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Old 02-11-2007, 02:08 AM   #1
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Re: The longest thread ever! v7

I've been thinking about doing this for a while now, and since I want to get characters right and take critism yada yada....and yes, i do realize my grammar and spelling suck ass. It's so bad my computer over heats just trying to correct it. *shakes head* either way, from now on, post all comments about the NLA in here please and I'll also give you updates about the upcoming manga/ideas for the story as well in here. All comments made about the story will be moved into here just so ya know lol.

Like this weekend is going to be really tight for me since I'll be going away for the weekend, but I'll have chapter 7 up and ready by tomorrow night, hopefully around 8 o'clock eastern time. Maybe if I get everything I need done tomorrow I might post double chapters since I've been and will be for the next few days. *looks back* man, i really did leave you guys on a cliff hanger. Well See you all tomorrow night around 8ish ^^ *waves* thanks for reading NLA, and I hope to keep getting your support.
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Old 02-15-2007, 08:44 PM   #2
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Re: NL the Anime

sounds good to me. yeah cant wait to see the adventures of all of us
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Old 02-15-2007, 08:45 PM   #3
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Sounds interesting enough. I'm looking forward to it. ^_^
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Old 02-15-2007, 08:51 PM   #4
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Re: NL the Anime

Sweet. I promise to read every part of it all as it unfolds.
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Old 02-15-2007, 10:04 PM   #5
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Re: NL the Anime

This should make for one very interesting fanfic, I'll enjoy reading and seeing my character of course.
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Old 02-15-2007, 10:43 PM   #6
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Yea. It sounds like it is going to be a good story to me.
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Old 02-15-2007, 10:52 PM   #7
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intruiging..... i'll watch out for it
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Old 02-15-2007, 11:17 PM   #8
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Re: NL the Anime

Great ideal!!! I never would I thought of doing this lol... I'll be sure to read it... Good Luck with it!
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Old 02-16-2007, 12:00 AM   #9
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Re: NL the Anime

I must say that was one impressive peace of work there Lily and that was just chapter 1 lol, though I did see the first half before the rest, sneak peak FTW.

Well the story certainly held my interest form start t finish and thats rare for me lol, good imagery throughout the whole story and I liked your word choice, keep it up I cant wait for more! =]
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Old 02-16-2007, 12:06 AM   #10
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Well, I already told you this, but you have quite a few grammar issues, using the wrong synonym (know instead of no, etc.), but other than that it's good so far. Lookin' forward to the rest.
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Re: NL the Anime

Intrestin read lily =P was good
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Old 02-16-2007, 08:10 AM   #12
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wow... thats what i call "your own version of Alice in Wonderland" kind of story except its rated 15 lol..... its really good and fun to read.... keep it up! i'll be tuning in for more
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Re: NL the Anime

Great story. A couple of grammar errors. A very addicting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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nice chapter.... after seeing naruto shipuuden eps 1 and reading this afterwards its like i saw the 3d image of what u wrote.... great chapter lily!
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Old 02-17-2007, 07:01 PM   #15
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Hurry up, damn it! D:

The story is actually really good. I didn't know you were such a good writer, Lily. Other than a few grammatical and spelling errors, it's really quite a good story. Hurry up with the updates, ya know?! D<
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