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Old 09-25-2012, 09:28 PM   #1216
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Vish!!! You cannot end this thing because I'm freaks attached to it still AND you have no intention to my knowledge of another Naruto creation. Which is just sad if you think about it. But this prequel is very righteous. But you can't full me, this is ANOTHER twist to the original in prequel form.
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J_H, killer way things are setting up. You freaks chopped up Fuijin, one of my fave Gods, but it must be for something epic down the pike. Glad Susanoo go his as executed. But I'm confused a little, is Oro trying to go against Amatsu after his weapon is destroyed with other God help? Are ALL the Gods teamed up or is there still the plotting? And there are jinks still unprepared for the force headed their way. Hinata/Sakura still aren't fully trained to protect themselves or maybe just Sakura moreso than Hinata. And Sasuke couldn't hold his own one on one the last time, so you've got PLENTY there brotha. But damn its good to see you back posting.

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Put out an APB.
First, the next chapter will be the last. Like Vishnu's final chapter of his previous arc, it's going to be several posts, so it's going to take me some time.

Second, I wanted Fujin to be the most liked amongst the elder gods. Had I went the 50+ more chapters, I was going to explain why Naruto and Sasuke were chosen as the sons of wind and thunder, delve into the son of fire. And Fujin would have taken upon more of a mentor role in life for Naruto, seeing as to how he's always missed that.

Third, the last chapter I just posted, I wrote three times. I really didn't like the first two time how I wrote it, transitioning into the final chapter. All I'm going to say is, that even though this chapter was short, it had a lot of action. Well the final, I think you will like even better. Also, you questions about Oro, Sakura, Hinata, and Sasuke will be answered.
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First, the next chapter will be the last. Like Vishnu's final chapter of his previous arc, it's going to be several posts, so it's going to take me some time.

Second, I wanted Fujin to be the most liked amongst the elder gods. Had I went the 50+ more chapters, I was going to explain why Naruto and Sasuke were chosen as the sons of wind and thunder, delve into the son of fire. And Fujin would have taken upon more of a mentor role in life for Naruto, seeing as to how he's always missed that.

Third, the last chapter I just posted, I wrote three times. I really didn't like the first two time how I wrote it, transitioning into the final chapter. All I'm going to say is, that even though this chapter was short, it had a lot of action. Well the final, I think you will like even better. Also, you questions about Oro, Sakura, Hinata, and Sasuke will be answered.
Well alright dammit! I'm pumped but also saddened by you and Vish ending your stories. Still I'm excited to see how it unfolds.
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Well alright dammit! I'm pumped but also saddened by you and Vish ending your stories. Still I'm excited to see how it unfolds.
Well, it's about time for me. I started mine a year ago. Anyway, i'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Edit: Kiddjutsu, i'm not done yet. I have an idea for something new, completly different and with no relation to my quadrilogy or Naruto. It still has some elements from Naruto like the use of special powers relating them to handsigns, but that's all. I'm thinking if i should write it or not.
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Well, it's about time for me. I started mine a year ago. Anyway, i'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Edit: Kiddjutsu, i'm not done yet. I have an idea for something new, completly different and with no relation to my quadrilogy or Naruto. It still has some elements from Naruto like the use of special powers relating them to handsigns, but that's all. I'm thinking if i should write it or not.
You've got the credibility so by all means write that damn thing bro.
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You've got the credibility so by all means write that damn thing bro.
Well, it's bigger than anything that i wrote here. I need a lot of preparation for this one. Probably i will.
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The last chapter is up guys. Please also read my comments placed in the final post.

Chapter nine: Angels are crying...

The scene shows Vishnu and the Archangels in the Council Room. They are not in a great shape. Wounds and bruises are on each of them. The scene shows Michael, Raphael, Shiva, Vishnu, Gabriel, Brahma and Yama inside the room.

Vishnu: Brothers. We have a problem. The traitors. Their powers are above ours. We need to organize fast and strike them down.
Brahma: You are not the one to talk here, Vishnu. You are a coward who was afraid to fight the enemy!
Gabriel: And you're an idiot Brahma. The kid is far above our level. He ressurected Aphrodite. Do you understand me? He ressurected her!
Brahma: Maybe he is lying. Have you considered that?
Gabriel: It happend before my eyes. Clearly, our Father chose him to lead the assault.
Michael: And thus Brahma, because of your inability to find a solution...
Raphael: We will go with Vishnu.*
Brahma: BUT I AM YOUR LEADER!*
Yama: Not anymore.
Brahma: What are you doing here anyway?!? You are not an Archangel!
Vishnu: He is here, because he is also a part of this. You need to understand something. I left behind my fears. My doubts. My only reason to live now, is to protect the mankind. And i will do it, no matter what.
Michael: What do you want us to do?
Vishnu: Our mistake was that we confronted them as a group. If we take each one, seperate, we might have a chance at beating them. Obviously i'm going after Livontes. Now, Yama you will fight Quintrix. I won't make you fight Kubera again, because he knows you too well. Brahma and Shiva will take care of Kubera. Michael, you are going against Nirriti. Raphael you are going against Narasimha.*
Gabriel: What about me?
Vishnu: You will guard the Heavens. If they decide to strike here, with some unknown force, you will be our last resort.
Gabriel: Understood.
Vishnu: We shall prepare ourselves. In three days we are leaving for Earth!

The scene shows the Heaven. Vishnu is walking with Aphrodite.

Vishnu: Tomorrow morning we are leaving. We will confront the traitors and we will kill them.*
Aphrodite: Be careful please. Who knows what can happen...
Vishnu: Indeed. That's why you are also leaving the Heavens.
Aphrodite: What do you mean?!?
Vishnu: I cannot risk having you here. If we lose, the next place that they shall destroy is the Heaven. Because of that, you will leave with a company of angels to Earth. No Archangel will be able to come with you, but the angels that i chosed are the best.
Aphrodite: And where are we going?!?
Vishnu: They received precise intructions from me. You're going to the top of a mountain called Olympus. There, the angels will build a structure that will hold against any assault.
Aphrodite: And who is coming with me?
Vishnu: Zeus, Poseidon, Apollo, Vulcan, Hermes, Hades, Ares, Artemis, Atena and Hera.
Aphrodite: All these people just for me?
Vishnu: Exactly. All of them are there to protect you!
Aphrodite: I understand...
Suddenly Gabriel lands in front of Vishnu.
Gabriel: Vishnu...it's time. Our last council must begin.
Vishnu: Ok. I'm coming. I will see you tonight my love.*
Aphrodite: Sure. Go.
Vishnu leaves Aphrodite alone while he goes with Gabriel.
Aphrodite checks if she is alone then she says.
Aphrodite: It's safe. Come on out.
Sasuke's voice is heard, as he lands near her.
Sasuke: I know that it's safe. Now, Aphrodite...do you understand what you have to do?
Aphrodite: I understand Death. I will do as you wish. In order for Vishnu to became the man that he must be, i will do it.
Sasuke: Good. I was expecting no less from you.
Aphrodite: But tell me something! Please!
Sasuke: What?
Aphrodite: Are you certain that we will meet again?
Sasuke: Yes. You will get together again. I promise you.*

The panel shows the Heavens. A day has passed. Vishnu is with Brahma, Shiva, Raphael, Michael and Yama in front of a portal. With them are Aphrodite and Gabriel.

Vishnu: Is everyone ready?
Brahma: Yes we are.
Gabriel: Take care brothers. Return to us. Alive if you can, please.
Vishnu: We will.
The last panel shows them leaving the Heavens through the portal.

The scene shows the Earth. In a giant black fortress a gathering is held. The men are all dressed in black with red stripes in the middle of their coats. The panel shows Livontes, Kubera, Quintrix, Narasimha, Nirriti and Sasuke.*

Sasuke: Your enemies will be here soon. You will fight them. You will defeat them.
Narasimha: Why should we trust you?!? You took me and Nirriti down, back in the Heavens!
Sasuke: It is not your destiny to kill Vishnu. Got it? It's Livontes's job.*
Suddenly Kubera widens his eyes.
Kubera: They are here. On Earth. And approaching quickly.
Livontes: Who came?
Kubera: I can sense their power levels...but i'm not sure about one of them. I feel Yama, Brahma, Shiva, Michael and Raphael. And another one. I think it's Vishnu...but i'm not sure. His power level signature is different. It's more dense than before.*
Sasuke: It's Vishnu. Prepare yourselves. You will defeat them! Got it?
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The scene shows Vishnu. He is leading his team towards the fortress. Suddenly in front of them lands the renegades. Livontes. Kubera. Narasimha. Nirriti. Quintrix.

Vishnu: This is it. The final battle for the Earth. We have no choice. But to win this...let's go!
Livontes: My brothers! We shall defeat them and claim our kingdom!
Clashes are seen everywhere. Yama with Quintrix. Brahma and Shiva with Kubera. Michael and Nirriti. Raphael and Narasimha. But the most proeminent combatants are standing still and lookinng at eachother, while the Apocalypse unleashes around them. Flames, dust, pain. The air is filled with it. The scene shows each fight. They are all fighting with passion and anger. But Vishnu and Livontes are looking at eachother.

Vishnu: How did we end up here...Livontes?
Livontes: We did...because you failed to see the entire picture, Vishnu. That's why.
Vishnu: And what is the entire picture, Livontes?
Livontes: The world...is an illusion. Everything is a lie. Everything.*
Vishnu: It's not true. Our feelings are real.
Livontes: Feelings? Open your eyes Vishnu! Father made this world for nothing! He gave it to a bunch of simple minds! Minds that are not able to comprehend the reality! The time! The space! The magnitude of the Creation! They need guidance, Vishnu.
Vishnu: You mean dominion. Not guidance.
Livontes: You are a fool. There is no point in reasoning with you. You are blinded by your loyalty. You will see...one of these days...Father...will betray you.
Vishnu as he slowly takes out his sword: I don't think so...
Suddenly the wind gets stronger around them. Lightnings are seen and meteors are falling.
Vishnu activates his Raigan and stares into Livontes's eyes. They are confronting their wills.
Vishnu thinking: The end...
Both of them are clashing their wills . Lightnings are striking the ground, lava it's coming out of it, there are earthquakes, the wind is very strong and meteors are falling from the sky. Cracks are opened in the dimension. Everything is crumbling around them.The whole setup is an apocalyptic one. Both of them have a determined looks in their eyes.*
Vishnu: This is the end, Livontes.*
Livontes: Indeed...one of us will die here today!
Suddenly Vishnu creates out of nothing a lightning sword, and he activates the Raigan in his eyes.
Livontes creates a flame sword and looks at Vishnu with hatred.
They both dash towards eachother, each holding his own blade. Just as they are about to clash the panel shows each's face. Livontes has a face marked by hatred, pain and ager. Vishnu has a sad face, with tears in his eyes and pain on it.
They clash. And the clash is so powerful that it creates a huge sphere of released energy. The blast eradicates everything in it's path. Mountains are reduced to the ground. The sky goes dark. Everything loses it's life. The Earth itself gets powerfuly shaked by their clash.
The panel shows the aftermath. It shows Vishnu and Livontes face to face. Then it shows their bodies. Vishnu impaled Livontes right in the heart with his sword. But Livontes's sword also pierced Vishnu's chest.
Vishnu coughs blood and stares at Livontes.
Livontes: It's strange...you...pierced my heart...and yet...i felt nothing...there is no pain...
Vishnu: That's because i couldn't bring myself to kill you...it's a sealing technique. It doesn't hurt your body, but your soul.
Livontes: I see...so you are a coward afterall...you couldn't bring yourself to do it. To erase my existence.
Vishnu as a tear appears in the corner of his eye: That's because you're still my friend...Sealing light...forever banishment!!!
A blue energy rises from Livontes's body and hits the sky, as his lifeless body falls to the ground. Vishnu turns around and looks at his brothers. Narasimha was sealed away by Raphael. Yama defeated Quintrix. Nirriti is still holding a bit against Michael but he falls in a matter of moments.Brahma and Shiva managed to kill Kubera. Vishnu is sad. The world has became a violent place. The angels brought destruction. As he witnesses the entire picture of the world he starts crying.*

The scene shows the Earth. 4000 years have passed since the battle between the angels. The winners are still residing in Heavens. Everyone is happy. Also, God's incarnation on Earht...met his purpose. Then, the panel is slowly swithced to Earth. Most exactly into Lucifer's cave.*

A man is on the ground, in the cave. He has been tortured for 8 months. Then suddenly another man appears next to him.
Lucifer: How are you feeling today? Ready for our torture session?
Unknown man: Please...i will give you anything...anything you want...
Lucifer as he smiles: You already gave me what i wanted. Your soul is mine. And let me tell you what is going to happen. I will break it. I will break your soul. Then, i will take it and place it in a baby. Your soul, will be tained forever. Your soul will be filthy forever. And through that baby...you shall became what i always wanted. You will be my gift for the world.
Unknown man: Why?!? Why would you want to do something like that?!? Why do you have to torment a baby?!? A child!
Lucifer laughs: Because through that baby's body...with his inheritance...you will gain access to powers beyond your imagination. Powers that will allow the world to meet it's end.*
Unknown man shocked: What baby?!?
Lucifer: The woman, the mother...is pregnant in 8 months now. She will deliver him soon. And before he will leave her womb, your evil soul will replace his pure one. You will have no memory of our meeting. But you will be under my command.
Unknown man: Someone will stop you! The father or someone! You must be stoped!
Lucifer: To think that you're so naive. The father is already gone. You sold him. Mary's husband was crucified because of you...Judas!
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The panel shows Sasuke. He is waiting in the Creator's white dimension. The Creator appears as an old man before him.

Sasuke: Finally...my time here has comed to an end. I shall return to my timeline soon. First i have one last meeting with Vishnu.
Father: Good. You did the right thing Death.
Sasuke: Yeah...i know. I put Vishnu on the right path...i manipulated Judas with my Tsukuyomi to betray your son...thus i had an indirect implication in His birth...i did what had to be done.
Father: The events will happen as *it should now.
Sasuke: Exactly. There will be no further problems. The future is safe.
Suddenly another figure appears next to them.
Sasuke: Hello Lucifer.
Lucifer: I did as i was asked. I tained Judas soul. Forever. He will be place inside Jesus's child. He will grow to be the biggest menace of the mankind ever known.*
Sasuke: Well done.
Lucifer: What name should i give him?
Sasuke: Call him...Raiden!

The scene shows Vishnu. He is looking at the thousands of angels that are working. To build a City. He received orders from Father to build a city and guard the time and the Earth. Everyone is with him. But suddenly a man lands near him.

Vishnu turns around and spots Sasuke.
Vishnu: You!
Sasuke: Hi Vishnu. Haven't seen you in the past 4000 years.
Vishnu: I thought you were dead.
Sasuke: You cannot kill the Death, Vishnu boy. Now...we must have a chat.
Vishnu: What sort of chat?
Sasuke: I told you one day...that i will reveal everything to you.
Vishnu: You did.
Sasuke: That day will come. In the future. At the end of days.Belive it or not, you are going to be my greatest allied in the future.*
Vishnu: I don't think so.
Sasuke: You need to understand this. What i did...it had to be done. In order for peace to arise.
Vishnu with a tired voice: What do you want from me Sasuke?
Sasuke smiles as the Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan glows.
Sasuke: Look into my eyes...
As Sasuke's eye pattern starts spinning, slowly Vishnu starts forgeting memories. And replace some of them. A new history is forged in his mind. A history where he was never an angel. A history where he was sent to Earth with Livontes. A history of pain and suffering. A history where he was born to be the new leader. A history where he forgot everything he knew about the Heavens. But one person remaind in his mind, and she was beyond forgetting. So Sasuke did something else. Aphrodite...died...Vishnu now remembered that she was killed. Not that she is alive.*

The panel shows Vishnu. A year has passed since his last meeting with Sasuke Uchiha. The Celest City was completly built. As he is going to the highest spot in his tower he recollects the events that made him the man that he is today. He doesn't remember anything about his encounter with Uchiha Sasuke. He will come to meet him soon enough. Vishnu remembers the atrocities commited by the man kind. He remembers how low the man has fallen. He looks up and whispers: Creator...
Nobody in the City remembers the time spent in Heavens. The Creator erased all their memories. Until the moment of truth will come again.*

As he gets to the top of the tower he looks down. The citizens of the Celest City. A million men and women. And he is their leader. Yama appears next to him.

Yama: Lord Vishnu. It's time to keep your speech. They are waiting for their king.
Vishnu as he smiles with sadness: I'm no king Yama.
Vishnu looks at the people waiting for him to say something. He smiles.
Vishnu: Brothers! We have built this City. This City of our own! Through our sweat and blood we created our refuge. Our fortress. Now...some of you called me King. Or Emperor.
I'm sorry but I don't want to be an Emperor, that's not my business. I don't want to rule or conquer anyone. I should like to help everyone if possible, Gods,humans,demons. We all want to help one another, human beings are like that. We all want to live by each other's happiness, not by each other's misery. We don't want to hate and despise one another. In this world there is room for everyone and the earth is rich and can provide for everyone.
The way of life can be free and beautiful. But we have lost the way.

Greed has poisoned gods's souls, has barricaded the world with hate;
has goose-stepped us into misery and bloodshed.

We have developed speed but we have shut ourselves in:
machinery that gives abundance has left us in want.
Our knowledge has made us cynical,
our cleverness hard and unkind.
We think too much and feel too little:
More than machinery we need humanity;
More than cleverness we need kindness and gentleness.

Without these qualities, life will be violent and all will be lost.

The misery that is now upon us is but the passing of greed, the bitterness of men who fear the way of human progress: the hate of men will pass and dictators die and the power they took from the people, will return to the people and so long as men die, liberty will never perish. . .

Gods: don't give yourselves to brutes, men who despise you and enslave you, who regiment your lives, tell you what to do, what to think and what to feel, who drill you, diet you, treat you as cattle, as cannon fodder.

Don't give yourselves to these unnatural men, machine men, with machine minds and machine hearts. You are not machines. You are not cattle. You are men. You have the love of humanity in your hearts. You don't hate, only the unloved hate. Only the unloved and the unnatural. Gods: don't fight for slavery, fight for liberty.

You the people have the power, the power to create machines, the power to create happiness. You the people have the power to make life free and beautiful, to make this life a wonderful adventure. Then in the name of the Creator let's use that power, let us all unite. Let us fight for a new world, a decent world that will give men a chance to live that will give you the future and love and happines. By the promise of these things, brutes have risen to power, but they lie. They do not fulfil their promise, they never will. Renegades free themselves but they enslave the people. Now let us fight to fulfil that promise. Let us fight to free the world, to do away with *barriers, do away with greed, with hate and intolerance. Let us fight for a world of reason, a world where love and kindness will lead to all men's happiness.

Gods! In the name of our Creator: let us all unite! And we shall call ourselves Beyonders and this is the dawn of a new era! An era of peace!!!
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The scene it's switched. It shows Sasuke standing in front of the Creator with his sword in his hand. He has returned to the original timeline.

The Creator: And that is the story behind everything Sasuke. That's how the world was made...and that's how you influenced it. I've made a lot of mistakes my son. As i said...the human was created after me. So i'm commited to making mistakes too. Now...today...i shall pay for them. My time has comed, Uchiha Sasuke. The question is...are you ready to fulfill your destiny? And release me from the chains that kept me prisoner in my own creation? Can you forgive me?
Sasuke as a tear rolls down on his cheek: Ego...te absolvo...
The last panel shows Sasuke as he swings his blade towards the Creator.

The scene shows Vishnu. He is sitting in the Gardens with Aphrodite. Suddenly Sasuke appears next to him.

Vishnu looks at Sasuke and understands what judt happend.
Vishnu: Aphrodite. I have something to talk with Sasuke. I'm sorry.
She smiles and kisses him.
Aphrodite: No problem my love.
Vishnu starts walking around the gardens with Sasuke.
Sasuke: Seventh Seraphim. You must make a choice.
Vishnu: So you did it eh, Sasuke?
Sasuke: The Creator has met his peace. We must prepare his inheritor.
Vishnu: Everything is already done. He is ready.
Sasuke: Good. Now...Vishnu...i have something to confess to you. Since this is the real end of our story...you must know the truth. What happend, and how we got here.
Vishnu: What do you mean?
Sasuke places two fingers on Vishnu's forehead.
Sasuke: Spiralling Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Demonic powers! Memory release!
Suddenly Vishnu's eyes glow yellow as everything comes back to him. His old, forgetten memories return to him and blend with the new ones. In a matter of moments he understands everything.
Vishnu as he looks shocked at Sasuke: Sasuke?!? Did you...?!?
Sasuke with a sad voice: It had to be done. I'm sorry.
Vishnu: I see now. I understand everything. And you're right. It had to be done. I...was such a fool...
Sasuke: I'm sorry Vishnu...for everything...
Vishnu smiles: Don't be. It's just as you said...in the end...everything will be fine! Now...we have a job to do!

The scene shows Sasuke and Vishnu entering a bright room. The light is filling it. On the floor, a blond man is sitting with his back turned at them.

Sasuke: It's time...
Vishnu: To became the one that your were always meant to be.
The panel shows the man's face. He regained his youth since he died and came to Heavens. His eyes are closed.
Vishnu: Are you ready?
His eyes suddenly open...and the Rinnegan pattern is seen.
Uzumaki Naruto as he turns and looks at them with determination: God of Death...Seventh Seraphim...i was born ready!!!

The end of the quadrilogy.

First story: The Beginning of the End.
Second story: The Next Generation.
Third story: The Infinite Illusion.
Fourth story: The Seventh Seraphim.
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So guys, the adventure has finally reached it's complete end. I created a whole new universe for you to explore, in which i revealed a completly different story than the current Naruto. I started with the current manga timeline, and i advanced into the future. This last part was focused on the past. And now, at the end of everything, every character has finally met his destiny. With this occassion, i want to give special thanks to those who had read my entire creation and supported me in the past year and a half since i started this. So...thank you:

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You were all wonderful guys, and several times when i lacked inspiration or felt that something wasn't working, you provided me with great advices. I'm aware that my story had many plotholes, and sometimes it didn't work so well, but i tried to do my best in the short time that i had available considering the major exams that i had to take this year. Also thank you all for being understanding with the breaks that i had to take between chapters, because of my exams.I hope that you enjoyed it, and i appreciated all the critics that you have made, because those critics really helped me improve myself. Thanks everyone again, for being such awesome readers!!!
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Dammit vishnu...
I was going to have a soliloquy about idealism in my last chapter.

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I was going to have a soliloquy about idealism in my last chapter.

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Sorry man. Already took it. Thank you for the support all this time!
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I was going to have a soliloquy about idealism in my last chapter.

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Exactly J_H! Just like Vish to take all the air in the room! Lol
Dude, you set the standard in this forum as far as I'm concerned and also caused everybody else to step their game up. Selfishly I'm pissed to not look fwd to your stuff man but dammit you are the man for how you did you thing with this story. I've never read any criticisms, only suggestions because people wanted to continue reading your stuff. I sincerely hope you delve into another Naruto based story but regardless you have all my respect bro.

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Exactly J_H! Just like Vish to take all the air in the room! Lol
Dude, you set the standard in this forum as far as I'm concerned and also caused everybody else to step their game up. Selfishly I'm pissed to not look fwd to your stuff man but dammit you are the man for how you did you thing with this story. I've never read any criticisms, only suggestions because people wanted to continue reading your stuff. I sincerely hope you delve into another Naruto based story but regardless you have all my respect bro.

J_H/Jericho/N360 - you're up to bat fellas.
Thank you for the kind words Kiddjutsu. I always held your opinion highly. And about setting the bar high, i'm not so sure. Jekyl, Jericho, Narut0360 are also amazing writers. I just like to think that i started this, because i was the first one to revive this thread. And i'm very happy that others found time and energy to make their own creations that surpass mine.
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