessly. That's quite something.* Vishnu: Now...everyone, check your equipments. And tell me if you have any objections or suggestions. Everyone: No. Vishnu: Then...let's go! The panel it's switched. It shows the Earth. The angel formation is shown moving at a very high speed through a dense forest. Suddenly Vishnu stops. Vishnu: Something is not right. Yama: What do you mean? Vishnu: There is someone waiting for us...ahead. Yama: One of the traitors? Vishnu: Not exactly.* Suddenly a tall man lands in front of them. He has black hair and a menacing smile. Sasuke: Hello, angels. Vishnu: Sasuke?!? Sasuke: Oh, hi Vishnu. Long time no see, right? Vishnu: Are you aware that i must hunt you down? Sasuke: Oh...no...i was not. Anyway, here it's your chance. Vishnu: What do you mean? Sasuke: You're searching for Kubera and the others, right? Vishnu: How did you..!?! Sasuke: Well...they are not available to fight with you right now. So, i suggest that you should turn aroud and go home. Vishnu: Or what? Sasuke smiles: Or i will have to make you. Vishnu smiles too: Sasuke...even you cannot fight all of us. Sasuke: Well...would you like to put that to the test? Almost instantly the scene gets confusing because of the dust raised and smoke. As the scene gets clear again the panel shows an interesting image. Sasuke blocked with the tip of his sword Yama's dagger, with his left foot Kalkin's punch and with his right hand Agni's leg. Then he just makes a spin and throws the three angels away. Vishnu smiles. Vishnu: Everyone...stay behind. Me and Gabriel will deal with him. Kalkin, Yama, Agni, protect Aphrodite. Aphrodite: Vishnu...are you sure that you can defeat him? Vishnu smiles: He may be on a whole other level...but we are two Archangels. Gabriel smiles too: And we have the perfect defensive and one of the most powerful offensives that the Heavens ever knew. Sasuke: Most powerful offensive? Come on, Vishnu...show me what you got my friend. You won't put even a scratch on me. Gabriel: We have to move fast...Vishnu. Extremly fast. Vishnu: I know...be aware of his sword. It can pierce through everything. Sasuke: So...are we going to do this or not? Instantky Vishnu claps his hands and sends from his palms a stream of electricity towards Sasuke. The young Uchiha deflects the beams of lightning with his sword. Gabriel creates a light spear and throws it at Sasuke, but just when it was about to hit the God of Death, he simply cut in half.* Sasuke: That's all you got? Vishnu takes out his sword and envelops it in light element. He dahses towards Sasuke and starts clashing with him. But the Uchiha's experience is shown, and Sasuke manages to get the upper hand and inflicts several cuts on Vishnu's body. Vishnu tries to impale the man, but he leaves an opening.* Sasuke: You fool... Sasuke pierces in Vishnu's torso direction but the tip of his blade stops. Gabriel appeared next to Vishnu and protected him using a light shield. Gabriel: You cannot break this! Sasuke smiles and breaks Gabriel's shield with ease. The two Archangels jump back. Gabriel: He is amazing. Vishnu: It seems that we will have to go all out against him. Sasuke smiles: Please...i'm not even serious about fighting you right now. Vishnu: Well...you're about to get! Suddenly everyone stops from moving. The air is thicker. The wind is not blowing anymore. Vishnu's voice is heard. Vishnu whispering: Raigan... Almost instantly he appears behind Sasuke, wielding a powerful light sword. His movements were so fast that he even left an afterimage. He strikes at Sasuke's back. The Uchiha leaves the impression that he didn't even noticed Vishnu. But as the blade approaches him, Sasuke simply catches the light sword and breaks it with his bare hand. Sasuke: It's not that simple Vishnu.* Vishnu shocked lands in front of him. Vishnu: Gabriel...place a shield on everyone.* Gabriel: Are you...?!? Vishnu: Yeah. I am going to use that. Gabriel: Light release! Soul protection! Instantly light shields appear in front of every angel present on the battlefield. Vishnu places his hands on the ground and starts focusing. Vishnu: Light release...Divine Breaking attack!!!! From the ground several pillars of light emerge towards Sasuke's direction. As the pillars emerge, each and every one explodes, releasing a colosal energy. The explosions are so great that they equall an atomic one. The last pillar explodes exactly below Sasuke. As the dust and the smoke clears up, the scene it's an apocalyptic one. Everything was burned down by Vishnu's attack.* Gabriel thinking: So this is the power of Vishnu...i wonder how was Yama able to beat him... Aphrodite: My love... Yama thinking: Vishnu...you have evolved...those eyes of yours...are more dangerous than ever. And suddenly from the remaining dust, an unscathed Sasuke rises. He is enveloped in a strange outfit. He wears a long black cape, with ragged ends, and he has the right arm enveloped in a bone like armor.
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As the pillars was emerging below him he started releasing his chakras at very high speeds. Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic release! Skeleton's key! His right arm instantly gets enveloped in a skeleton-like armor and a cape appears at his back. He blocked the pillar with his right arm, barely holding it. As the pillar is ready to explode, he quickly activated his Susano'o. End of flashback. Sasuke: You...will still need much more than that, Vishnu boy. Vishnu: What the...!?! Gabriel shocked: Impossible!* Sasuke: Now...i belive that the two of you had your share of attacks. Prepare yourselves because it's my turn now... Just when Gabriel was preparing to create a shield around him and Vishnu, a powerful lightning coming from the sky striked him down. As just when he was ready to get up another lightning struck him from his rear. Sasuke: Kirin...an useful technique.* Gabriel tries to get up, but Sasuke appears exactly above him, pointing his right hand at the Archangel. Sasuke: Sealing jutsu! Demonic restriction! A purple cube appears around Gabriel and traps him. Just then, Vishnu tries to decapitate Sasuke, but the Uchiha dodges. Sasuke lands a couple of meters behind and smiles. Sasuke: Are you ready Vishnu? Vishnu: Come on!!! Sasuke smiles: As you wish...Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Phantom's menace! Black blade attack! Sasuke creates a black energy blade and he swings it at Vishnu, releasing a giant black wave like attack. The black energy attack is moving so fast that it hits Vishnu at full force. The panel shows Vishnu that gets pushed back several meters behind. The attack left its mark. Vishnu's suit it's torn apart, and he has several burns on his body. Vishnu thinking: What the...!?! What the hell was that attack?!? He just made a swing! Sasuke smiles: You still have much to learn young Vishnu. Even though you activated your Raigan, you have to learn about its power. Now, you're just releasing raw power attacks. You are a child.* Vishnu gets angry and releases a shout. Vishnu shouting: Damn you!!!* He jumps in front of Sasuke and claps his palms together. Between his palms a light release arc appears.* Vishnu screams: Light release! Wonder spear!!! He releases a long white metal made spear from his hand towards Sasuke.* Sasuke: As i said...raw power. Sasuke blocks the spear with only his index finger. Then he grabs it and looks at it. Sasuke: Amazing. You managed to convert the light energy into a tangible element. It's a nice trick. Here...take back your spear. Sasuke throws it with such force and speed, that Vishnu doesn't even have time to react. The spear pierces his shoulder and pins him to a nearby tree. Vishnu coughs blood and tries to take out the spear, but Sasuke appears exactly next to him instantly. Sasuke: Young Vishnu...drop it...you don't have a chance against me. Come back when you are more powerful. Suddenly Sasuke gets surrounded by Yama, Kalkin and Agni. Yama: Prepare yourselves guys...we are going to attack all at once! Vishnu screams desperate: NO! Stand behind! Don't attack him!!! Agni: Why? Vishnu: Idiots! He just defeated two Archangels! Without sweating! Yama: I can beat him!!! Yama tries to slash Sasuke, but the latter simply dodges.. Yama's eyes turn red as he is trying to drain Sasuke's energies. But the Uchiha smiles. Sasuke: It won't work on me, Yama. I'm sorry. Yama surprised: What?!?* Sasuke punches Yama in the jaw, throwing him several meters away. Yama doesn't get up. Vishnu: Agni, Kalkin! Please! Do not fight him! Agni and Kalkin: Understood, Sasuke smiles. Vishnu: Tell me, Sasuke...what do you want? Sasuke: I want you to fight Livontes. That's what i want. Vishnu: That was my intention also. But you stoped me. Sasuke: I've stoped you for a single reason. At his current state, Livontes would be defeated. Most likely you'll end up killing him.* Vishnu: And where is the problem? Sasuke: The problem is that you will fight only when i decide. Until then, you won't fight him. Vishnu: But why?!? Sasuke: Because it's the only way. Like this, you will be able to achieve your full potential. Vishnu: Why do you care?!? Sasuke smiles and turns around to leave. Sasuke: Because...despite everything...i'm still your friend. Goodbye Vishnu. Until next time! The scene shows Sasuke entering Lucifer's cave. There, on the ground, are the traitors...Livontes, Quintrix, Nirriti, Narasimha and Kubera. They are all uncouncious, and a strange purple liquid is coming out of the ground and it's enveloping around their bodies. The energy from Hell is coming to them. Lucifer: I still don't understand why you want me to give them acces to the demonic release. Sasuke: I explained it already, Lucifer. They need that power in order to combat the Heavens. Lucifer: You know...sometimes i have this feeling about you...that i should kill you, rather than help you. Sasuke throws him a menacing glare: Then why don't you take a shot? Lucifer is a bit uncomfortable. Lucifer: There is no need. Sasuke: Good. Because what i will make you do in the future...compared to this...you will just end up calling this child play.* Lucifer: And what if i won't do what you want? Sasuke smiles menacing: Trust me Lucifer...you will do it. Because you will have no choice. And, in time, you will come to understand my vision and you will take your own decisions. Lucifer thinking: This guy...is more dangerous than i thought. I need to talk to Father about him...and fast... Sasuke turns around and looks at the rising sun. Sasuke: Soon...the world will burn. And chaos will rise! The end.
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